公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is missing. Provide a clear topic sentence stating whether you liked parks as a child, then add one or two brief supporting details (specific memories, activities, or reasons). Keep it natural and under five sentences. Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were a place to run and play freely. For example, I often spent afternoons playing hide-and-seek with neighborhood friends and climbing trees, which made those days very memorable.

建議: Your answer is missing. State directly if you still like parks now, then give a reason and a brief supporting detail. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect ideas, and be specific about what you enjoy (exercise, relaxation, meeting friends).

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For instance, I usually go jogging there in the mornings and sometimes meet friends for a picnic.

建議: Your answer is missing. Give a clear opinion about wanting more parks, then support it with a reason and a specific benefit (e.g., better air quality, more recreation spaces). Keep it coherent using linking words like “because” or “so that.”

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play. More parks would also encourage people to spend time outdoors and improve community health.

建議: Your answer is too short and not structured. Start with a topic sentence naming a park or type of park you want to visit, then explain why and give a specific detail (what you would do there or what attracts you). Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

範例: Yes, I’d like to visit the new riverside park near the city center because it has a large playground with modern swings and a scenic walking path. For example, I’d love to try the swings and then walk along the river to enjoy the view.

× Swings.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit parks with swings in the future.

The original single-word reply 'Swings.' is a sentence fragment and lacks a verb and clear structure, so it does not form a complete response to the question 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?'. This is a Sentence structure error (ID 26). Correction adds a subject and verb to create a complete sentence that directly answers the question and fits the future intent. Suggestion: always include a subject and verb when answering; for brief responses, use short full sentences like 'Yes, I would like to visit parks with swings' or 'I want to go to parks that have swings.'