公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you liked parks, then give one or two specific supporting details (activities you did, feelings). Use correct grammar and avoid vague words like 'kinda know'. Keep to under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I usually went alone because I was an only child, and I liked exploring the playground and reading under trees. Those visits made me feel independent and calm.

建議: Give a concise direct answer then explain why or how often you go. Avoid contradictory phrases (e.g. 'Not really, but yes'). Use one linking phrase (however, although, because) to connect idea and keep sentences short and grammatical.

範例: Not really; I don't visit parks often. However, I still go occasionally to get fresh air and exercise, usually once or twice a month.

建議: Answer the question directly and give clear reasons. Use correct sentence structure and avoid repetition. If distance is the reason, state it simply and add one specific supporting detail (transport, accessibility). Keep it to two or three sentences.

範例: I wouldn't mind more parks, but I don't feel strongly because the nearest parks are far from my home. Because I lack easy transport, I usually visit only one nearby park.

建議: Be specific: name a type of park or a particular park you want to visit and say why. Even if you are unsure, give a clear intention and a reason (features, activities). Use one or two sentences and avoid filler phrases like 'I don't know.'

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the botanical garden in the city because it has rare plants and peaceful walking paths. I think it would be a nice place to relax and take photos.

× Kinda know because I didn't have any younger sister or brother.

✓ I kind of know because I didn't have any younger sisters or brothers.

The sentence has pronoun/phrase and pluralization issues. 'Kinda' is colloquial; use 'I kind of' or better 'I know' for clarity. 'Younger sister or brother' should be pluralized to 'younger sisters or brothers' when speaking generally. Also include the subject 'I' before 'kind of'. Keep tense consistent (past) with 'didn't have'.

× I was coming to park alone usually.

✓ I usually went to the park alone.

The original uses continuous past 'was coming' incorrectly for a habitual past action. Use simple past 'went' with 'usually' to indicate habit. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'park' and place 'usually' before the verb phrase or after subject for natural word order.

× Not really, but yeah, I still go like to going to park now.

✓ Not really, but I still like going to the park now.

This sentence mixes forms: 'go like to going' is incorrect. Use 'like going' to express preference for the activity. Add the definite article 'the' before 'park'. Keep present simple 'like' to describe current preference.

× No usually usually I stay home because I never get get out to my house so only I going to 1 park.

✓ No. Usually I stay home because I never go out from my house, so I only go to one park.

Repeated words 'usually usually' and 'get get' are errors. 'Stay home' is fine but 'never get out to my house' is wrong; use 'never go out from my house' or better 'never go out of my house'. 'Only I going to 1 park' mixes forms; use present simple 'I only go to one park' and write numbers as words in formal writing. Also fix word order and remove duplicates.

× Maybe some people tell me is so many park in my country but I never go to there because they too far for my far too far for my.

✓ Maybe some people tell me there are many parks in my country, but I never go there because they are too far from me.

Multiple errors: incorrect word order and pronoun use. 'Tell me is so many park' should be 'tell me there are many parks' (there be issue and pluralization). 'Go to there' should be 'go there'. 'They too far for my far too far for my' should be 'they are too far from me'. Use plural 'parks' and the verb 'are' for plural agreement.

× Yeah, the I want to go to park. I don't know. I don't know.

✓ Yes, I want to go to the park. I don't know where exactly.

'The I want' has an extra article; remove 'the'. Use 'the park' with definite article. Repeating 'I don't know' is uninformative; provide a natural completion like 'I don't know where exactly'. Maintain present simple 'want' for future intention.