Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but slightly unnatural and a bit formal. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid uncommon phrases like “being a bibliophile” unless you explain them, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it under 3–4 sentences.

Example: I enjoy reading books, which is my favorite hobby. For example, I usually read contemporary fiction and non-fiction because they help me relax and learn new ideas.

Suggestion: You repeat the same phrase and the grammar is slightly off. Give a direct answer (Yes/No + topic sentence), then add a specific supporting detail about childhood reading habits using a linking word. Use past tense correctly.

Example: Yes. I have loved reading since I was a child. For instance, I used to read picture books and adventure stories every night before bed, which sparked my interest in novels later on.

Suggestion: The sentence is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Answer directly and avoid repeating earlier lines. Use one linking word to connect idea of long-term habit and benefit, and fix grammar (e.g., “it has my hobbies” is incorrect).

Example: Yes, I have continued reading since childhood, and it helps me relax. For example, whenever I feel stressed, I read a short story because it calms me and takes my mind off problems.

Suggestion: This answer has several pronunciation/word choice and grammar issues (e.g., “stabbed handed”, “one of the favorite hobby”, repeated words). Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then explain similarities with a specific example and a linking word. Use correct vocabulary: “skilled” instead of unclear phrase, and name dishes accurately (e.g., idli, dosa, sambar).

Example: Yes, I share some hobbies with my mother because she is very skilled at cooking. For example, we both enjoy making South Indian dishes like idli, dosa and sambar, and we often cook together on weekends.

× Being a bibliophile, I love to read books. That is my favorite hobby.

✓ I am a bibliophile; I love reading books. That is my favorite hobby.

The original sentence starts with 'Being a bibliophile' which is grammatically acceptable but sounds less natural. Change to 'I am a bibliophile' or use 'I love reading books' with 'reading' as the correct -ing form to describe an ongoing hobby. This improves clarity and natural phrasing.

× As I earlier mentioned, being a bibliophile, I love to read books. That was my hobby since childhood.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I have been a bibliophile; I have loved reading books since childhood.

The original mixes past 'was' with 'since childhood', which requires a present perfect ('have been'/'have loved') to show an action continuing to the present. Also move 'earlier' after 'mentioned' for natural word order.

× As I have mentioned earlier, I'm a bibliophile. I love reading books, it has my hobbies and childhood because I feel so stress free after reading books.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I'm a bibliophile and I love reading books; it has been my hobby since childhood because reading makes me feel stress-free.

The original contains comma splices and awkward phrases ('it has my hobbies and childhood'). Use 'has been my hobby since childhood' to express continuity and replace 'feel so stress free' with 'makes me feel stress-free'. Combine clauses correctly using conjunctions or semicolons.

× As my mother is stabbed handed in cooking, that's also my one of the favorite hobby.

✓ My mother is skilled at cooking, and that is also one of my favorite hobbies.

'Stabbed handed' is incorrect; use 'skilled at' or 'good at'. 'That's also my one of the favorite hobby' has incorrect word order and article use; correct to 'one of my favorite hobbies'.

× I love to cook food like such as I love to make South Indian food idli tosa and sambar.

✓ I love to cook, especially South Indian dishes such as idli, dosa and sambar.

The phrase 'like such as' is redundant; use either 'like' or 'such as'. Use 'dishes' to pluralize and add commas between examples. Correct spelling 'dosa' and list items clearly.

× And my mother is also very perfect and she she also have the same hobby.

✓ My mother is also very good at cooking and she also has the same hobby.

'Perfect' is unnatural here; use 'very good at cooking'. Remove duplicate 'she'. Use correct verb agreement: 'she has' not 'she have'.