公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer repeats a question instead of responding. For Part 1 you must answer directly with a short, natural statement (1–3 sentences) and then add a specific supporting detail. Use a topic sentence that states whether you liked parks as a child, then give one concrete example or reason. Keep it concise and avoid turning the reply into another question.

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I used to play on the swings and have picnics with my family every Sunday, which made those days special.

建議: Again, you repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Provide a direct, natural response (agree/disagree) and one specific supporting detail using a linking phrase (e.g., "because" or "because of this"). Keep to under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For instance, I often jog there in the mornings and sit by the lake to read on weekends.

建議: You must give a clear opinion rather than repeating the question. Start with a topic sentence (Yes/No) and provide a reason and a specific example or suggestion to expand the answer. Use linking words like "because", "for example" or "so" to make it coherent.

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and mental health. For example, adding small community parks near apartment blocks would give residents easy places to exercise or relax.

建議: Your reply is again a repetition of the examiner's question and contains a grammar error. Respond with a clear statement about a specific park you'd like to visit, and include a reason or detail about what you plan to do there. Use one linking word and be specific to demonstrate content knowledge.

範例: Yes — I would love to visit the Royal Botanic Garden next year because it has rare plant collections and peaceful walking paths. I hope to take photos of the flowers and join a guided tour to learn more about the plants.

× Do you like going to park at the Shields?

✓ Do you like going to the park at the Shields?

The student omitted the definite article 'the' before the singular noun 'park'. In English, when referring to a specific park (the one at the Shields), use 'the park'. Suggestion: use 'the' with specific singular countable nouns (e.g., 'the park').

× Do you still like going to park now?

✓ Do you still like going to the park now?

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'park'. When referring to a particular park or parks in general in this context, use 'the park' for a specific place. Suggestion: add 'the' when talking about a specific location (e.g., 'the park').

× Are there any parks do you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

This sentence has an extra auxiliary 'do' that is not needed after 'Are there any parks'. The correct structure for a question with 'Are there any...' followed by a relative clause is to omit 'do'. Also the article use is fine ('parks' plural). Suggestion: remove the unnecessary 'do' to form a grammatically correct question.