公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接并且更流畅，避免重复和语法错误。开头用一句主题句回答问题，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，例如说明常去的活动、频率或与谁一起。注意动词时态一致与句子结构简单清晰。可以练习把长句拆成短句，去掉多余的填词（如“I think that”或重复的词）。

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I spent a lot of my free time there playing games and running around with my friends, usually almost every weekend. Those visits were fun and helped me make lasting memories.

建議: 回答时注意时态一致（现在时谈现在），避免重复和未完成的句子。先直接回答，然后说明原因并给出具体感受或例子。使用连接词（such as, because, so）让句子更连贯。也要完整表达“a sense of ...”后面的内容。

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks when I have free time. Because of study and work pressure, I often feel tired, so walking in a park helps me relax and clears my mind.

建議: 回答要更有条理并使用更准确的词汇。先给出直接回答，再用一到两条具体理由支持（例如改善空气、提供休闲空间、促进健康）。注意词汇搭配（improve air quality, feel close to nature, relieve stress）和单复数一致。

範例: Yes, I would. More parks would improve the city’s air quality and give residents easy access to green spaces, which helps reduce stress and encourages outdoor activities.

建議: 回答时把想法表达得更具体，说明想去哪些国家或类型的公园，以及为什么（例如文化体验、景观、历史）。避免重复词（重复的“a”以及“in in”）。用一到两句具体例子丰富内容。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit parks in other countries, such as Japan’s traditional gardens or New Zealand’s national parks, because they offer different landscapes and cultural experiences that would broaden my horizons.

× Yes, I think that I'd like to go to park.

✓ Yes, I think that I liked going to parks.

原句时态和表达不一致。面试官问过去是否喜欢去公园，应使用过去时或过去习惯表达；另外“go to park”缺少冠词或复数。建议用过去习惯的表达“liked going to parks”。（简体中文）

× I would like to go to parks as a child when I was young, for I was I have a lot of leisure time and I don't have things to do.

✓ I used to go to parks as a child because I had a lot of leisure time and didn't have many things to do.

原句混用了条件语态和现在时，且存在重复和时态错误。描述过去习惯应使用“used to”或过去时；“have a lot of leisure time”应改为过去时“had”；否定句也用过去时“didn't have”。（简体中文）

× As a result, I often go to parks with my friends to play.

✓ As a result, I often went to parks with my friends to play.

这里是在讲过去的经历，应使用过去时“went”而不是现在时“go”。（简体中文）

× Yes, I suggest that I still like to go into park when I was free because of the increased living life pressure and study burden.

✓ Yes, I still like to go to parks when I am free because of increased life pressure and study burden.

句子有时态和介词问题。回答现在是否仍喜欢，应使用现在时“still like”且“go to parks”使用复数或加冠词；“when I was free”应为“when I am free”。“living life pressure”表达冗余，改为“life pressure”。（简体中文）

× I I usually feel feel tired when I when I finished my completed my complete my work.

✓ I usually feel tired when I have finished my work.

原句有大量重复且时态不一致。描述完成工作后的感受常用现在完成时“have finished”或一般现在完成时，随后用现在时“feel tired”。应去掉重复词并统一时态。（简体中文）

× However, going to a park can give me a sense of.

✓ However, going to a park can give me a sense of relaxation.

原句不完整，缺少宾语。需要补全名词短语来表达“给我一种...的感觉”，如“a sense of relaxation”或“a sense of calm”。（简体中文）

× Yes, and I definitely want to see more parks for parks can improve the air condition.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to see more parks because parks can improve air quality.

“for”在口语可用但正式度低，可改为“because”；“air condition”不地道，应为“air quality”。（简体中文）

× Moreover, it gives us a sense of a close to a sense of nature, which relieve our living pressure.

✓ Moreover, it gives us a sense of closeness to nature, which relieves our life pressure.

原句冗余且搭配错误。“a sense of a close to a sense of nature”需要改为“a sense of closeness to nature”；关系从句主语单数，动词应为“relieves”；“living pressure”改为更自然的“life pressure”。（简体中文）

× Yes, I want to go to some parks in in other countries which can give me a a a look of different culture and broaden my horizon.

✓ Yes, I want to go to some parks in other countries which can give me a glimpse of different cultures and broaden my horizons.

存在重复词和冠词错误。“in in”与“a a a”应删除；“a look of different culture”不自然，改为“a glimpse of different cultures”；“horizon”通常用复数“horizons”。（简体中文）