Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 句子要更自然并直接回答。注意语法（例如冠词和名词单复数），减少填充词（如 "Umm"），并用连接词使句子更连贯。可以在开头简短给出主题句，然后用一到两句具体说明和例子。

Example: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy quiet pastimes like reading and listening to music for relaxation, and I also take part in active sports such as skateboarding, which keeps me fit and energetic.

Suggestion: 注意时态一致和动词形式（例如过去式）。避免重复相同短语，改用更自然的表达来描述细节，并用连接词解释原因或效果。

Example: Yes, I did. I learned to play the guitar and really enjoyed it as a child because my parents spent a lot of time teaching and encouraging me, which made me more confident to try new things.

Suggestion: 回答要更直接并注意语法（主谓一致、时态、名词形式）。避免口语化片语过多，提供更具体的例子并用连接词显示转折或对比。

Example: Not really — I usually try new hobbies every few years. For instance, I enjoyed drawing when I was a child, but recently I've been into skateboarding because I like the challenge and freedom it offers.

Suggestion: 注意语法和用词自然性（例如去掉不必要的不定式、时态一致）。可以提供具体场景说明如何一起分享幽默，并用连接词扩展原因或感受。

Example: Yes, we share a similar sense of humour and often tell jokes to make each other laugh. This lighthearted atmosphere brings us closer and makes family gatherings very enjoyable.

× I not only like quiet activities like reading and listening to music, I also like some active hobbies like playing sports, especially the skateboards.

✓ I not only like quiet activities like reading and listening to music, I also like some active hobbies like playing sports, especially skateboarding.

“the skateboards” 在这里不需要定冠词且 skateboard 用作不可数或动名词时应为 skateboarding。使用“the”会暗示特指某些滑板，但句意是指滑滑板这一活动。建议去掉“the”并用动名词形式或复数视具体含义。

× Umm, I think both of the activities give me energy.

✓ Umm, I think both of the activities give me energy.

句子原句其实在主谓一致上是正确的：both of the activities 与动词 give 一致。此处无需修改。解释（中文）：’both of the activities’ 与复数动词搭配，原句正确。

× I learned to play guitar and enjoy it when I was a kid.

✓ I learned to play the guitar and enjoyed it when I was a kid.

句中涉及过去时间状语“when I was a kid”，两个动词应使用过去时。并且在表示乐器时通常使用定冠词“the guitar”。建议将 enjoy 改为过去式 enjoyed，并在 guitar 前加 the。

× My parents spent a lot of time with me and encourage me, encourage me to try everything I want.

✓ My parents spent a lot of time with me and encouraged me to try everything I wanted.

句中描述过去的行为，动词应使用过去式 encouraged；第二处的“encourage me”重复且时态不一致，此外“want”也应与过去时间一致改为 wanted。建议删除重复并统一使用过去式。

× I'm so appreciative for them.

✓ I'm so appreciative of them.

短语搭配错误，英语中常用 appreciative of 表示“感激……”。使用 for 不符合固定搭配。中文建议：将 for 改为 of。

× To be honest, I don't keep a hobby for more than three years.

✓ To be honest, I haven't kept a hobby for more than three years.

句中谈及从过去到现在的持续状态，应该用现在完成时 haven’t kept 表示“至今未持续超过三年”。原句使用一般现在时与时间状语不匹配。

× I guess I was that kind of person who like to try things new and challenging.

✓ I guess I was that kind of person who liked to try new and challenging things.

关系从句中先行词“person”为单数，谓语应为 liked（过去式）来匹配前半句 was；此外形容词顺序和名词位置需要调整为“try new and challenging things”。建议统一使用过去时并调整词序。

× For example, I like to draw in my childhood, but nowadays I like to skateboarding.

✓ For example, I liked to draw in my childhood, but nowadays I like skateboarding.

第一部分描述过去的爱好，应使用过去时 liked。第二部分现在的爱好用动名词 skateboarding 或动词短语 like to skateboard，两者不可混用。建议将前句改为过去式，后句改为动名词或不带 to 的名词形式。

× Yes I do. We all like to tell jokes, to make people laugh.

✓ Yes, I do. We all like telling jokes and making people laugh.

原句语法上可理解但更自然的表达是使用动名词短语 telling jokes 和 making people laugh 作为并列。并且在书写中 should include comma after Yes。建议使用动名词一致结构。

× I really like this thing and enjoying time with my family.

✓ I really like this and enjoy time with my family.

并列谓语时要保持动词形式一致，前面是 like（一般现在时），后面应使用 enjoy 而非现在分词 enjoying。建议将 enjoying 改为动词原形 enjoy。