Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接说明爱好即可；“As I have...”在这里用法不自然，“skable”也不是正确拼写。若你想说“滑板”，可以用“skateboarding”。再补充一个具体原因或细节，让回答更完整。

Example: Yes, I enjoy skateboarding. It’s exciting, and I like practising new tricks in the park.

Suggestion: 先直接回答童年时做什么爱好。讲过去的经历时要用过去时，例如“swam”；“go to the swimming”应改为“go swimming”。可以把父母的建议和原因简洁地连起来，并补充一个具体细节。

Example: Yes, I used to go swimming when I was a child. My parents were busy, so they encouraged me to spend time outside the house. I enjoyed it because it was fun and kept me active.

Suggestion: 回答内容切题，但语序和语法需要调整。可以说“I’ve been skateboarding since I was a child”，用现在完成进行时表达从过去持续到现在；再用一两句解释喜欢它的原因。注意句子之间要有清晰停顿。

Example: Yes, I’ve been skateboarding since I was a child. I love it because it’s fun and gives me a chance to learn new skills. I still try to go skating whenever I have free time.

Suggestion: 先明确说“不一样”，然后分别说明家人的爱好和自己的爱好。注意主谓一致：“my father likes”“my mother doesn’t”；“spot”应为“sport”。“joining”可能是想表达“jogging”，请确认具体运动，并避免直接说母亲“懒”，可改为更礼貌、客观的表达。

Example: No, we have different hobbies. My father enjoys jogging, while I prefer skateboarding. My mother isn’t very keen on sports, so she usually spends her free time relaxing at home.

× Yes, I swim in when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I swam when I was a child.

“When I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此动词“swim”应使用过去式“swam”。

× Yes, I swim in when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I swam when I was a child.

这里的“in”多余。“When I was a child”已经完整地表示时间，不需要在“swam”和“when”之间加介词。

× You know, my father and my mom is busy and they don't want me to stay in the room and they said I just go to the swimming.

✓ You know, my father and my mother were busy, and they didn't want me to stay in my room, so they said I should just go swimming.

“My father and my mom”由两个人组成，是复数主语，不能与单数动词“is”搭配。结合句中的童年背景，改为过去式“were”。

× You know, my father and my mom is busy and they don't want me to stay in the room and they said I just go to the swimming.

✓ You know, my father and my mother were busy, and they didn't want me to stay in my room, so they said I should just go swimming.

这句话描述的是小时候的情况，应保持过去时态一致。“don't want”应改为“didn't want”。

× You know, my father and my mom is busy and they don't want me to stay in the room and they said I just go to the swimming.

✓ You know, my father and my mother were busy, and they didn't want me to stay in my room, so they said I should just go swimming.

“They said”后面是在转述父母给出的建议或要求。用“they said I should...”表达“他们说我应该……”，比直接接“I just go”更符合间接转述的表达方式。

× You know, my father and my mom is busy and they don't want me to stay in the room and they said I just go to the swimming.

✓ You know, my father and my mother were busy, and they didn't want me to stay in my room, so they said I should just go swimming.

表示参加游泳这项活动时，常用“go swimming”，不说“go to the swimming”。可以记住“go + 动词-ing”表示进行某种活动，例如“go jogging”和“go shopping”。

× Yes for sure. I skateboarding had since childhood I love skating I think that's cool

✓ Yes, for sure. I have been skateboarding since childhood. I love skating, and I think that's cool.

“Have been”后面应接动词-ing形式，因此说“have been skateboarding”。表达从过去持续到现在的爱好时，可以用“have been + 动词-ing + since...”结构。

× No, I don't my father likes joining and me like skateboarding and my mother is lazy. She don't like spot.

✓ No, I don't. My father likes joining, and I like skateboarding. My mother is lazy. She doesn't like spot.

“me”是宾格，不能在这里作主语。应使用主格“I”，所以要说“I like skateboarding”。

× No, I don't my father likes joining and me like skateboarding and my mother is lazy. She don't like spot.

✓ No, I don't. My father likes joining, and I like skateboarding. My mother is lazy. She doesn't like spot.

主语“She”是第三人称单数，一般现在时的否定句应使用“doesn't”，不能使用“don't”。