公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, natural response (one topic sentence) and then one or two brief supporting details. Use linking words like "because" or "and" to add clarity. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had wide playgrounds and lots of trees to climb. I often went there with my family on weekends, and we would have picnics and play games.

建議: Again you repeated the question rather than answering. State your current preference directly, then add a specific reason or example using a linking word such as "because", "so", or "for example". Stay concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For example, I usually walk or jog there in the mornings to clear my mind.

建議: Your answer gives a clear opinion but has grammar and specificity issues. Say it more naturally and add a reason with specific details using a linking word (e.g., "because"). Also correct plurality and article use.

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green spaces for families and for people to exercise. For instance, new small parks near apartment areas would make outdoor activities more accessible.

建議: This reply is too short and vague. Name a specific park or type of park and explain why you want to visit it, using linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting detail.

範例: Yes, I want to visit the new riverside park that will open next month because it will have cycling paths and art installations. I think it would be a pleasant place to spend an afternoon with friends.

× Yeah, I want to see many more park.

✓ Yeah, I want to see many more parks.

The noun 'park' is countable and should be plural when used with 'many' and 'more' to indicate an increased number. Use 'parks' not 'park'. Suggestion: use 'parks' after quantifiers like 'many', 'few', 'several' or 'more'.