公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: The student's reply is unintelligible and does not answer the question. Give a direct, short response (1–2 sentences) stating whether you liked parks as a child, then add one specific supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and simple vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family every Sunday.

建議: The answer is unclear and contains mistakes (wrong words and tense). Start with a clear topic sentence about whether you still enjoy parks, then add a specific reason or activity you do there. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax. For instance, I usually go for a jog or read a book under a tree on weekends.

建議: This repeats the examiner’s question rather than answering. Respond directly (yes/no) and give a specific reason or example. Use a linking word such as 'because' to make your answer coherent. Keep it concise and grammatically correct.

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we need green spaces for children and elderly people to relax. For example, a small park with benches and a playground would be helpful in my neighborhood.

建議: The student’s reply is confused and doesn’t answer. Answer directly with a clear statement about a park you want to visit in the future, and give one specific reason or detail (when or why). Use correct future expression (will/want to/plan to).

範例: Yes, I plan to visit the national botanical garden next year because it has rare plants and beautiful walking paths. I want to go in spring when the flowers are in bloom.

× Did you buy go into park as a child?

✓ Did you go to parks as a child?

The original sentence mixes auxiliary 'did' with incorrect extra verbs and word order ('buy go into park'). The correct simple past question uses 'Did' + base verb 'go' and the noun 'parks' with appropriate article/number. Use 'go to parks' or singular 'go to the park' depending on meaning. Suggestion: remove extraneous verbs and place 'go' directly after 'Did'.

× Did you still like going to Pie now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The question asks about present habit, so use present simple 'Do you...?' not past 'Did you...?'. 'Pie' appears to be a mistranscription of 'parks'; replace with 'parks'. Ensure verb agreement with 'you' uses base verb 'like'.

× Would you like to see more park in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

The phrase 'more park' is incorrect because 'more' modifies a countable noun in plural form; use 'parks'. The modal structure 'Would you like to see' is correct. Use plural for countable nouns when indicating an increase in number.

× Are there any plan you went to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any plans you want to go to in the future?

Multiple errors: 'plan' should be plural 'plans' after 'any'; 'went' is past tense but the question asks about future intentions, so use 'want' (present) to express future intention; also 'to go to' is redundant with 'plans'—keep 'plans you want to go to' or better 'places you want to visit'. Correct structure: 'Are there any plans you want to go to in the future?' or 'Are there any parks you want to visit in the future?'.