公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Give a direct, concise response that addresses the question, then add one specific supporting detail. Keep to 1–3 sentences, use correct grammar and simple linking words if needed.

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to go there with my family every weekend to play games and have picnics, which I remember very fondly.

建議: Your response is understandable but has grammar and word-choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and a specific supporting detail. Use a linking word if you add reasons.

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I often go with a friend to get some fresh air and relax after work.

建議: The answer is mostly incomprehensible. Give a direct opinion (yes/no or a degree) and one clear reason or example. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation, especially in crowded neighborhoods.

建議: Your reply is vague and ungrammatical. State a specific park or type of park you want to visit and say what you would do there. Use one complete sentence plus a short supporting sentence.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park next month. I plan to ride my bike there and take a long walk along the riverbank.

× Nick, are you in my own party? Because it was the only time we used to play our family.

✓ Nick, were you in my family? It was the only time we used to play together.

The original contains incorrect pronoun use and sentence structure. 'Are you in my own party?' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'Were you in my family?' or 'Were you part of my family?'. 'We used to play our family' is incorrect; use 'we used to play together' to express habitual past action. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× Yeah, I am like on a parking. I'm enjoying a fresh air on my own with my friend.

✓ Yeah, I'm like at a park. I'm enjoying the fresh air on my own with my friend.

Errors include incorrect noun choice and article/preposition use. 'On a parking' should be 'at a park' or 'in a parking lot'; 'a fresh air' is wrong because 'air' is uncountable and needs 'the' when specific: 'the fresh air'. Use contractions and natural phrasing: 'I'm like at a park.'

× Absolutely always more part meaning you think, no, I would like him more, but he might actually you might. Getty No, I am not anything when I meet.

✓ Absolutely — I would like more parks, but I'm not sure where they should be. No, I don't have any particular one in mind when I think about it.

The original is largely unintelligible due to sentence structure and word choice errors. Clarify intent: answer the question about wanting more parks with a clear statement. Replace unclear fragments ('you might. Getty') with coherent phrases. Use 'I would like more parks' to correct plural and article usage and 'I don't have any particular one in mind' for clarity.

× Yeah, our name. I want him on a bike in a walk.

✓ Yeah, I want to go with my friend on a bike ride or a walk.

Original has incorrect pronouns and verb phrases. 'Our name' is meaningless here; likely intended 'Yeah, sure' or 'Yeah'. 'I want him on a bike in a walk' should be 'I want to go with him on a bike ride or a walk.' Use 'to go with' + person, and correct nouns 'bike ride' and 'walk'.