Mirrors— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid unnecessary self-labels (e.g., 'self-centered'), and use linking words to add one or two specific details about frequency. Keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I check my appearance several times a day, especially before leaving home and before meetings, because I care about my clothes, makeup and hairstyle. For example, I usually spend five minutes making sure my outfit and makeup look neat before I go out.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct grammar. Use a topic sentence stating when and why you bought it, then give one clear supporting reason or example. Avoid repetition and incorrect collocations (e.g., 'suits my purchase').

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought a mirror online a few weeks ago because it had a special design that matches my personal style. For example, its vintage frame complements the retro dresses I often wear, so it was a perfect choice for my room.

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct statement, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (because, so). Remove filler words ('actually', 'like') and fix grammar ('ensure my details are in the correct place').

Ví dụ: Yes, I always carry a small mirror in my bag because it helps me check my makeup and hair quickly. For instance, I use it after commuting to make sure my eyeliner and collar are neat before I meet people.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and precise. Give a clear reason and one specific effect of mirrors on a room. Avoid unclear comparisons ('regular balls') and reduce repetition of 'actually' and 'like'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Mirrors are useful decorative elements because they reflect light and make a small room feel more spacious. For example, I hung a tall mirror opposite the window to increase brightness and create the illusion of a larger living area.

× Actually yes, truth to be told I am really self-centered person and I really pay attention to details, especially in clothes and makeup and the hairstyle.

✓ Actually yes, truth be told I am a really self-centered person and I really pay attention to details, especially in clothes, makeup, and hairstyle.

Missing article 'a' before 'really self-centered person' and awkward phrase 'truth to be told' should be 'truth be told'. Also list items need commas and 'the hairstyle' should be 'hairstyle' without 'the'. Improve by adding the article and correcting the idiom and punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I'm really addicted to it so I usually observe myself and watch carefully what I wear and how I look in the mirrors.

✓ I'm really addicted to it so I usually observe myself and watch carefully what I wear and how I look in the mirror.

'Mirrors' is plural but context implies a single handheld or personal mirror; use singular 'mirror' for consistency. If speaker meant many mirrors, keep plural; otherwise singular is correct. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yes, I bought Mirror a few weeks ago on on the Internet because it has such a special design and I think it's really fit to my personality and the style that I'm wearing.

✓ Yes, I bought a mirror a few weeks ago on the Internet because it has a special design and I think it really fits my personality and the style I wear.

Use indefinite article 'a' before 'mirror'. Remove duplicated 'on'. Use 'fits' not 'fit' for subject-verb agreement and say 'fits my personality' (no 'to'). Use 'the style I wear' instead of 'the style that I'm wearing' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:22

× So it was really, really good for me and it really suits to my purchase.

✓ So it was really, really good for me and it really suits my purchase.

'Suits to' is incorrect; 'suits' takes a direct object without 'to'. Ensure verb agrees with subject: 'it really suits my purchase' is correct. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Yes, it is an essential tool in my bag because it helps me to control actually the way I look, my appearance, my face, makeup, clothes, because it actually my style is so like sophisticated and detailed.

✓ Yes, it is an essential tool in my bag because it helps me control the way I look: my appearance, my face, makeup, and clothes, because my style is so sophisticated and detailed.

Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' (use 'helps me control' or 'helps me to control'). 'It actually my style' is missing a verb; change to 'because my style is so sophisticated'. Remove filler words like 'like' and extra 'actually'. Add commas and colons for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:3

× So I need to be sure that my details are in correct position.

✓ So I need to be sure that my details are in the correct position.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'correct position'; word order and article use needed for natural English. Use 'in the correct position' rather than 'in correct position'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Actually yes, because I think it's quite useful tool, so you can just fix something and probably it actually gives you a space of openness in your small apartment because unlike the regular balls, it actually helps you to like see your room larger.

✓ Actually yes, because I think it's quite a useful tool: you can fix things and it can give a sense of openness in a small apartment, because unlike ordinary walls, it helps your room look larger.

Missing article 'a' before 'useful tool'. 'Fix something' is vague; 'fix things' or 'fix a detail' is clearer. 'Space of openness' is unnatural; use 'a sense of openness'. 'Regular balls' is incorrect word choice—likely 'walls'. 'Helps you to like see your room larger' is awkward; use 'helps your room look larger'. Adjust adjectives and adverbs and remove fillers. Grammar problem type ID:13