公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct, more natural and add one brief supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific memory or reason. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I often went there with my parents to feed ducks and play on the swings, which was my favourite way to spend the afternoon.

建議: Correct grammar (use noun/verb forms and prepositions), make the reason concise and specific, and use a linking word to connect ideas. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid awkward phrases like “hindrance me.”

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I rarely have time now because work is demanding. When I'm free, I usually spend time with my family instead of going out alone.

建議: Use clear, accurate statements and correct verb forms; avoid filler words like “UH.” State your preference and give a specific reason or example. Keep it to two sentences and use a linking word (e.g., because, so) to explain.

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we currently have very few public green spaces. As a result, I often travel to nearby cities or even abroad to visit well-designed parks and relax.

建議: Be specific about which parks or features you want to visit and why; use correct plural/singular forms and link ideas for clarity. Offer a short reason or what you expect to experience. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I would love to visit famous parks in Japan and Taiwan, such as Kenrokuen and Taipei's Yangmingshan, because they are known for beautiful gardens and seasonal flowers. I hope to see the landscaping and try local park activities there.

× Yes, of course I like going to parks when I was a child.

✓ Yes, of course I liked going to parks when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'like' with a past time expression 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'liked' to match the time frame. Suggestion: change verb to past tense to maintain consistent tense.'

× Yes, I still love going to parks, but my job hindrance me from doing so because sometimes I'm busy and sometimes if I'm not busy, my time spent was in my family.

✓ Yes, I still love going to parks, but my job hinders me from doing so because sometimes I'm busy and when I'm not busy, I spend time with my family.

Multiple errors: 'job hindrance me' is incorrect word choice and verb form. Use verb 'hinder' with third person singular 'hinders' (subject-verb agreement). 'My time spent was in my family' is awkward and tense-mismatched; use present simple 'I spend time with my family'. Also replace the conditional 'sometimes if I'm not busy' with 'when I'm not busy' for clarity.'

× In my city we have no parks but other city have UH. That's why I'm going to other city just to see their parks and sometimes outside the country.

✓ In my city we have no parks, but other cities do. That's why I go to other cities just to see their parks, and sometimes I travel abroad.

Errors: 'other city have' is wrong subject-verb agreement and number; use plural 'other cities' and auxiliary 'do' to avoid repeating the verb. 'I'm going to other city just to see' is awkward and tense-inappropriate; use simple present 'I go' to describe habitual action. 'Sometimes outside the country' is informal and incomplete; use 'I travel abroad' for clarity.'

× Yes of course, just like what I see is in social media. I like to see the parks in other city like Japan and Taiwan because in my country parks are limited.

✓ Yes, of course. Just like what I see on social media, I would like to see parks in other places such as Japan and Taiwan because parks are limited in my country.

Issues: 'what I see is in social media' is ungrammatical; use 'what I see on social media'. 'I like to see the parks in other city like Japan and Taiwan' has number and article issues; use 'parks in other places such as Japan and Taiwan' or plural 'cities'. Also tense and modality: use 'would like' to express future desire. Finally, place 'in my country' after 'limited' for natural word order.'