Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with linking words. Correct articles, verb forms and word order (e.g., "a book" → "books"). Avoid repetition ("I have hobbies" twice).

Example: I do have several hobbies. For example, I often read books and sometimes go dancing, depending on my mood. Reading helps me relax, while dancing is a fun way to stay active.

Suggestion: Give a clear past-tense response with specific details and correct grammar. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "especially") to connect ideas. Avoid short fragmented sentences and correct tense ("I wanted" not "I want").

Example: Yes. When I was a child, I loved reading novels because I enjoyed stories about animals and adventures. For example, I would spend afternoons reading books about wildlife and imagining their lives.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, using correct tense and smoother phrasing. Explain reasons briefly with linking words like "however" or "but". Fix grammar ("played", "lost interest"). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Example: No, I haven't kept a single hobby since childhood. I tried drawing and playing games with friends, but I often lost interest and moved on to new activities. However, those experiences helped me try different things and discover what I enjoy now.

Suggestion: Respond clearly and use correct grammar and sentence structure. State who does what, using possessive forms and correct verbs. Use linking words ("for example", "while") to compare differences. Avoid repetition.

Example: No, my hobbies are different from my family members'. For example, my mother enjoys cooking, my father likes watching movies, while I prefer reading and dancing. So our interests don't really overlap.

× Yes I have hobbies sometimes I like reading a books and dance like it's depend on my mood but I have a hobbies.

✓ Yes, I have hobbies. Sometimes I like reading books and dancing; it depends on my mood, but I have hobbies.

Plural nouns: 'a books' and 'a hobbies' are incorrect. Use 'books' (no article) and 'hobbies' without 'a'. Also 'dance' as a noun/activity should be 'dancing' to match parallel structure with 'reading'. 'it's depend' should be 'it depends' (subject-verb agreement). Improve punctuation for clarity. Suggestions: remove incorrect 'a' before plural nouns, use gerund 'dancing', and ensure subject and verb agree.

× Yes, I was a child. I have a hobby. I want to read novels when I was a child because I like to stories like. Especially. Animal.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a hobby. I wanted to read novels when I was a child because I liked stories, especially about animals.

Tense consistency: mixing present tense ('I have', 'I want', 'I like') with past context 'when I was a child' is incorrect. Use past tense forms 'had', 'wanted', 'liked'. Also 'to stories like' is word order error and missing preposition 'about' for 'animals'. Combine fragments into complete sentences. Suggestions: keep past tense throughout, use 'about animals' and correct word order.

× Since childhood, no, I don't have a hobby that I will keep since childhood. I tried things like drawing and play with my friends when I was young, but I tend to the lost interest and start new activities as very well.

✓ Since childhood, no. I don't have a hobby that I have kept since childhood. I tried things like drawing and playing with my friends when I was young, but I tended to lose interest and start new activities.

Incorrect future tense implication 'I will keep since childhood' should be present perfect 'have kept' to describe continuity from past to present. Parallel form: 'drawing and play' should be 'drawing and playing'. 'tend to the lost interest' is wrong: use past tendency 'tended to lose interest'. Remove 'as very well' which is ungrammatical. Suggestions: use present perfect for ongoing states, use gerunds for parallel activities, and correct the phrase 'tend to lose interest'.

× No it's not same. My family here members have different hobbies like my mother had to cook in my father I had to watching movies. But I like to really like that. It's not same it's different.

✓ No, it's not the same. My family members have different hobbies: my mother likes to cook and my father likes watching movies. I really like those hobbies too. They are different.

Pronoun and determiner errors: 'it's not same' needs article 'the'. 'My family here members' is wrong order; use 'my family members'. Verbs: 'had to cook' and 'I had to watching' are incorrect; use 'likes to cook' and 'likes watching' to express habitual activities. 'But I like to really like that' is redundant; simplify to 'I really like those hobbies too'. Ensure plural agreement 'those'. Suggestions: use correct article 'the', proper word order, correct verb forms for habitual actions, and avoid redundant phrases.