公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你没有真正回答问题，只是重复了考官的话。要直接陈述观点（是或否），然后给出一两个具体细节支持，比如什么时候去、和谁一起或喜欢做什么。注意不要超过五句话。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often went to the park with my parents and younger sister to play on the swings and have picnics, which I always enjoyed because it was a chance to run around and meet other children.

建議: 你再次只是重复问题，没有回答。应直接回答并补充原因或频率等具体信息，使用连接词使表达连贯。控制在五句以内。

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially on weekends, because they offer a peaceful place to exercise and relax; for example, I often jog there and read on a bench afterward.

建議: 仍然没有实际回答。需要给出明确立场（希望或不希望），并说明原因，例如对环境、健康或社区活动的益处，最好用一两个具体例子支持。

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe spaces for families; for instance, adding small neighborhood parks would allow children to play nearby without traveling far.

建議: 你没有给出答案，只是重复或有轻微语序错误。应直接说出想去的公园并说明原因或计划时间，提供具体细节使回答更有说服力。

範例: Yes, I'd like to visit the botanical garden next month because it has rare plants and photo-friendly landscapes, and I've heard they host interesting weekend workshops.

× Are there any parks in you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

此句中多了介词“in”，造成介词重复或结构错误。正确结构是“Are there any parks you want to go to...?” 或更正式的“Are there any parks that you want to go to...?”。改正建议：删除多余的“in”，如果想加从句指明关系，可以使用关系代词“that/which”放在“parks”之后，即“Are there any parks that you want to go to in the future?”。