Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and organize your ideas more clearly. Replace “weak as” with “such as,” and use correct verb forms: “they seem to help me,” “improve my health,” and “I can see the world more clearly.” Avoid unclear or unnecessary phrases such as “just to be have me again” and provide one specific reason or example. Use linking words such as “because” and “also” naturally.

Example: Yes, I do. I have several hobbies, such as travelling, swimming, and playing tennis. I enjoy them because they help me relax and stay healthy. Travelling is especially exciting because I can explore new places and learn about different cultures.

Suggestion: Use the past tense consistently because the question refers to childhood: “I had,” “played,” “danced,” and “sometimes played.” Correct “hobby” to “hobbies,” “such as” instead of “a towel sweet as,” and “video games” instead of “widow game.” Make the weekend example grammatically complete and explain who you spent time with.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had several hobbies, such as playing video games, dancing, and playing the piano. At weekends, I often played the piano or video games with my parents and siblings. I particularly enjoyed dancing because it was fun and helped me express myself.

Suggestion: State the hobby clearly and avoid the unnatural phrase “playing more bowling”; say “playing ten-pin bowling” or simply “bowling.” Use present perfect or present simple accurately: “I have enjoyed it since childhood” and “I still go bowling.” Correct “favorite hobby” to “favorite hobbies” only if you mention more than one, and replace “joyful” with the more natural “fun.”

Example: Yes, I do. I have enjoyed bowling since I was a child, and I used to go bowling with my brother almost every weekend. We still do it occasionally because it is a lot of fun and brings back many happy memories. It is a special hobby for me because we have spent so much time together doing it.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first, such as “Not exactly.” Then compare your hobbies with your parents’ hobbies using correct grammar: “My parents like travelling to Asian countries, whereas my siblings and I prefer travelling to Europe.” Avoid repetition and finish with a clear concluding idea, such as “However, we all enjoy travelling.”

Example: Not exactly. My parents enjoy travelling to Asian countries, whereas my siblings and I prefer visiting Europe. However, travelling is still a shared family interest, so we often discuss our trips and recommend places to one another.

× I have several hobbies weak as traveling, swimming and playing tennis.

✓ I have several hobbies, such as traveling, swimming, and playing tennis.

The phrase such as is used to introduce examples. Weak as is not grammatically correct in this context.

× It seem to me just to be have me again.

✓ They seem to help me relax.

The subject refers to several hobbies, so the plural pronoun they should be used. The verb after they is seem, not seems.

× While you were exploring, traveling especially improves my healthy and can see the world clearly.

✓ While I am exploring, traveling especially improves my health and helps me see the world clearly.

The answer describes a current hobby, so the present tense am exploring is more suitable than the past tense were exploring. The subject of helps is traveling, so the verb must be in the third-person singular form.

× Traveling especially improves my healthy.

✓ Traveling especially improves my health.

Health is the noun needed after the verb improves. Healthy is an adjective and cannot be used as the object of improves in this sentence.

× I have several hobby when I was a child.

✓ I had several hobbies when I was a child.

Several must be followed by a plural noun, so hobby should be hobbies.

× I have several hobbies when I was a child.

✓ I had several hobbies when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a finished period in the past, so have should be changed to the past-tense form had.

× Sometimes going to play piano.

✓ Sometimes playing the piano.

When listing hobbies, the activities should use parallel -ing forms: playing video games, dancing, and playing the piano.

× Going to play piano.

✓ Playing the piano.

The instrument piano normally takes the definite article the when referring to the activity of playing it.

× I went there with my parent and sibling.

✓ I went there with my parents and siblings.

The sentence refers to more than one parent and more than one sibling, so both nouns should be plural.

× One of my favorite hobby that I had when I was a child is playing bowling with my brother.

✓ One of my favorite hobbies that I have had since I was a child is bowling with my brother.

After one of my, the noun must be plural, so hobby becomes hobbies. The present perfect have had correctly describes a hobby that began in the past and continues to the present.

× One of my favorite hobbies is playing bowling with my brother.

✓ One of my favorite hobbies is bowling with my brother.

Bowling is the natural -ing form used as the name of the activity. Playing bowling is not the usual verb expression in English.

× That I doing this all almost every weekend with my brother because it is very joyful and memorable for me.

✓ I do this almost every weekend with my brother because it is very enjoyable and memorable for me.

That I doing is not a complete or correctly formed clause. Use the subject I followed by the present-tense verb do to describe a regular activity.

× When it come to me and my sibling.

✓ When it comes to my sibling and me.

The fixed expression is when it comes to, so come must be changed to comes because the subject it is third-person singular. My sibling and me is the correct object form after the preposition to.

× My parent like to traveling to Asia country.

✓ My parents like traveling to Asian countries.

Parents and countries should be plural because the speaker is referring to more than one parent and more than one country. Asian is the adjective form used before countries.

× My parents like to traveling to Asian countries.

✓ My parents like traveling to Asian countries.

After like, the gerund form traveling is natural here. Do not use to directly before traveling in this sentence.

× When it comes to me and my sibling, we like traveling to Europe.

✓ When it comes to my sibling and me, we like traveling to Europe.

After the preposition to, object pronouns are required. Therefore, me is correct, while I would be incorrect in this position.

× We also like travel to Europe.

✓ We also like traveling to Europe.

After like, traveling is used as a gerund to describe the activity. The base form travel is not the appropriate form in this structure.

× So it is not the same but we also like travel to.

✓ So our hobbies are not the same, but we also like traveling.

The original ending, like travel to, is incomplete because to has no destination after it and the verb form is incorrect. The revised sentence has a complete structure and uses traveling after like.