公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear direct answer (topic sentence), then one or two brief supporting details. Use correct grammar (singular/plural: 'parks').

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family, which helped me make friends and created happy memories.

建議: Again you repeated the question rather than answering. Provide a direct yes/no, then add specific supporting detail and a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. For instance, I usually go for a walk or jog there a few times a week to relax and stay fit.

建議: Do not echo the question—answer it directly and explain why or why not with a specific reason. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and offer places for families to spend time outdoors. For example, a new park near my neighborhood would encourage people to exercise and socialize.

建議: You both repeated the question and made a small pronunciation/spelling error ('parts' instead of 'parks'). Answer directly, correct the word, and add a specific park name or type with a reason and brief detail.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the large botanical park in the city next year because it has rare plants and beautiful walking trails. I plan to go there in spring when the flowers are in bloom so I can take photos and relax.

× Did you like going to park as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The noun 'park' is countable and when speaking in general about visiting parks you need the plural 'parks' or the article 'the park' for a specific park. The examiner used 'parks' (general), so match that form. Suggestion: use plural for general habits: 'going to parks'.

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present simple appropriately to ask about a current habit or preference. No change needed.

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Would you like' appropriately asks about a preference or desire; 'more parks' and the rest of the sentence are correct. No change needed.

× Are there any parts you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The student wrote 'parts' which is likely a typo for 'parks'. 'Parts' changes the meaning and is incorrect in this context. Replace with 'parks' to match the examiner's intent. The sentence otherwise correctly uses 'Are there any ... you want to go to in the future?' for asking about possible future visits.