Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and limit to about 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy playing the guitar and drawing, and I sometimes play mobile games like Mobile Legends and Minecraft with my friends when we want to relax.

Suggestion: Correct tense and article errors, organize into a topic sentence plus a supporting detail, and use linking words (e.g., "when", "because"). Be specific about age or events and avoid filler words like "umm".

Example: Yes, I did. When I was in grade school I loved drawing and painting, and I often entered poster-making contests because my teachers encouraged creative projects.

Suggestion: Use the correct vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Begin with a direct answer, then give specific examples and a reason. Avoid repeating words and finish the sentence clearly.

Example: Yes, I've had drawing as a hobby since preschool. I especially like sketching colourful things around me, such as flowers, butterflies and gardens, because I enjoy capturing bright colours and natural details.

Suggestion: Answer directly with correct pronouns and grammar. Use one linking phrase to add a supporting detail about how you share the hobby (e.g., "we often"). Be specific about activities and keep sentences concise.

Example: Yes, my siblings and I share the same hobby of painting and making posters. We often enter poster-making contests together and have enjoyed participating since childhood.

× Yes, I have a hobbies, I like to play guitar, I like to draw and also sometimes I play mobile games like ML, Roblox and Minecraft with my friends.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby; I like to play the guitar, I like to draw, and also sometimes I play mobile games like ML, Roblox, and Minecraft with my friends.

The noun 'hobbies' is plural but 'a' requires a singular noun. Change 'a hobbies' to 'a hobby'. Also add 'the' before 'guitar' because we refer to the instrument in general (common English usage). Use commas and conjunctions to join list items correctly.

× Yes, I have a hobbies when I were a child especially I like to draw and paint umm when I was in grade school I participated a lot especially in poster making contest.

✓ Yes, I had a hobby when I was a child. I especially liked to draw and paint. When I was in grade school, I participated a lot, especially in poster-making contests.

The context refers to the past, so present tense 'have' and incorrect 'were' must be past tense: 'had' and 'was'. 'Like' should be past 'liked'. 'Poster making contest' should be plural 'contests' and hyphenated as 'poster-making contests' for compound noun clarity.

× That's when I adopt this hobby of my that that I like to draw, paint.

✓ That's when I adopted this hobby of mine, when I realized I liked to draw and paint.

Pronoun and verb forms are incorrect: 'adopt' should be past 'adopted' to match past context. 'This hobby of my' is incorrect; use 'this hobby of mine'. The phrase 'that that I like' is redundant; rephrase to 'when I realized I liked' for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Yes, and that hobby is showing because since I was in preschool, I really love to draw, especially the things around surround me, especially the flowers, the butterfly, the garden, everything that I see, everything that is colorful to my eyes. Yeah, I find it very, very.

✓ Yes, and that hobby is drawing, because since I was in preschool, I have really loved to draw, especially the things that surround me: the flowers, the butterflies, the garden, everything I see that is colorful. I find it very relaxing.

The intended noun is 'drawing', not 'showing'. Use present perfect 'have loved' to link past to present ('since I was in preschool'). 'Around surround me' is redundant; use 'that surround me'. Use plural 'butterflies'. The sentence ending 'I find it very, very' is incomplete; add a suitable adjective like 'relaxing' to finish the thought.

× Yes me and my sibling have the same hobbies and that is showing.

✓ Yes, my sibling and I have the same hobbies, and that is drawing.

Use correct word order and pronouns: 'my sibling and I' instead of 'me and my sibling'. 'Showing' is incorrect word choice; 'drawing' fits the context. 'Hobbies' plural is fine if both share multiple hobbies.

× My sister and brother love to paint, love to do poster making and me and them is really good when it comes in poster making contest.

✓ My sister and brother love to paint and to make posters, and my siblings and I are really good when it comes to poster-making contests.

Pronoun usage: replace 'me and them' with 'my siblings and I' for correct subject form. Use 'to make posters' or 'poster-making' for clarity. 'Is' must agree with plural subject; use 'are'. Use 'when it comes to' fixed prepositional phrase.

× We are participating a lot ever since we are we were a child.

✓ We have been participating a lot ever since we were children.

Use present perfect continuous 'have been participating' to express an action continuing from past to present with 'ever since'. 'We are we were a child' is ungrammatical; correct to 'we were children' for past reference and plural subject agreement.