公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is too short and does not address the question. Give a clear topic sentence about whether you liked parks as a child and add 1–2 specific supporting details (activities, frequency, feelings). Use a linking word if you add a reason or example.

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my parents to play on the swings and have picnics, which made me feel happy and energetic.

建議: The response is incomplete. State clearly if you still like parks now, then give a reason and one specific example (how often you go or what you do there). Use a linking word like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise; for example, I walk in the park three times a week to relax and stay fit.

建議: Answer the question directly and support it with reasons and a specific benefit of having more parks (environmental, social, health). Use linking words such as "because" or "therefore."

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for families to meet; therefore, adding parks would make the city healthier and more pleasant.

建議: Provide a clear yes/no and name or describe a park you want to visit, then explain why and when you might go. Include a linking phrase like "for example" or "because" to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I want to visit the new riverside park next summer because it has cycling paths and a botanical garden; for example, I plan to go there with friends for a bike ride and a picnic.

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I did. I used to go to parks a lot when I was a child.

The student's reply 'I don't know' does not answer the examiner's past-tense question 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' This is a sentence structure / tense-response mismatch rather than a simple verb form error. Provide a past-tense answer that matches the question: use past simple 'did' and past time expression 'used to' or 'when I was a child.' Suggestion: respond with a clear past-tense statement (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'I used to go to parks a lot when I was a child').

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I do. I still enjoy going to parks now.

The examiner asked a present-tense question 'Do you still like going to parks now?' The student's 'I don't know' fails to provide a present-tense answer. Use present simple 'I do' or 'I still enjoy' to match the question's tense and meaning. Suggestion: answer directly with a present-tense statement (e.g., 'Yes, I do' or 'I still enjoy going to parks').

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I would. I would like to see more parks in my city.

The question 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' uses the conditional/modal 'would.' The student's 'I don't know' doesn't respond appropriately. Use 'I would' or 'Yes, I would like that' to match the modal form. Suggestion: answer directly to the modal question (e.g., 'Yes, I would' or 'I would like to see more parks in my city').

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I do. I want to visit some new parks next year.

The question 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' asks about present desire for future action. 'I don't know' is uninformative. Provide a present-tense statement about future intent using 'I want' or a future construction ('I plan to visit...'). Suggestion: answer with a clear statement of desire or plan (e.g., 'Yes, I do. I want to visit some new parks next year').