Mirrors— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?

Thí sinh

I'm not so sure, but I do look at myself in the mirrors every day. I would like to tidy up a little bit in front of the mirror. I also use the mirror in the bathroom too.

Giám khảo

Have you ever bought mirrors?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's just several days ago I broke my own mirror so I purchased 1 to Taobao. It's pretty cheap, just like several ducks.

Giám khảo

Do you usually take a mirror with you?

Thí sinh

Not really. It's not necessary. Wherever we go, we have easy access to mirrors. You just don't need one in your pocket.

Giám khảo

Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?

Thí sinh

I'm not sure mirrors do make the room most spacious and bigger, but it's our in our Chinese minerals are not something we can use randomly 'cause it will bring bad luck otherwise.

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Part 1

Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本切题,也说明了频率,但开头“I'm not so sure”与后文每天照镜子不一致,显得不够直接。“in the mirrors”应改为“in the mirror”,“I would like to tidy up”表达不自然,建议说“to tidy myself up”或“to check my appearance”。最后一句与前面信息重复,可以用 because 说明原因,并避免同时使用“also”和“too”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I look in the mirror every day, usually before I leave home, to check my appearance and tidy my hair. I also use the bathroom mirror when I wash my face or get ready for work.

Have you ever bought mirrors?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答有具体经历,但时态和表达错误较多。“it's just several days ago”应改为“It was just a few days ago”,“purchased 1 to Taobao”应改为“bought one on Taobao”。“several ducks”明显不是正确的价格表达,可能想说“several dozen yuan”。建议使用清晰的时间顺序和连接词,例如“because”或“so”,并补充镜子的用途。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. In fact, I bought one on Taobao a few days ago because I accidentally broke my old mirror. It was quite cheap and cost only a few dozen yuan.

Do you usually take a mirror with you?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,理由清楚,逻辑也比较连贯。不过“Wherever we go”范围过大,而且“you just don't need one in your pocket”略显绝对和口语化。可以将“we”和“you”统一为“I”,并加入具体场景,例如公共厕所、商店或办公室,使内容更具体自然。

Ví dụ: Not really. I don’t usually carry one because I can find mirrors in most places, such as public bathrooms, shops, and my office. Besides, I can use my phone camera if I need to check my appearance.

Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有装饰和文化两个观点,但句子结构严重混乱,影响理解。“mirrors do make the room most spacious and bigger”应改为“mirrors can make a room look more spacious”;“Chinese minerals”应为“Chinese culture”或“Chinese beliefs”,“it's our in our”属于明显的重复和语法错误。建议先直接回答是否会使用,再用“However”引出中国文化中的禁忌,并准确表达“不能随意摆放”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would use a mirror to decorate my room, because it can make the space look brighter and more spacious. However, I would be careful about where I placed it, since traditional Chinese beliefs suggest that mirrors should not be positioned randomly. For example, I would avoid placing one directly opposite my bed.

Ngữ pháp

1:Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× I'm not so sure, but I do look at myself in the mirrors every day.

✓ I'm not so sure, but I do look at myself in the mirror every day.

“Look at yourself in the mirror”是常见固定表达,通常使用单数“the mirror”。这里不是指多个镜子,因此应使用“mirror”,而不是“mirrors”。

5:Past tense issue(过去时态问题)

× Yes, it's just several days ago I broke my own mirror so I purchased 1 to Taobao.

✓ Yes. Just several days ago, I broke my mirror, so I purchased a new one on Taobao.

“Several days ago”表示过去的明确时间,所以相关动作应使用一般过去时。“It's”应改为过去时表达,或者直接删除。购买镜子的动作也发生在过去,因此使用“purchased”是正确的。

11:Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Yes, it's just several days ago I broke my own mirror so I purchased 1 to Taobao.

✓ Yes. Just several days ago, I broke my mirror, so I purchased a new one on Taobao.

表示在淘宝这个购物平台上购买东西时,应使用介词“on”,即“buy/purchase something on Taobao”,不能使用“to”。

5:Past tense issue(过去时态问题)

× It's pretty cheap, just like several ducks.

✓ It was pretty cheap, just several bucks.

前文讲的是几天前购买镜子的经历,所以这里应使用过去时“was”,而不是现在时“is”。“bucks”表示“美元”,这里的“ducks”很可能是口语识别错误;“just several bucks”表示“只要几美元”。

25:Comparative and superlative errors(比较级和最高级错误)

× I'm not sure mirrors do make the room most spacious and bigger,

✓ I'm not sure, but mirrors can make the room look more spacious and bigger,

这里是在比较装饰前后的空间效果,应使用比较级“more spacious”,不能使用最高级“most spacious”。另外,在“make + 宾语”后使用“look”可以更准确地表达“使房间看起来更宽敞”。

26:Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× but it's our in our Chinese minerals are not something we can use randomly 'cause it will bring bad luck otherwise.

✓ But in Chinese culture, mirrors are not something we can use randomly because they can bring bad luck.

原句包含多余且混乱的结构,如“it's our in our Chinese minerals are”,导致句子无法形成清晰的主谓结构。可以改为“In Chinese culture”引出文化背景,并以“mirrors are”作为主句主语。“mirrors”是复数,因此后面用“they can bring”,而不是“it will bring”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Bad— Substandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Pretty— Attractive; Quite; Beautify
Tidy— Neat; Put in order
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