Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và ngắn gọn (1-3 câu). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp (“best seller”, “meet meet”, “from the contract”). Dùng câu chủ đề rồi nêu 1-2 lý do cụ thể kết hợp liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ sửa các cấu trúc: "My favourite hobby is shopping with my friends because it helps me relax and socialize."

Example: My favourite hobby is shopping with my friends because it helps me relax and relieve stress. We also enjoy chatting and catching up while we try new things.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời đúng thì và dùng từ chính xác; câu mở đầu nên nêu rõ thời điểm (e.g., 'When I was a child'). Tránh dùng từ sai nghĩa ('kiss' → 'child'); trình bày lý do cụ thể, súc tích và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Nên nói rõ hoạt động và lợi ích thực tế (ví dụ: playing outside improved fitness and friendships).

Example: When I was a child, I enjoyed playing outdoors with my friends, especially recycling games and sports. These activities improved my fitness and helped me make close friends.

Suggestion: Trả lời trực tiếp và đúng thì (present perfect or present simple). Tránh lặp từ, ums và các mệnh đề rời rạc. Nêu rõ hoạt động, tần suất và một kết quả cụ thể (ví dụ: competitions, medals). Dùng liên từ để nối các ý (because, so, and).

Example: Yes. I have been swimming since I was a child and I usually swim with my friends at the weekend. I now compete in local swimming competitions and have won a few medals.

Suggestion: Cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes or No) và giải thích ngắn gọn bằng 1-2 câu. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (e.g., 'my parents taught me badminton', 'playing badminton improves my health and reduces stress'). Tránh lặp và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Example: Yes. My parents taught me how to play badminton and we often play together at the weekend. Playing badminton keeps me fit and helps me reduce stress while having fun with my family.

× I am a girl so my hobby is a lot but the best seller of me is go shopping with my friends.

✓ I am a girl, so I have many hobbies, but my favorite is going shopping with my friends.

The original sentence uses incorrect adjective/adverb forms and unnatural phrases ('hobby is a lot', 'best seller of me'). Replace with 'have many hobbies' (correct plural noun usage) and 'my favorite is going shopping' using the gerund after 'is'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× I can meet meet, mitigate my stress and pressure back by shopping and have the chat from the contract.

✓ I can meet friends, reduce my stress and pressure by shopping, and have chats to relax.

Use 'reduce' instead of 'mitigate my stress and pressure back' for natural wording. Use gerund/infinitive constructions appropriately: 'have chats' (noun) or 'chat' as a verb; here 'have chats' fits. Remove repeated word 'meet' and 'from the contract' is unclear; replaced with 'to relax'.

× When I was a kiss.

✓ When I was a child.

'kiss' is incorrect word choice; context asks about childhood, so 'child' is correct. This is a lexical error rather than tense, but it affects meaning. Use 'When I was a child' to indicate past time correctly.

× I love recycling with my friends.

✓ I loved recycling with my friends.

The examiner asked about past hobbies, so use past tense 'loved' to match the time frame. Maintain simple past for past habitual actions.

× It's enhanced my muscle and my health.

✓ It improved my muscles and my health.

Use 'improved' (past tense) instead of 'enhanced' plus incorrect structure 'my muscle'. Use plural 'muscles'. This clarifies the effect in the past.

× Secondly, I want I can spend time with my friend to have to catch up and have a friend chatting.

✓ Also, I could spend time with my friends to catch up and chat.

Original sentence has redundant and incorrect modal use ('I want I can'), awkward infinitives ('to have to catch up'), and incorrect noun forms. Use 'could' or 'was able to' for past ability/possibility; 'friends' plural; 'to catch up and chat' is concise and correct.

× Yes, absolutely when I will try.

✓ Yes, absolutely, when I was learning.

The student likely meant to indicate a habitual past or ongoing activity; 'when I will try' is incorrect future-tense use. Use past continuous or simple past like 'when I was learning' or 'when I tried'. Adjust tense to match context.

× I swim, uh, I swim with my friends at the weekend and now I become a swimmer.

✓ I swim with my friends at the weekend, and now I am a swimmer.

Combine clauses properly and use correct present simple and present state 'I am a swimmer' instead of 'I become a swimmer'. Maintain present tense for current habits and states.

× I enjoy take part in the swim competition.

✓ I enjoy taking part in swim competitions.

After 'enjoy' use the gerund 'taking'. Use plural 'competitions' for general activities. Also 'swim competition' is better as 'swimming competitions' or 'swim competitions'.

× I and I receive some some goals and hide A word.

✓ I have achieved some goals and earned awards.

Original is incoherent and contains repetition. 'Receive some goals' is wrong; likely intended 'achieved goals' and 'hide A word' perhaps 'had awards' or 'earned awards'. Corrected to a clear, grammatically correct expression.

× Absolutely my parent take me learn badminton so my part my my parents always play badminton with me at the weekend is improve my health and me and meditate my stress ensure my parents make me feel fun.

✓ Absolutely. My parents taught me badminton, so they always play badminton with me at the weekend. It improves my health and reduces my stress; playing with my parents is fun.

Multiple issues: 'parent' singular vs 'parents' plural, incorrect verb forms ('take me learn' -> 'taught me'), sentence run-on and tense inconsistent. Use past tense 'taught' for learning in the past, present simple 'they always play' for habitual action, 'improves' and 'reduces my stress' for correct verbs and word choices, and 'is fun' as natural expression.