Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more concise, correct grammar, and add specific examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, use one or two supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, and, such as, when) to make your ideas flow.

Example: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy arts and crafts, such as making mosaic pieces and handmade decorations, and I also like gardening. For example, on weekends I make small mosaic coasters and tend to my herb pots in the balcony.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence about a childhood hobby, then add one specific detail or memory. Correct verb tenses and use linking words (for example, when, so) to organize your answer. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I did. As a child I loved painting and making crafts. For example, I used colored paper to create paper flowers and small model cars, and I often spent afternoons crafting with my friends.

Suggestion: Respond directly and use correct tense and clearer phrasing. State the hobby, explain continuity since childhood, and give a specific example of what you paint. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Example: Yes. Painting has been my favorite hobby since childhood and I still paint regularly. I especially enjoy drawing nature scenes, so when I travel I often sketch landscapes and trees that inspire me.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer, then contrast with one or two family hobbies using linking words (however, while). Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'different from', 'arts and crafts') and avoid repetition. Provide a brief example of how your hobby differs or something you do together occasionally.

Example: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. While they prefer reading and writing, I enjoy arts and crafts and gardening. For instance, I often make handmade cards while my sister reads novels, and sometimes we exchange books and crafts.

× Yes, I have too many hobbies, I like to do art and craft activity and also I like to care about my plan because I love gardening.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies; I like doing arts and crafts, and I also like to take care of my plants because I love gardening.

'Too many' implies an excessive amount; 'many' is more appropriate. 'Art and craft activity' should be pluralized and use the gerund 'doing' to indicate habitual activities. 'Care about my plan' is incorrect; context shows 'take care of my plants' fits gardening. Use of a semicolon and commas improves sentence flow and separates clauses.

× So whenever I'm free I'm doing the art and craft activity where I can made some head handmade items like mosaic art, lipin.

✓ So whenever I'm free I do arts and crafts where I can make some handmade items like mosaic art and lipin.

Use the simple present 'I do' for habitual actions rather than 'I'm doing'. 'Made' is past tense; the base form 'make' should follow 'can'. 'Head handmade' is incorrect; 'handmade items' is correct. Use plural 'arts and crafts' and conjunction 'and' between examples.

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child? Student: Yes I have hobby from my childhood I loved to painting and also art and craft.

✓ Yes, I had hobbies in my childhood; I loved painting and doing arts and crafts.

The question asks past habits, so use past tense 'had' and 'loved'. 'I have hobby from my childhood' incorrectly uses present tense and missing articles; 'hobbies in my childhood' is natural. 'Loved to painting' is incorrect verb form; use 'loved painting' or 'loved to paint'. 'Art and craft' should be 'arts and crafts'.

× When since my childhood I am doing the art and craft activity like different colors, paper I can use make different different shape flowers then small car.

✓ Since my childhood I have been doing arts and crafts, using different colors and papers to make various shapes, like flowers and small cars.

For an action that began in the past and continues to the present, use present perfect continuous 'have been doing'. 'When' is redundant with 'since'. Use plural 'papers' and 'various' for 'different different'. 'I can use make' is incorrect sequence; use 'to make' or 'using ... to make'.

× Yes, painting is my one of the favorite hobby and now I'm also like the do the painting from my childhood.

✓ Yes, painting is one of my favorite hobbies and I still like painting as I did in my childhood.

'One of the favorite hobby' mixes singular and plural; correct form is 'one of my favorite hobbies'. 'I'm also like the do the painting' is ungrammatical; use 'I still like painting'. Keep tense consistent to show continuity.

× This hobby is never change.

✓ This hobby has never changed.

Use present perfect passive 'has never changed' to indicate a state that has remained unchanged up to now. 'Never change' is incorrect form and tense.

× I love to draw nature pictures if I'm going wherever I you I view the any scene.

✓ I love to draw pictures of nature; whenever I go somewhere, I try to capture any scene I see.

Original has incorrect pronouns and word order: 'I'm going wherever I you I view the any scene' is ungrammatical. Clarify with 'whenever I go somewhere' and 'any scene I see'. Use 'pictures of nature' for natural phrasing.

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members? Student: No, my hobby is different rather than the family.

✓ No, my hobbies are different from my family's.

Use plural 'hobbies' to match 'family members'. 'Different rather than the family' is awkward; use 'different from my family's'.

× My family members like reading, writing like that hobbies.

✓ My family members enjoy hobbies like reading and writing.

'Like that hobbies' is incorrect quantifier and structure. Use 'hobbies like' or 'such as' followed by gerunds 'reading and writing'.

× But I love art and craft, and as I mentioned above, I love gardening. So whenever I'm free, I'm doing work with art and graph activity.

✓ But I love arts and crafts, and as I mentioned above, I love gardening. So whenever I'm free, I work on arts and crafts projects.

Again, use simple present 'I work' or 'I do' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm doing'. 'Art and graph' is likely 'arts and craft' misspelled; 'projects' clarifies the activity. Use plural 'arts and crafts'.