Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and countable/uncountable issues (e.g., "free time" singular, "relax" vs "relaxed"). Avoid unsupported general statements like "some people don't like any hobbies."

Example: I don't have any regular hobbies at the moment because I have very little free time. However, when I do get a break, I usually relax by going for a walk or reading short articles online.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb tenses and forms (play, dance), and give specific details. Use a linking word to connect the example and an explanation about your mother's opinion.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child I enjoyed several hobbies; for example, I played football and learned to dance. However, my mother did not approve of my dancing because she thought it was too noisy.

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and use a clear structure: topic sentence, specific details, and linking words. Use correct continuous or perfect forms ("I've enjoyed music since childhood"). Mention one or two concrete examples rather than vague "a lot of things."

Example: Yes, I have. I have enjoyed listening to music since childhood, especially pop and folk songs. I also used to play simple computer games, and now I still listen to music whenever I have free time.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and correct phrasing ("we share some hobbies"). Use specific examples and linking words to explain similarities. Correct collocations such as "travel to other countries" and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, we share several hobbies. For example, we enjoy watching TV series together, and we often travel to other countries to experience new cultures and outdoor activities.

× No I don't have any hobbies because I don't have a free time.

✓ No, I don't have any hobbies because I don't have free time.

Use of the article 'a' before uncountable noun 'free time' is incorrect. 'Free time' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also add a comma after 'No' for natural speech pause. Suggestion: remove 'a' and write 'free time'.

× If I have free time I just relaxed and walking.

✓ If I have free time I just relax and go for a walk.

Mixed and incorrect verb forms: 'relaxed' is past tense and 'walking' lacks an auxiliary. In a habitual present conditional use base forms: 'relax' and 'go for a walk'. Also include an appropriate verb for walking. Suggestion: use present simple for habits.

× And another thing because some people doesn't like any hobbies.

✓ Also, some people don't like hobbies.

Subject-verb agreement: 'people' is plural and requires 'don't' not 'doesn't'. 'Any hobbies' is unnatural in affirmative; 'hobbies' suffices. Suggestion: use 'don't' with plural subjects and prefer 'hobbies' here.

× For example I played football and I dancing and and other things.

✓ For example, I played football and I danced and did other things.

Inconsistent verb forms: 'played' is past tense, 'dancing' is a present participle; use past tense 'danced' for parallel structure. 'Did other things' is a clearer past-tense phrase. Also remove duplicated 'and'. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent in past tense.

× But my mom didn't like my hobby.

✓ But my mom didn't like my hobby.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Explanation: Past tense with singular subject 'my mom' correctly uses 'didn't like'. Keeping the original is appropriate.

× Since a childhood I have uh, enjoy UH-2 music and playing uh, some game uh, and uh, I have when I have free time, uh, I uh, just uh, do a lot of things, but.

✓ Since childhood I have enjoyed music and played some games, and when I have free time I just do a lot of things.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'Since childhood' is the correct phrase (no article). After 'have' use past participle 'enjoyed' for the present perfect 'have enjoyed'. 'Playing some game' should be 'played some games' for past/habitual actions. Remove filler noises and unfinished 'but'. Suggestion: use 'have enjoyed' for ongoing experiences and keep verbs consistent.

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

✓ Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

This question is correct as written; no change needed. 'The' is not required before 'same hobbies' and the sentence is natural. Explanation: keep the original phrasing.

× Yes, we have the same of the same hobbies.

✓ Yes, we have the same hobbies.

Redundant phrase 'the same of the same' is incorrect. Simplify to 'the same hobbies' or 'the same interests'. Suggestion: remove repetition for clarity.

× For example, we enjoy watching TV and traveling another country and we enjoy new things outside.

✓ For example, we enjoy watching TV, traveling to other countries, and enjoying new experiences outdoors.

Preposition 'traveling another country' is incorrect; use 'traveling to other countries'. 'New things outside' is awkward; 'new experiences outdoors' is clearer. Also improve parallelism and pluralization. Suggestion: use 'travel to' and pluralize 'countries' if general, and use 'outdoors' for location.