Mirrors— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và tính mạch lạc: sử dụng thì phù hợp, sửa lỗi cấu trúc (ví dụ: "every girl does this" thay vì "every girl life doing that action"), tránh câu quá dài lẫn lộn ý. Thêm liên từ hợp lý để nối ý (because → so that hoặc which), và rút gọn để không lặp từ (ví dụ tránh lặp "look" nhiều lần).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often look at myself in the mirror every morning and sometimes in the evening. I think many girls do this because it helps boost confidence and motivates us to present our best selves during the day.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp: chia đúng thì (I've never done that), số danh từ (all of the mirrors), và tránh câu lặp, nên giải thích ngắn gọn. Thêm mệnh đề lý do rõ ràng và cô đọng (because my mother buys them).

Ví dụ: No, I have never bought a mirror. All the mirrors at home were bought by my mother because I'm still young and my parents usually buy things for me.

Gợi ý: Sửa từ vựng sai và cấu trúc câu: 'small meal' là nhầm, phải là 'small mirror' or 'compact mirror'; dùng động từ và mạo từ đúng ('a small mirror allows me to touch up my makeup...'). Tránh lỗi nhìn động từ ("looking" → "look at"). Nên nêu ví dụ cụ thể khi dùng (at school, when meeting friends).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I carry a small compact mirror in my bag so I can touch up my makeup at school or when I meet friends. It’s very convenient for quick checks throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ: dùng danh từ số nhiều khi cần (mirrors), chia động từ đúng (which allow me to look at my whole body). Nên dùng câu ngắn, nêu lợi ích trang trí cụ thể (tạo không gian rộng hơn, phản chiếu ánh sáng).

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I have several mirrors in my room, including a full-length mirror that lets me see my whole outfit and smaller ones placed around the room. They also make the room look brighter and more spacious.

× Yes, I do I really like looking at myself in the mirror.

✓ Yes, I really like looking at myself in the mirror.

The sentence contains an extra auxiliary 'do' that is unnecessary because the speaker is making a simple affirmative statement in the present tense. Remove the redundant 'do' to form a natural present simple affirmative sentence.

× I believe that every girl life doing that action because that is one ways for us to boost our motivation and try my best every day because we want to look myself.

✓ I believe that every girl likes doing that because it is one way for us to boost our motivation and try our best every day because we want to look good.

Multiple errors: 'life doing' is nonsensical and should be 'likes doing' (present tense verb with third-person singular subject), 'that action' is wordy so 'that' suffices, 'is one ways' should be singular 'is one way', 'try my best' should match 'us' so 'try our best', and 'look myself' is incorrect pronoun use; use 'look good'. Fix subject-verb agreement and pronoun consistency.

× No, I've never do that because all of my mirror in my house that is my mom bought for me.

✓ No, I've never done that because all the mirrors in my house were bought by my mom for me.

When using present perfect 'I've never done', the verb must be in past participle 'done' not base form 'do'. 'All of my mirror' is incorrect pluralization and article use; use 'all the mirrors'. Also use passive 'were bought by my mom' or active 'my mom bought them' for clarity.

× I'm not big enough to buy something by myself, so everything that is my mom bought for me.

✓ I'm not old enough to buy things by myself, so my mom buys everything for me.

'Not big enough' is incorrect collocation; use 'not old enough'. 'Something' is vague; 'things' fits general objects. 'Everything that is my mom bought for me' mixes structures; use present simple 'my mom buys' for habitual action or 'my mom buys everything for me'.

× Yes I do, I have a small meal which allow me to gain print everywhere at the school or maybe when I hang out to go with my friends.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a small mirror which allows me to touch up my makeup anywhere at school or when I hang out with my friends.

'Small meal' is a misspelling of 'small mirror'. 'Which allow' must agree with singular 'which' so 'allows'. 'Gain print everywhere' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'touch up my makeup' or 'check my appearance'. 'Hang out to go with my friends' is redundant; use 'hang out with my friends'.

× So small mirror is very convenient for me because I can looking at myself every time.

✓ So a small mirror is very convenient for me because I can look at myself anytime.

'So small mirror' needs an article: 'a small mirror'. 'Can looking' is incorrect verb form; after modal 'can' use base verb 'look'. 'Every time' in this context is better as 'anytime'.

× Yes, definitely. Now in my room there are many different types of mirror like a big mirror which allow me to looking at all of my body and many different small mirror and put everywhere in my room.

✓ Yes, definitely. Now in my room there are many different types of mirrors, like a big mirror which allows me to look at my whole body, and many small mirrors placed all over my room.

Plural forms needed: 'types of mirrors' and 'small mirrors'. 'Which allow' must agree with singular 'a big mirror' so 'which allows'. After 'allows' use base verb 'look' not 'looking'. 'All of my body' is better as 'my whole body'. 'And put everywhere' should be 'placed all over' for correct participle use and natural phrasing.