Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), correct word choice (take photos), and add one specific detail to make it vivid. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding detail.

Example: I enjoy travelling. I like visiting different places and taking photographs of landscapes. For example, last year I visited the coast and took photos of the sunrise, which I still enjoy looking at.

Suggestion: First, correct major errors and be careful with word choice and grammar. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence (When I was a child...). Avoid accidental or inappropriate words. Use linking words to list details and give a concrete example (what competitions, what prizes). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: When I was a child, I loved dancing. I often took part in school competitions and won several prizes, especially in traditional dance events.

Suggestion: Answer directly and cohesively: start with a topic sentence confirming continuation since childhood, then briefly explain both hobbies and add a reason or specific example. Combine short fragments into full sentences and use linking words (and, also, because).

Example: Yes, I still have the same hobby: dancing. I also enjoy travelling, so both dancing and travelling are my hobbies because dancing keeps me active and travelling lets me explore new cultures.

Suggestion: Be more specific and concise: give a clear topic sentence, then give one or two contrasting examples of family members' hobbies. Use linking words (however, for example) and avoid repetition.

Example: No, my family and I have different hobbies. For example, my parents prefer gardening and cooking, while I enjoy dancing and travelling, so our interests are quite different.

× Yes, my hobby is travelling.

✓ Yes, my hobby is traveling.

The gerund/verb+-ing form is correct but spelling should use American English 'traveling' or British 'travelling' consistently. Use the form that matches the test's variety; here 'traveling' is more common in exams using American spelling. Also 'my hobby is traveling' is clearer than mixing 'hobby' with plural sense.

× I like to travel different places and uh, be and click some photos.

✓ I like to travel to different places and take some photos.

The phrase 'be and click some photos' is unidiomatic. After 'like to' use base verb 'travel' or 'travel to' and use 'take photos' instead of 'click photos' (everyday English). This fixes verb usage and word choice. Also add the preposition 'to' after 'travel' when specifying destinations.

× I like to enjoy the view very much.

✓ I enjoy the view very much.

Using 'like to enjoy' is wordy and awkward. 'Enjoy' already conveys liking; use simple present 'I enjoy' for habitual action. This corrects adverb placement and idiomatic usage.

× When I was suicide, I like to dance, I like to participate in different competition function in this school and win the many and I and also win many prizes.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to dance. I used to participate in different competitions and school functions and won many prizes.

'When I was suicide' is a severe word-choice error; the intended phrase is 'when I was a child'. Tense should be past ('liked', 'used to participate', 'won') for childhood habits. Plural 'competitions' and 'functions' required. The original is run-on; separate into two sentences for clarity.

× Do you have a hobby? Yes, still now my hobbies. Also dancing. Plus I like to travel also so both are my hobbies.

✓ Yes, I still have the same hobbies now. I also do dancing and I like to travel, so both are my hobbies.

Original has awkward structure and incorrect tense/aspect. Use present simple 'I still have' for current state. Combine fragments into full sentences and use 'I also do dancing' or better 'I also dance'. Ensure pronouns and verb forms match subject.

× No they they don't have same hobbies as mine because they like to do something else in their life. SO and I also like to do something else so we don't have the same hobbies.

✓ No, they don't have the same hobbies as me because they like to do different things in their lives, and I also like to do other things, so we don't have the same hobbies.

Fix double 'they they' and use 'as me' or 'as mine' (object form 'me' is natural here). Use plural 'lives' for different people and 'different things'/'other things' for clarity. Combine into one coherent sentence and correct capitalization ('SO').