Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, fluency and add a topic sentence plus brief supporting detail. Use correct verbs and articles, and avoid redundancy. Keep to 1–3 sentences with linking words if adding details.

Example: Yes, I have a few hobbies. I enjoy listening to music and dancing because they help me relax and keep me fit.

Suggestion: Correct tense and subject-verb agreement, start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific detail or example using a linking word (e.g., 'for example', 'because').

Example: When I was a child, reading books was my favourite hobby because I loved adventure stories; for example, I read many fairy tales every week.

Suggestion: Answer directly with correct tense and add a short specific reason or effect. Use a linking word to connect sentences if adding extra information.

Example: Yes, I have kept reading books since childhood. Over the years I have developed a habit of reading every night, which has improved my vocabulary and imagination.

Suggestion: Make a clear comparative statement and correct sentence structure. Use linking words (e.g., 'however', 'but', 'for example') to explain similarities or differences and provide one specific example.

Example: No, my hobbies are different from my family members'. For example, I enjoy dancing and music, but my sister prefers gardening and my father likes fishing.

× Yes listening song, dancing, it's my hobby.

✓ Yes, listening to songs and dancing are my hobbies.

The sentence omits the preposition 'to' after 'listening' and uses singular 'song' instead of plural 'songs'. Also the list of activities requires plural 'hobbies' to match two activities; this is a subject-verb agreement issue resolved by using 'are'. Use 'listening to' + noun; separate activities with 'and'. Suggestion: Say 'listening to songs and dancing are my hobbies.'

× When I were a child, reading books is my hobby.

✓ When I was a child, reading books was my hobby.

The clause refers to a past time 'when I was a child' so verbs must be in past tense. 'Were' is incorrect with singular 'I' in simple past (should be 'was'), and 'is' should be 'was' to match past time. Suggestion: Use past tense for both verbs: 'When I was a child, reading books was my hobby.'

× Yes reading books is my hobby.

✓ Yes, reading books is my hobby.

This sentence mainly needs punctuation: add a comma after 'Yes' for natural spoken-writing style. The gerund phrase 'reading books' correctly functions as the subject, and 'is' correctly matches singular hobby. Suggestion: Write 'Yes, reading books is my hobby.'

× Now my different family members or different hobbies.

✓ Now my family members have different hobbies.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing verb, producing an incomplete structure. Add the verb 'have' and reorder phrase to 'my family members have different hobbies' to express that members possess different hobbies. Suggestion: Use subject + verb + object order: 'My family members have different hobbies.'