Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer direct and clearer: state the hobbies in a concise topic sentence, then give one brief detail for each using correct grammar and linking words. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition. Focus on accurate vocabulary (e.g., “pet” not “Pat”) and natural word order.

Example: I have a couple of hobbies. First, I enjoy reading informative non-fiction books because they help me learn about new topics, and second, I love caring for my pet dog, who is like a close companion at home.

Suggestion: Answer directly with past tense and clear structure: state the hobby, give specific details (when, who with), and use linking words for cohesion. Correct grammar (past simple) and avoid unrelated phrases like “no idea about good and bad.” Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I used to play cricket a lot as a child. I played with my friends almost every weekend evening because it was a fun way to exercise and socialize.

Suggestion: Be concise and use past-to-present continuity: state the hobby and explain how it started and continues now. Use natural phrases (e.g., “since childhood,” “to learn more about”) and correct articles and prepositions.

Example: Yes, I have been reading informative books since childhood because I wanted to learn more about the world; I still read non-fiction books regularly to gain new knowledge.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer then briefly explain the difference with a specific reason and one short supporting detail. Use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., “interest in animals”) and avoid unclear phrases like “it's a quite similarity about them.”

Example: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. I love pets and enjoy caring for my dog, but my family members are not interested in animals and prefer other activities like gardening or reading.

× Yes, there are many hobbies, but I am quite interested in one or two in the first one is reading the informative books and the other one is Pat's lover as I also kept a little dog at my home.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies, but I am especially interested in one or two. The first one is reading informative books, and the other is being a pet lover because I have a small dog at home.

The sentence has plural and countability issues and general sentence structure problems. 'There are many hobbies' is awkward; use 'I have many hobbies' (subject ownership). 'Reading the informative books' should be 'reading informative books' (no definite article and plural acceptable). 'Pat's lover' is incorrect and likely meant 'pet lover'. 'I also kept a little dog' uses wrong tense and verb; use 'I have a small dog' to indicate current possession. Split into two sentences for clarity and correct word order. Suggestion: Use accurate nouns (pet, not Pat), omit unnecessary articles, use present simple for current facts, and break long run-on sentence into shorter sentences.

× Yes, of course, at that time I have no idea about good and bad, but at that time I am keen interested in playing the cricket all the time.

✓ Yes, of course. At that time I had no idea about right and wrong, but I was very keen on playing cricket all the time.

The student mixes present tense with past context. 'At that time' indicates past, so verbs must be past: 'have' -> 'had', 'am keen' -> 'was keen'. 'Interested in' should be 'keen on' or 'interested in' with correct structure. Also use 'cricket' without 'the'. Suggestion: Match verb tense to time expressions and use correct collocations (keen on, play cricket).

× Whenever I have a free time, I can play the cricket with my friends in the evening weekend.

✓ Whenever I have free time, I used to play cricket with my friends on weekend evenings.

'A free time' is incorrect; use 'free time' (uncountable). 'Can play' is odd in past narrative; 'used to play' fits habitual past. 'The cricket' should be 'cricket'. 'In the evening weekend' is awkward; use 'on weekend evenings'. Suggestion: Use uncountable forms for time expressions, choose appropriate tense for habitual past actions, and correct prepositional phrases for time.

× Yes, I think so. It's the reading the informative books because when I was in my childhood, I mostly read the informative books to gain my knowledge as well as to obtain more information about the in nature yet.

✓ Yes, I think so. It's reading informative books because when I was a child, I mostly read informative books to gain knowledge and to learn more about nature.

Several issues: 'It's the reading the informative books' should be 'It's reading informative books' (no articles). 'When I was in my childhood' is incorrect; use 'when I was a child'. 'Gain my knowledge' should be 'gain knowledge'. 'Obtain more information about the in nature yet' is ungrammatical; likely 'learn more about nature'. Use simple past 'was' and 'read' for past actions. Remove unnecessary words like 'yet.' Suggestion: Use correct noun phrases without extra articles, standard expression 'when I was a child', and consistent simple past for past habits.

× No, I don't have the same hobbies as my family members I think so it's a quite similarity about them because I am a pet lover and they are not interested in the animals so at that point.

✓ No, I don't have the same hobbies as my family members. I don't think we are very similar in that respect because I am a pet lover and they are not interested in animals.

Pronoun and sentence structure problems: 'family members I think so it's a quite similarity about them' is ungrammatical. Use clear pronouns and structures: 'I don't think we are very similar in that respect.' 'The animals' should be 'animals' (general). 'So at that point' is unnecessary and unclear. Suggestion: Use clear subject pronouns and concise phrases; avoid literal translations or filler phrases. Use 'in that respect' for comparing hobbies.