公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, phát âm và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Tránh câu thiếu chủ ngữ/động từ chia sai (ví dụ: “I like go” → “I liked going” hoặc “I used to go”), và thay thế từ không phù hợp (“in the till” không rõ nghĩa). Thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn (ví dụ nơi, hoạt động).

範例: Yes, I did. I used to go to the park near my house almost every weekend, where I would play on the swings and feed the ducks.

建議: Cần dùng cấu trúc hiện tại phù hợp và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp/mệnh đề (ví dụ: “I don't like going … because I have many subjects” → “I don't often go to parks because I have a heavy study load”). Tránh câu dài lủng củng; dùng liên từ phù hợp và diễn đạt lí do rõ ràng. Nên thay “it's can be have me relaxing” bằng cụm đúng ngữ pháp “it helps me relax”.

範例: I don't often go to parks these days because I have a heavy study load, but I enjoy visiting markets after school because they help me relax and I like browsing food stalls.

建議: Câu gần như không hiểu được do nhiều lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc. Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích với lý do cụ thể. Sửa từ sai (“could lie”, “pucks”) và viết rõ ràng mục đích của công viên (ví dụ: exercise, relax, meet friends).

範例: Yes, I would. More parks would give people places to exercise, relax, and meet friends after school or work.

建議: Câu trả lời rất ngắn và không rõ ràng; cần nêu tên công viên hoặc miêu tả công viên đó và lý do bạn muốn đến. Sửa cấu trúc câu (ví dụ: “I want to Park is very famous” → “Yes. I want to visit [name], which is very famous because…”). Thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể để mở rộng câu.

範例: Yes. I would like to visit Central Park in New York because it is famous for its lakes and walking paths, and I have heard it is beautiful in autumn.

× Yes I did. I like go to the park in the till.

✓ Yes, I did. I liked going to the park then.

The student mixed past and present tenses. The question asks about childhood (past), so use past tense 'liked' and the gerund 'going'. 'In the till' is incorrect phrase; replace with 'then' to mean at that time. Use a comma after 'Yes'. Suggestions: use past simple for past habits (I liked), use verb+ing after verbs like 'like' when referring to activities (liked going), and use correct time adverbials ('then').

× I don't like going to the park because I have many subjects, but I like go to the markets very much because it's can be have me relaxing after school.

✓ I don't like going to the park because I have many subjects, but I like going to the markets very much because they can help me relax after school.

Errors: mixed verb forms and incorrect modal/auxiliary use. After 'like' use gerund 'going'. 'It's can be have me relaxing' is ungrammatical; use 'they can help me relax'. 'Markets' is plural so use 'they'. Suggestions: use gerunds after 'like' for activities, use correct modal + base verb structure ('can help'), and ensure pronoun agrees with plural nouns ('they').

× Yes, I could lie because the pucks have me go to the after school.

✓ Yes, I would like that because the parks help me go there after school.

Original sentence has wrong modal/verb choices and misspellings. 'Could lie' should be 'would like' to express desire. 'Pucks' should be 'parks'. 'Have me go to the after school' is incorrect; use 'help me go there after school' or 'let me go there after school'. Suggestions: use 'would like' to express preference, check spelling, and use verbs that express purpose or ability with correct objects ('help me go there after school').

× Yes there are. I want to Park is very famous.

✓ Yes, there are. I want to go to a park that is very famous.

Errors include missing verb and article usage. 'I want to Park is very famous' lacks linking structure; use 'I want to go to a park that is very famous'. Also add the article 'a' before 'park'. Suggestions: use correct sentence structure for desires ('I want to go to...'), include relative clause 'that is' to describe the park, and use articles with countable nouns ('a park').