Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời nên tự nhiên hơn, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác. Nói rõ loại sách bạn thích và lý do bằng 1-2 câu phụ trợ, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a best hobby that ever had' và dùng thì, mạo từ đúng.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially contemporary fiction and history. I like history because it helps me understand different cultures and events, and fiction relaxes me after a busy day.

Suggestion: Cần dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, thì nhất quán và từ vựng phù hợp (draw → drew/drawing). Thay 'skim' bằng từ chính xác như 'look at' hoặc 'browse'. Tối đa 3-4 câu, thêm lý do và cảm xúc cụ thể để phong phú nội dung.

Example: As a child I enjoyed drawing and spent a lot of time sketching animals and houses. I don't draw much now because of heavy homework, but when I have free time I like to look back at my old sketches for nostalgia.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp nhỏ và trật tự từ. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, với ai, cảm nhận). Tránh lặp từ và sai mạo từ như 'in the in the town'.

Example: Yes, I have ridden bikes with friends since I was a child. Whenever I visited my grandparents in their town, many children would ride together around the neighborhood, and I always found it exciting and freeing.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh và sửa ngữ pháp (members → family members, is → are). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể về hoạt động gia đình và so sánh với sở thích của bạn. Tránh câu lủng củng và từ lóng như 'search the phone'.

Example: No, my family members and I do not share the same hobbies. They are usually busy and tend to scroll through their phones or listen to music, whereas I prefer reading or cycling in my free time.

× Of course, reading books is generally a best hobby that ever had.

✓ Of course, reading books is generally the best hobby I have ever had.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'best hobby' and lacks an explicit subject for 'had'. Use 'the best hobby' for a superlative and include the subject 'I' with the present perfect 'have ever had' to express experience up to now. Suggestion: add 'the' before superlatives and include the subject 'I' with 'have ever had'.

× When I was a child I usually draw but now I don't do that because the homework is too much.

✓ When I was a child I usually drew, but now I don't do that because there is too much homework.

The sequence of time requires past tense 'drew' for habitual past actions. 'the homework is too much' is unnatural; use 'there is too much homework' to indicate quantity. Suggestion: use past tense for past habits and 'there is' with 'too much' for uncountable nouns.

× But when I have time I will skim the pictures I have drawn when I was little.

✓ But when I have time I skim through the pictures I drew when I was little.

'Skim' fits here better than 'skim the' and 'skimming through' or 'skim through' are common collocations. Also 'have drawn when I was little' mixes present perfect with a specific past time; use simple past 'drew' for actions at a specific time. Suggestion: use 'skim through' and simple past for completed past actions.

× Of course, yes, that is riding bikes with friends.

✓ Of course, yes, it is riding bikes with friends.

Use 'it is' as the dummy subject referring to 'a hobby'. Starting with 'that is' is awkward here; 'it is' is the correct present tense subject pronoun reference. Suggestion: use 'it is' when identifying or defining something.

× When I go to my grandparent house in the in the town, lots of children there riding bikes every day.

✓ When I go to my grandparents' house in the town, lots of children there ride bikes every day.

Use the possessive plural 'grandparents'' for house belonging to both grandparents. Remove duplicate 'in the'. For repeated habitual actions use simple present 'ride' not 'riding'. Suggestion: correct possessive form and use simple present for habitual actions.

× It's really fun.

✓ It's really fun.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is fine. (Included to show it's correct.)

× Absolutely not, my members is very busy so their hobby just search the phone or listening to music that's all.

✓ Absolutely not. My family members are very busy, so their hobbies are just browsing their phones or listening to music, that's all.

'My members' is incorrect; use 'my family members'. Subject-verb agreement: plural 'members' requires 'are'. 'Hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' to match 'members' and parallel activities. 'Search the phone' is unnatural; use 'browsing their phones'. Maintain parallel gerunds 'browsing' and 'listening'. Suggestion: use correct noun 'family members', make verbs agree in number, and use natural collocations like 'browsing phones'.