Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 句子结构混乱，时态和主谓一致有错误，且答复冗长重复。应先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用1-2句具体细节并使用连接词让表达更连贯。注意动词形式（例如：play → playing），和时间短语的位置。

Example: Yes. I enjoy dancing and playing badminton. After school I take dance lessons with my teacher once a week, and during school I usually play badminton with my PE teacher or classmates to keep fit.

Suggestion: 时态混用（现在时与过去时混在一起），句子冗长且逻辑不清。回答应用过去时描述童年，同时提供具体原因或例子并用连接词衔接。避免重复“my dad”。

Example: Yes, I did. I loved playing badminton as a child and practiced with my father almost every day. He bought my first racket and believed that exercising would help me grow stronger, so he encouraged me to play regularly.

Suggestion: 表达不够清晰，有犹豫词和语法错误。应该直接说明是否持续有此爱好，并解释中间的变化，使用连词（e.g. however, but）使逻辑更顺畅。控制在不超过5句。

Example: Yes, mostly. I started badminton in primary school, although I briefly switched to volleyball for a while. However, I eventually returned to badminton and have been playing it regularly since then.

Suggestion: 句子较冗长且语法错误，时态和主谓一致需要调整。回答应先肯定或否定，然后给出具体原因或例子并用连接词。避免重复信息，注意名词和动词形式。

Example: Yes, my mother shares my interest in badminton and volleyball. She took those sports classes in high school, so sometimes we play badminton or volleyball together on weekends.

× Sure, my hobby is dancing and play badminton every week when I after school I would dance with my dancing teacher and everyday in school I would play badminton with my PE teacher or classmates.

✓ Sure. My hobbies are dancing and playing badminton. Every week after school I dance with my dancing teacher, and at school I play badminton every day with my PE teacher or classmates.

句子中“dancing and play badminton”并列时需用相同形式，应该是“dancing and playing badminton”。此外原句结构混乱，时态和频率副词位置不当。建议把句子拆成两句，动名词与名词并列统一形式，频率副词放在动词前或句中更自然。

× When I was a child I'm also really like play badminton but I play badminton everyday with my dad because my badminton is from by my dad and my dad think it can help me grow up so yes.

✓ When I was a child I really liked playing badminton. I played badminton every day with my dad because my racket was given to me by him and my dad thought it could help me grow.

原句混用现在时和过去时（"I'm"与"When I was a child"冲突），且动词形式不一致（"like play"应该是"liked playing"）。“is from by my dad”是被动表达错误，正确应为“was given to me by him”。动词时态需保持一致，描述过去事件用过去时。建议将时态统一为过去式，并用被动语态正确表达“被给予”。

× MMM To be honest in when I in primary school I'm sometimes I'm give up this and to play volleyball, but after that time I already play badminton again.

✓ To be honest, when I was in primary school I sometimes gave it up and played volleyball, but after that I returned to playing badminton.

原句中有多处结构混乱和时态错误（例如“in when I in primary school”“I'm sometimes I'm give up this”）。应删除多余词，保持过去时一致，动词搭配使用正确（"gave it up"表示放弃，"returned to playing"更自然）。建议先确定时间点（past），然后使用过去时的正确动词形式和短语动词。

× Of course my mom also like play badminton and volleyball because she say when she in the high school they had a volleyball and badminton class and so sometimes I play badminton and volleyball with my mom.

✓ Of course my mom also likes playing badminton and volleyball because she said that when she was in high school they had volleyball and badminton classes. So sometimes I play badminton and volleyball with my mom.

原句中动词与主语不一致（"my mom also like"应为"likes"），并列动词形式应统一（"playing badminton and volleyball"）。此外时态需保持一致，引用过去的说法用过去时（"she said"和"was in high school"）。建议注意主谓一致并用动名词表示爱好。