Part 1
Examiner
Do you have any hobbies?
Candidate
Yes, I like playing badminton in my free time. It can. Improve my skills and power.
Examiner
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, when I was 6. I often stay at home or watch the TV with my parents.
Examiner
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Candidate
Yes, I always cycling with my friends. When I was young. Now I do it for nine years.
Examiner
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Candidate
Yes, we often stay at home and watching TV together.
Do you have any hobbies?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误。应以主题句直接回答问题,然后用1–2个句子具体说明,例如说明频率、原因或带来的好处。注意完整句子和连词的使用,避免像“it can. Improve”这样的断句。
Example: Yes, I enjoy playing badminton in my free time. I usually play twice a week with friends because it helps me stay fit and improves my agility and power.
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答时语法时态不一致且句子断裂。应直接回答并用一到两句具体描述过去的活动和频率,使用过去时态并用连词连接。
Example: Yes, when I was a child I often stayed at home and watched TV with my parents. We watched cartoons and family programs almost every weekend.
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 句子结构和时态有问题,信息重复且不连贯。应先给出主题句说明是否持续至今,然后用一两句具体说明开始时间、频率和持续时间,使用适当的时态和连词。
Example: Yes, I have been cycling since I was a child. I started when I was about ten, and I have been cycling regularly with my friends for the past nine years.
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 句子中动词形式不一致,应使用完整句并给出具体例子或频率以丰富回答。可以说明喜欢看的节目或一起做的其他活动以增加内容。
Example: Yes, my family and I often stay at home and watch TV together in the evenings. We usually enjoy watching drama series or documentaries and sometimes discuss them after the show.
× Yes, I like playing badminton in my free time. It can. Improve my skills and power.
✓ Yes, I like playing badminton in my free time. It can improve my skills and power.
句中“can. Improve”被句号错误地拆分,且“Improve”首字母不应大写并且应与前面的情态动词“can”连用构成完整谓语“can improve”。建议将两部分合并为一个句子:"It can improve..."。这样语法完整且符合英语句子结构。
× Yes, when I was 6. I often stay at home or watch the TV with my parents.
✓ Yes, when I was 6, I often stayed at home or watched TV with my parents.
句中描述过去的习惯应使用一般过去时,"stay"和"watch"需改为过去式"stayed"和"watched"。此外,"when I was 6."不应以句号独立,应与主句用逗号连接并放在句首或从句中;"the TV"中通常不加定冠词,故改为"watched TV"。建议:将整句用过去时连为一完整句。
× Yes, I always cycling with my friends. When I was young. Now I do it for nine years.
✓ Yes, I always cycle with my friends. I have been doing it for nine years.
第一句表达现在的习惯应使用一般现在时,动词应为原形"cycle",故将"cycling"改为"cycle"(原句缺少助动词或错误形式)。第二句"When I was young."不完整且与时间信息重复,应删除或合并。第三句描述从过去持续到现在的动作,应使用现在完成进行时或现在完成时,这里用"have been doing"更自然,表示"持续做了九年"。因此改为"I have been doing it for nine years."。
× Yes, we often stay at home and watching TV together.
✓ Yes, we often stay at home and watch TV together.
句中并列动词形式应一致,原句为"stay... and watching",动词形式不一致。应把"watching"改为原形"watch"以与前面的"stay"并列。并且"stay at home"和"watch TV"语法正确,去掉多余的定冠词"the"。建议保持并列动词形式一致。