Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency: use correct articles (a hobby), simpler sentence structure, and add a linking word to connect ideas. Keep answers within 3–4 concise sentences. Add one specific detail about what you cook or why it helps.

Example: Yes, I have a hobby. I usually cook every evening after work because it helps me relax after a demanding day. For example, I like making simple stir-fries and soups, which are quick to prepare and comforting.

Suggestion: Correct tense and sentence structure, and be more specific: use past tense (liked), combine ideas with linking words, and finish the second idea with a clear point (teamwork or skills). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: When I was younger, I liked playing badminton with my friends in my small village. It was good exercise and also taught me teamwork and how to compete fairly.

Suggestion: Make answer more concise and grammatically correct: use clear linking words (however, although), correct relative clauses, and provide frequency details (how often). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid repeating words.

Example: Not really. After I moved to a different city and started living in a small apartment, I could no longer play regularly. However, I sometimes book a badminton court with colleagues, although not very often.

Suggestion: Clarify and organize your response: start with a direct statement, then explain the difference using linking words (but, although) and specific examples (types of dishes or how each person approaches cooking). Avoid hesitation words and repetitions.

Example: Yes, we both enjoy cooking, but in different ways. For me it's a relaxing hobby, whereas my mother treats cooking more as a duty to care for the family; for example, she spends a lot of time preparing large meals for everyone while I prefer experimenting with quick, new recipes.

× Yes, I have hobby.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun 'hobby'. Use 'a' to indicate one hobby. Suggestion: always include 'a' or 'an' before singular countable nouns (e.g., 'a hobby').

× I normally cook after I finish my work on a daily basis because cooking can relieve my stress after demanding day.

✓ I normally cook after I finish my work because cooking can relieve my stress after a demanding day.

Redundant time expressions ('on a daily basis' and 'normally') and missing article 'a' before 'demanding day'. Use one appropriate time phrase and include 'a' before singular nouns. Suggestion: choose one time marker and add articles where needed.

× When I was younger, I like to play badminton with my friends in small village.

✓ When I was younger, I liked to play badminton with my friends in a small village.

The time clause 'When I was younger' sets the context in the past, so the main verb should be in the past tense 'liked' not 'like'. Also include the article 'a' before 'small village'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently in past time contexts and include articles for singular nouns.

× I can work out to improve my physical health and also I can learn from playing which with others to improve my.

✓ I could work out to improve my physical health, and I could also learn from playing with others to improve myself.

In a past context 'When I was younger' modal 'could' is more appropriate than 'can'. The phrase 'playing which with others' is incorrect word order; use 'playing with others'. 'Improve my' is incomplete; use 'improve myself'. Suggestion: match modal verbs to time references and use correct pronouns and word order.

× Not really because I moved to live in another city which I live in compact apartment so I cannot play badminton anymore.

✓ Not really, because I moved to another city where I live in a compact apartment, so I cannot play badminton anymore.

Mix of tenses is okay (past 'moved' and present 'live') but relative clause use is incorrect: use 'where' instead of 'which' for places. Also add articles: 'a compact apartment'. Suggestion: use 'where' for locations and include articles before singular nouns.

× But sometimes I book badminton court to go with my colleague as well but sometimes not often.

✓ But sometimes I book a badminton court to go with my colleague, although not very often.

Missing article 'a' before 'badminton court'. Repetition 'but sometimes' and awkward phrasing 'not often' should be smoothed to 'although not very often'. Suggestion: include articles and avoid redundant connectors.

× Can I say that because cooking is my my hobby but for my mom cooking like it like a her duty to take care of all mem family members so but I I can say that we both love cooking so much.

✓ You could say that cooking is my hobby, but for my mom cooking is like a duty to take care of all family members. Still, I can say that we both love cooking very much.

Multiple pronoun and word errors: duplicate words ('my my', 'I I'), incorrect structure 'cooking like it like a her duty' should be 'cooking is like a duty' and remove extra 'her'. 'mem' is typo for 'family' and 'so but' is redundant; use clear conjunctions. Suggestion: remove duplicates, correct word order 'X is like a duty', and use 'very much' for emphasis.