公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and clear. Begin with a direct topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details (what you did, with a brief reason), and avoid long pauses or unclear words. Use linking words (for example, "I liked going to parks because... and also...") and correct vocabulary ("played" instead of "prayed"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played soccer there with my friends because it was a big open space, and we spent hours running and chatting afterwards.

建議: Give a concise direct answer, then explain briefly with a clear reason and linking word. Avoid repetition, filler words, and grammar mistakes. Use correct sentence structure: "I don't go to parks now because..." and provide one specific detail about work or schedule.

範例: Not really. I rarely go to parks now because my job keeps me busy most evenings, so I usually exercise at home or go to the gym on weekends.

建議: Answer directly and give a clear reason with specific details. Avoid confusing phrasing and unnecessary repetition. Use linking words such as "because" or "since", and correct past/ present verbs. Say whether you would like more parks and explain why with one example (e.g., for recreation or fresh air).

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are few green spaces now, and more parks would give residents places to relax, exercise, and take children outside.

建議: Provide a short direct answer then expand slightly. Even if you don't have a specific park in mind, explain why with a reason or a preference. Use one or two supporting details and a linking word to make the response natural and informative.

範例: Not at the moment, but I would like to visit a large city park or botanical garden in the future because I enjoy calm nature walks and taking photos of plants.

× I like going to parks.

✓ I liked going to parks.

The examiner asked about childhood (past). The student originally answered 'I like' (present). Use past tense 'liked' to match time reference. Suggestion: align verb tense with the time phrase (as a child -> liked).

× So I prayed soccer in the park and.

✓ So I played soccer in the park.

The student wrote 'prayed' (past participle of 'pray'), which is incorrect for the intended action. The correct verb is 'play' in past tense 'played'. Suggestion: use the verb that matches meaning and past tense for childhood activities.

× I don't go to the park now.

✓ I don't go to the park now.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable for present habitual action. No correction needed. (Included here to confirm tense alignment with 'now'.)

× So because my, my work is very busy.

✓ Because my work is very busy, I don't have time to go to the park.

Original is a fragment and redundant ('So because' and repeated 'my'). Also it does not complete the idea. Suggestion: combine cause and effect into a full sentence and avoid redundant words.

× I have many things what I do.

✓ I have many things that I have to do.

Using 'what' is incorrect in this relative clause. Use 'that' or 'which', and include 'have to' to express obligation. Suggestion: use correct relative pronoun and verb to clarify meaning.

× Yeah, I drive to, uh, I drive to see more parks in my city because the city when I leaped, uh, it's very few parks.

✓ Yes, I hope to see more parks in my city because when I left my hometown there were very few parks here.

Original mixes 'drive to' repeatedly and contains 'when I leaped' (incorrect verb) and awkward order. 'Leaped' is wrong; likely intended 'left' or 'moved here'. Also 'it's very few parks' is ungrammatical; use 'there were very few parks' or 'there are very few parks'. Suggestion: use clear verbs for movement (left/moved), correct existential construction ('there are/were'), and avoid repetition.

× No.

✓ No, I don't want to go to any parks in the future.

Single-word reply 'No' is acceptable in speech but as a full sentence it lacks a verb and context. To be grammatically complete, expand to a full sentence that matches the question about future intention. Suggestion: provide a full clause when asked in a test.