公园— Part 1 評分報告

× I still enjoy going to parks, but I really have time because my studies are very busy and stressful.

✓ I still enjoy going to parks, but I really don't have time because my studies are very busy and stressful.

句子中缺少否定助动词“don't”，原句“I really have time”与上下文意思相反（想表达“没有时间”）。应使用一般现在时的否定形式“I don't have time”。建议：在表达“没有时间”时使用“don't have time”。

× Of course, I enjoyed going to a park near my house after school. I often went skateboarding there and my parents would often take a walk with me, which made this afternoon feel like a happy family time.

✓ Of course, I enjoyed going to a park near my house after school. I often went skateboarding there and my parents would often take a walk with me, which made those afternoons feel like happy family time.

原句中“this afternoon”指过去的多次经历，应使用复数和复数指代词来表示多次发生的过去时间，改为“those afternoons”。同时“a happy family time”可简化为“happy family time”更符合习惯用法。建议：描述过去经常发生的事情时，使用复数时间表达（those afternoons）并保持短语自然。

× Our city needs more parks because they provide green regional spaces where residents can spend quality time with family and unwind.

✓ Our city needs more parks because they provide green, recreational spaces where residents can spend quality time with their families and unwind.

原句中“regional spaces”用词不自然，应改为“recreational spaces（休闲场所）”。另外“with family”更常用复数所有格“with their families”来表示居民与家人共度时光；在“green, recreational”之间加逗号更自然。建议：用更常见的搭配“recreational spaces”和“their families”。

× I often dream about hiking there and taking photos of the landscapes.

✓ I often dream about hiking there and taking photos of the landscape.

单词“landscapes”虽非错误，但在此处更常用不可数名词“landscape”来表示总体风景；也可保留复数。此处属于可选改进，主要建议使用更地道表达。建议：在描述整体景色时可用单数“landscape”。