Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more accurate and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'I love baking' not 'to baking'), use correct words (e.g., 'friends' and 'group' instead of 'brand'), and give one or two specific examples with linking words. Avoid filler sounds and keep to fewer than five sentences.

Example: I enjoy baking and exercising with friends. For example, I meet my friend two or three times a week to jog by the stream, and on weekends I bake cakes or cookies to share with them.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and number (e.g., 'one of my childhood hobbies was'), avoid hesitations, and give clearer, accurate examples. Use a linking phrase to explain why you enjoyed it. Keep it concise and natural.

Example: Yes. One of my childhood hobbies was watching DVDs at home. For example, I loved Disney films such as the Princess stories because they helped me relax after school.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: start with a clear statement that you still have the hobby, then contrast past and present with a linking word (e.g., 'but' or 'however'). Fix grammar ('I love watching films' not 'to watching') and finish the sentence with a specific platform or routine. Avoid trailing off.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy watching films. In the past I watched DVDs on TV, but nowadays I usually stream movies on Netflix or other services because it is more convenient.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer and correct grammar: 'Yes, my interest in movies comes from my mother.' Use coherent linking (e.g., 'because' / 'so') and provide a specific routine with correct time expressions ('every Saturday evening'). Remove redundancies and filler words.

Example: Yes. My love of movies comes from my mother, so every Saturday evening my whole family gathers to watch films together on the TV.

× I love to baking and working out with my friends.

✓ I love baking and working out with my friends.

After 'love' when stating general preferences use the base verb or gerund. 'Love to baking' mixes 'to' with a gerund which is incorrect. Use 'love baking' or 'love to bake'. Suggestion: Use 'love baking' or 'love to bake' depending on style.

× I usually meet my brand two or three times a week and go to the stream and jogging with her.

✓ I usually meet my friend two or three times a week and go to the stream and jog with her.

'Brand' is likely a wrong word; 'friend' is correct. 'Go ... and jogging' mixes infinitive/gerund forms; use parallel verbs: 'go ... and jog' or 'go ... and go jogging'. Also 'to the stream' is fine. Suggestion: Use consistent verb forms and correct noun 'friend'.

× And also I bake some cake or cookies once.

✓ I also baked some cakes or cookies once.

The speaker refers to a past single event, so past tense 'baked' is needed. 'Some cake' is uncountable or use plural 'some cakes' for multiple items. Suggestion: Use past tense and appropriate countable form: 'I baked some cakes or cookies once.'

× Yes, one of my childhood hobby is watching DVDs at home.

✓ Yes, one of my childhood hobbies is watching DVDs at home.

Using 'one of' requires a plural noun 'hobbies'. Subject 'one' is singular so verb 'is' is correct. Suggestion: Change 'hobby' to 'hobbies'.

× I love to watch Disney films like Princess Stories or like Jihadi I Jihberry animations.

✓ I love to watch Disney films like Princess stories or Ghibli animations.

Proper nouns and titles should be correct; 'Jihadi I Jihberry' seems incorrect for Studio Ghibli. Use correct names and capitalize properly. Also 'Princess Stories' should be lowercased for 'stories' unless a title. Suggestion: Check proper names and spellings.

× It makes me unwind.

✓ They help me unwind.

If referring to films (plural), use plural subject 'They' and verb 'help' or keep 'It' only if speaking of the experience as a singular thing: 'Watching films helps me unwind.' Suggestion: Match subject number and use 'help' or rephrase as 'Watching films helps me unwind.'

× Umm yes, I think so because umm until these days I love to watching films or DVDs on on TV.

✓ Umm yes, I think so because until these days I love watching films or DVDs on TV.

'Love to watching' mixes 'to' with gerund; use 'love watching' or 'love to watch'. Remove duplicate 'on on'. Suggestion: Use 'love watching' and remove extra words.

× But uh different of in the past.

✓ But it's different from the past.

The correct preposition is 'different from' (or 'different than' in some dialects). The original phrase 'different of in' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use 'different from the past' or 'different than before.'

× These days streaming services are really well developed so I usually watch on.

✓ These days streaming services are really well developed, so I usually watch on them.

The phrasal verb 'watch on' requires an object: 'watch on them' or rephrase 'watch shows online.' The sentence also needs a comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: Add the object 'them' or rephrase to 'I usually watch online.'

× Yes, one of my hobbies that watching DVDs and movies are impact of my mother's hobbies.

✓ Yes, my hobby of watching DVDs and movies is influenced by my mother's hobbies.

Original sentence has incorrect relative clause and subject-verb agreement. 'One of my hobbies that watching DVDs and movies are impact of' is ungrammatical. Use 'my hobby ... is influenced by' to show cause. Suggestion: Rephrase to 'my hobby of watching DVDs and movies is influenced by my mother.'

× So every weekend I like every weekends on Saturday midnight my whole my families gathering in front of TV's and watch movie films.

✓ So every weekend, at around midnight on Saturdays, my whole family gathers in front of the TV and we watch films.

Multiple issues: redundant 'every weekend' and 'every weekends'; wrong plural 'families' instead of 'family'; verb agreement 'gathering' should be 'gathers'; 'TV's' should be 'the TV'; 'watch movie films' is awkward—use 'watch films' or 'watch a movie'. Suggestion: Simplify and correct plural/singular agreement and use proper time phrasing.

× Is kind.

✓ It's kind of like that.

'Is kind' is a fragment lacking subject and context. To convey meaning, use 'It's kind of like that' or rephrase appropriately. Suggestion: Provide a complete sentence with subject and verb.