Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?
Thí sinh
Well, to be honest, I would say probably no. And especially in recent years, I think I looking at myself in the mirror was not very frequently. That is because I think when I looking at myself in the mirror that's always bring a lot of appearances anxiety to me especially I always think.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought mirrors?
Thí sinh
Well, definitely yes. And if I'm not mistaken I lost the time, but a mirror, it happened five years ago and at that time I went to my university, so I need build a mural.
Giám khảo
Do you usually take a mirror with you?
Thí sinh
We'll definitely know and as I mentioned before, I'm not really enjoying looking at myself in the mirror and especially when I go to other places. I think chicken mirror is a problem for me. That is because I don't want to go to other places with my bag, so I don't have more package.
Giám khảo
Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?
Thí sinh
Well, for me, I would say definitely no. That is because to be honest, in traditional Chinese culture we always think mirror is can't set up in the room. That is because it's always can show some mistreat things like ghost and I think.
Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: 回答应更简洁、语法更准确并给出具体细节。避免重复表达(例如多次说“不喜欢”或“看镜子不常”),并使用连接词使句子更连贯。可以先直接回答,然后说明频率和原因,举例说明何时会感到焦虑。注意时态和主谓一致(例如“I look”而不是“I looking”)。
Ví dụ: Honestly, not really. I rarely look at myself in the mirror nowadays. I usually check my appearance quickly before important events, because looking closely makes me feel self-conscious about my skin and hair. For example, before a presentation I might spend two minutes fixing my hair, but otherwise I avoid mirrors to reduce anxiety.
Have you ever bought mirrors?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰的时间表达和逻辑。直接说明是否购买过,然后给出具体时间、原因和场景。避免语法错误(如“lost the time”、“build a mural”)和不连贯的短语。用简单明确的句子说明用途(例如为宿舍或新房买镜子)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I bought a mirror about five years ago when I was moving into university accommodation. I needed a full-length mirror for my dorm room to check my clothes, so I bought an affordable standing mirror from a local shop.
Do you usually take a mirror with you?
Điểm: 26.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接并纠正表达错误(例如“chicken mirror”无意义)。说明是否随身携带并给出明确原因(例如体积、重量、没有必要)。使用连词(because, so)使句子连贯,并注意代词和数词的使用。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually carry a mirror with me. Because it would take up space in my bag and I prefer to travel light. If I need to check my appearance, I use a mirror in a public restroom or my phone's front camera.
Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答清楚且给出文化背景是好的,但需改进语法和表达的准确性。先给出直接回答,然后解释原因并说明这是否是个人意见或文化信仰,最好补充一个替代方案(例如用画作装饰)。避免模糊或不完整的句子。
Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't use mirrors as decoration. In traditional Chinese beliefs, mirrors are sometimes thought to attract negative energy or spirits, so my family avoids placing them in bedrooms. Instead, I prefer to hang paintings or photos to decorate my room.
× Well, to be honest, I would say probably no. And especially in recent years, I think I looking at myself in the mirror was not very frequently. That is because I think when I looking at myself in the mirror that's always bring a lot of appearances anxiety to me especially I always think.
✓ Well, to be honest, I would say probably no. Especially in recent years, I think I haven't been looking at myself in the mirror very frequently. That is because I think when I look at myself in the mirror it always brings me a lot of appearance anxiety, especially I always overthink.
错误类型:现在时态问题(ID 6)。问题在于时态和动词形式混用:原句中使用了“I looking”这一不正确的现在进行时结构,且在描述最近几年的习惯时应使用现在完成时(haven't been looking / haven't looked)或现在完成进行时来表示持续的影响;此外“that's always bring”中动词形式错误,应为单数第三人称现在时“brings”。建议:在谈论过去到现在持续的动作或习惯时使用现在完成时(have/has + 过去分词)或现在完成进行时(have/has been + -ing);注意主语和动词的一致性(第三人称单数加 -s)。
× Well, definitely yes. And if I'm not mistaken I lost the time, but a mirror, it happened five years ago and at that time I went to my university, so I need build a mural.
✓ Well, definitely yes. If I'm not mistaken, I bought a mirror about five years ago when I went to university, because I needed to build a mural.
错误类型:过去时问题(ID 5)。原句使用了“lost the time, but a mirror”这样的词语错误和时态不一致;表示过去发生的动作(购买镜子)应该用一般过去时(bought)。另外“need build a mural”应使用过去时态的动词形式或不同时态一致性,且动词搭配缺少不定式“to”。建议:叙述过去发生的具体事件时使用一般过去时,并注意动词搭配(need to do)。
× Do you usually take a mirror with you? Student: We'll definitely know and as I mentioned before, I'm not really enjoying looking at myself in the mirror and especially when I go to other places. I think chicken mirror is a problem for me. That is because I don't want to go to other places with my bag, so I don't have more package.
✓ I will definitely say no, and as I mentioned before, I don't really enjoy looking at myself in the mirror, especially when I go to other places. I think carrying a mirror is a problem for me because I don't want to go to other places with my bag, so I don't have much space for more items.
错误类型:代词与词汇使用错误(ID 12)。原句中“We'll definitely know”语法和代词使用不当,应该为“I will definitely say no”或“I definitely won't”。“I'm not really enjoying”在此情境中应使用一般现在时或现在进行时要注意语义(habitually 不喜欢 -> don't really enjoy)。“chicken mirror”显然是错误词汇(可能为carrying mirror),应为“carrying a mirror”。“package”用词不当,应为“pack/packing”或“space for items”。建议:注意代词和助动词的正确搭配,选择正确词汇并根据习惯动作使用一般现在时。
× Would you use mirrors to decorate your room? Student: Well, for me, I would say definitely no. That is because to be honest, in traditional Chinese culture we always think mirror is can't set up in the room. That is because it's always can show some mistreat things like ghost and I think.
✓ Well, for me, I would definitely say no. To be honest, in traditional Chinese culture we always think a mirror shouldn't be placed in the bedroom because it is believed to show unpleasant things like ghosts.
错误类型:定冠词/冠词使用错误(ID 17)。原句中缺少不定冠词或使用不正确的句序:应为“a mirror”或“mirrors”且动词和情态动词使用混乱(“is can't set up”应改为“shouldn't be placed”或“should not be put”)。此外“mistreat things”用词错误,应为“unpleasant things”或“mysterious things”。建议:注意冠词(a/the)使用,根据被动结构使用正确的被动语态(be + past participle),并使用合适的形容词表达意思。