Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần nói rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và đúng ngữ pháp; tránh mâu thuẫn (ví dụ “I hate” vs “my favorite”). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi cho 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ hợp lý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (tenses, articles, plurals). Ví dụ cụ thể: tên thể loại sách, lợi ích cụ thể bạn nhận được và tần suất đọc.

Example: I have several hobbies, but my favorite is reading books. I usually read fiction and personal development books because they help me relax and give me new ideas. I read for about an hour every day, which has improved my vocabulary and critical thinking.

Suggestion: Cần dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I used to play football) và tránh từ sai/không cần thiết (“footballs”, “going award trial”, “keen spot”). Thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể về khi nào bạn chơi, với ai, và một kỷ niệm ngắn. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc và chỉnh ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement, verb forms, word choice).

Example: Yes, when I was a child I used to play football with my neighbors every weekend. Playing regularly improved my fitness and taught me teamwork. I remember once we won a small local tournament, which was very exciting.

Suggestion: Trả lời cần trực tiếp: xác nhận và nêu lý do rõ ràng. Tránh lỗi từ (volleyballs → volleyball), cụm từ không chính xác (“bring me a lot of choice”). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể: tần suất, vai trò bạn đảm nhận (như setter, captain), và cảm xúc kèm ví dụ ngắn. Giữ 2–4 câu, dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so”.

Example: Yes, I have loved playing volleyball since secondary school. I joined the school team and trained three times a week because it kept me fit and taught me discipline. Playing with friends always made me happy, especially when we won matches together.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng (Yes, we often watch TV together). Sửa cấu trúc câu, loại bỏ từ thừa và nói cụ thể loại chương trình hoặc thời gian (ví dụ: news, films, Sunday evenings). Nêu kết quả cụ thể về mối quan hệ và cảm xúc. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, we often watch television together as a family, usually films or news on Sunday evenings. Sharing this time helps us relax after a busy week and gives us topics to talk about, which strengthens our family bond.

× Actually I have a lot of hobbies but I hate my favorite hobbies is reading books.

✓ Actually I have a lot of hobbies, but my favorite hobby is reading books.

The sentence incorrectly mixes 'hate' and 'favorite' and uses plural 'hobbies' where singular 'hobby' is required. 'Favorite' should modify a singular noun 'hobby'. Remove 'hate' which is wrong in context and change 'hobbies is' to 'hobby is' to agree in number. Suggestion: Use 'my favorite hobby is' to introduce a single preferred activity.

× Firstly it's give me a lot of sentimental value and give me a lot of knowledge that I think is good problem my perspective and reading book is a very good hobbies that I keep myself to doing it's everyday.

✓ Firstly, it gives me a lot of sentimental value and a lot of knowledge, which I think is good from my perspective, and reading books is a very good hobby that I do every day.

Verbs need correct conjugation ('give' -> 'gives') and noun forms must match ('hobbies' -> 'hobby', 'reading book' -> 'reading books'). The relative clause should be 'which I think is good from my perspective'. 'Keep myself to doing it's everyday' is ungrammatical; use 'I do every day'. Suggestion: Place adverbs and clauses where they clearly modify the intended verb and use correct singular/plural forms.

× Actually, yes, I really love footballs going award trial, so I used to play it a lot.

✓ Actually, yes, I really loved football and went to award trials, so I used to play it a lot.

The plural 'footballs' is incorrect when referring to the sport; use 'football'. The phrase 'going award trial' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'went to award trials' or 'attended trials'. Tense consistency: when speaking about childhood, use past tense 'loved' and 'went'. Suggestion: Use the uncountable sport name 'football' and ensure verbs and nouns match past context.

× It's it's very good sport that improve lot of my health and improve my muscle a lot.

✓ It's a very good sport that improved my health a lot and built my muscles.

Missing article 'a' before 'very good sport'. 'Improve lot of my health' is ungrammatical; use 'improved my health a lot'. 'Improve my muscle' should be 'built my muscles' or 'improved my muscles'. Also use past tense 'improved' to match 'used to' context. Suggestion: Include articles and choose correct verbs ('improve' -> 'improved', 'build') and pluralize 'muscle' to 'muscles'.

× It's feel like a keen spot to me because it's bring me back a lot of memories and it's very fascinating too.

✓ It feels like a keen sport to me because it brings back a lot of memories and is very fascinating too.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It's feel' -> 'It feels'; 'it's bring' -> 'it brings'. 'Keen spot' should be 'keen sport'. Remove redundant 'too' at end or keep for emphasis. Suggestion: Check subject-verb agreement and correct word forms, and place verbs properly.

× Actually, yes, when I was a student at a secondary school, I found that I really love playing volleyballs because it bring me a lot of choice and also it's also good for my health.

✓ Actually, yes, when I was a student at secondary school, I found that I really loved playing volleyball because it brought me many choices and was also good for my health.

Use 'volleyball' (sport name) not 'volleyballs'. Tense consistency: past 'found' -> 'loved' and 'brought'. 'A lot of choice' should be 'many choices' or 'a lot of choice' depending on meaning; 'brought me many choices' is clearer. 'It's also good' -> 'was also good' for past context. Suggestion: Use singular sport names and maintain past tense for childhood activities.

× I play it with my friends every day and everywhere and it's is very fascinating sport that's make me feel very happy with.

✓ I played it with my friends every day and everywhere, and it was a very fascinating sport that made me feel very happy.

Tense should be past: 'play' -> 'played'. 'It's is' has redundant contraction; remove one. 'That's make' -> 'that made' for past. 'Happy with' is incomplete; remove 'with'. Suggestion: Ensure verb tense consistency and remove redundant words; make clauses complete.

× Actually, yes, I think it's would be watching television together.

✓ Actually, yes, I think it would be watching television together.

The contraction 'it's would' is incorrect; use 'it would be' without apostrophe. The structure 'I think it would be watching television together' is acceptable if answering 'Do you have the same hobbies as your family?'. Suggestion: Do not combine 'it is' and 'would' into 'it's would'; choose the correct auxiliary form.

× I think it's have made to a winning relax a lot after my working time and I think watching TV is with all the family members will strengthen our bonds and re improve my relationship with them.

✓ I think it helps me relax a lot after work, and watching TV with all the family members will strengthen our bonds and improve my relationships with them.

Sentence has multiple issues: 'it's have made to a winning relax' is ungrammatical; use 'it helps me relax'. 'after my working time' -> 'after work'. 'watching TV is with all the family members' -> 'watching TV with all the family members'. 're improve' -> 'improve'. Use plural 'relationships' or 'relationship' depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: Use clear verbs ('helps me relax'), correct prepositional phrases ('after work'), and remove redundant words.