公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答を自然で正確な文に直し、主題文→補足の構成を守り、過去の習慣は過去形で述べましょう。具体的な活動や感情を付け加えると良いです。例：最初に「Yes, I did.」と明確に言い、誰と何をしたか（with my father / played basketball）、どのくらいの頻度（often）や思い出（fun）を短く補足します。

範例: Yes, I did. I often went to the park with my father to play basketball, and we usually played there every weekend. I enjoyed those times because they were fun and helped me improve my skills.

建議: 構造を簡潔にして理由を明確に述べましょう。主文で現在の気持ち（Yes, I still like them.）を言い、その後に理由を2つまでに絞って接続詞（because / and / so）でつなげます。動詞や数の一致に注意（club activities）。

範例: Yes, I still like going to parks, but I don't have much time because I need to study and attend club activities. Therefore, I rarely visit parks during the week.

建議: 質問に対して直接で完全な返答をし、理由と代替案を具体的に述べましょう。現在の文は文法的に不正確で終わりが曖昧です。例えば「No, we have enough parks」→「Instead, I would prefer more...（例：green spaces, libraries）」と続けます。

範例: No, I don't think we need more parks because my hometown already has many. Instead, I would prefer more public libraries or cultural centers where people can study and meet.

建議: 質問の意図は将来行きたい具体的な公園を挙げることなので、場所や理由をはっきり述べましょう。文法を整え、重複を避ける（I want to watch the sea）と、最後の混乱した文は削除します。将来の時制（would like to / want to）を使うと良いです。

範例: Yes, I'd like to visit a seaside park in the future because I enjoy watching the sea and relaxing by the shore. It would be nice to go there for a quiet picnic or to take photos.

× Yes, I like especially I often went to with my father to play basketball.

✓ Yes, I especially liked going to parks with my father to play basketball.

The student mixes present and past tenses and uses incorrect word order. Use past tense 'liked' to match 'as a child' and the gerund 'going' after 'liked'. Move 'especially' before the verb phrase for natural order. Suggestion: Use 'I especially liked going to parks with my father to play basketball.'

× Yes, but now I don't have enough time to go parks because I have to study and I have club activity, so I don't have enough time to go there.

✓ Yes, but now I don't have enough time to go to parks because I have to study and I have club activities, so I don't have enough time to go there.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go' when referring to a place. Also pluralize 'club activity' to 'club activities' for naturalness. Suggestion: Use 'go to parks' and 'club activities'.

× No, because in my hometown is already have a lot of park so it is enough. So instead of park, I would like to be.

✓ No, because there are already a lot of parks in my hometown, so that is enough. Instead of more parks, I would like something else.

Incorrect use of 'there be' structure and word order. Use 'there are' for plural 'parks' and place 'in my hometown' after the verb phrase. Also use plural 'parks' and clarify 'instead of more parks' and complete the idea. Suggestion: 'There are already a lot of parks in my hometown, so that is enough.'

× I want go park nearby the sea because I want to. I want to watch the sea. Why are I playing Playing in the park?

✓ I want to go to a park near the sea because I want to watch the sea. Why am I playing in the park?

Missing 'to' in the infinitive 'want to go' and missing preposition 'to' after 'go'. Use the article 'a' before 'park' and prefer 'near' rather than 'nearby' in this structure. The question 'Why are I playing' has wrong subject-verb order and form; correct is 'Why am I playing'. Also remove duplicate 'Playing'. Suggestion: 'I want to go to a park near the sea because I want to watch the sea.' and for the question 'Why am I playing in the park?'.