7 分範例

問題: Do you think that spending time in front of a screen helps people relax?

思路 1

Yes,for entertainment and leisure
是的,為了娛樂和休閒。
考官答案
I'd say it depends. If we watch a movie or TV show with the family for fun, then yes, it's a good way to relax. We can talk about what we're watching. But if we just sit and scroll through social media on our phones, I don't think it's good for anyone. It means we just spend hours looking at videos without thinking. That's not what I call relaxing.
我會說這取決於情況。
I’d say it depends really. If we watch a film or TV show with the family for fun, then yes, this is a good way to unwind. We can chat about what we are watching or talk about it afterwards. But if we just sit on our phones scrolling through social media, then I don’t think this benefits anyone and it just means we spend hours scrolling through mindless videos without thinking. This isn’t my idea of relaxing.
我想這取決於情況。如果我們和家人一起看電影或電視節目,享受一下,那麼是的,這是一種很好的放鬆方式。我們可以聊聊我們正在觀看的內容,或者事後談談。但如果只是坐在手機上,在社交媒體上滑動,我覺得這對任何人都沒有好處,只會讓我們花幾個小時無所事事地滑動無聊的視頻,而不去思考。這不是我認為的放鬆方式。
語法分析
條件句:“如果我們和家人一起觀看電影或電視劇” 使用條件句表達不同情況下的放鬆方式,增強了句子的邏輯性和情境模擬。 過去分詞作狀語:“scrolling through social media” 過去分詞片語作狀語,描述了一種不太積極的休閒活動,增加了句子的具體性和描述性。 現在分詞作定語:“花幾個小時在毫無意義的影片中瀏覽” 現在分詞作定語,描述了浪費時間的具體行為,增加了句子的詳細性和批判性。
高分詞匯
  • unwind
    放鬆
  • scrolling through
    滾動閱讀
  • social media
    社交媒體
  • benefits
    好處
  • mindless
    無心的

思路 2

No, there are potential negative effects
不,這可能會帶來負面效應。
考官答案
Definitely not. We spend so much time in front of screens at school or work that it's hurting our eyes. Many people need glasses now because they look at computers or phones so much. A lot of people also use their phones before bed, and this makes it harder for them to fall asleep.
絕對不是。在學校或工作時,我們花了太多時間盯著螢幕,這對我們的眼睛造成傷害。許多人現在需要戴眼鏡,因為他們花太多時間看電腦或手機。許多人在睡前也使用他們的手機,這使得他們更難入睡。
Definitely, not. We spend so much time in front of a screen at school or work that our eyes are suffering. There are so many people today that need glasses because of the amount of time they’ve spent looking at a computer or their phone. Lots of people scroll through their phones before bed too and this makes it harder for them to fall asleep.
絕對不。在學校或工作時我們在螢幕前花費了太多時間,導致我們的眼睛受到影響。如今有許多人因為長時間盯著電腦或手機而需要戴眼鏡。許多人在睡前也會捲動手機,這讓他們更難入睡。
語法分析
現在進行時:“We spend so much time” 使用現在進行時表達持續的活動,強調在螢幕前花費時間的現象,增加了句子的時效性和實際性。 現在分詞作狀語:“scrolling through their phones before bed” 現在分詞作狀語,描述睡前的特定行為,增加了句子的生動性和描述性。
高分詞匯
  • suffering
    痛苦
  • scroll through their phones
    滑動他們的手機
  • fall asleep
    入睡

思路 3

Sometimes, for relaxation
有時候,為了放鬆身心
考官答案
It depends on what they watch. Some people like watching calm nature shows to relax, and it works for them. Others do yoga online or breathing exercises, which is also relaxing. These activities on devices can be calming and a way to escape. We don't always have to stop thinking when we're in front of a screen.
這取決於他們觀看什麼。有些人喜歡觀看平靜的大自然節目來放鬆身心,對他們有效。其他人在線上做瑜伽或呼吸練習,這也具有放鬆效果。使用設備進行這些活動可以鎮定情緒,也是一種逃避的方式。我們不一定要在面對螢幕時停止思考。
It depends what they look at. Some people watch nature programs of tranquil scenes to help them relax and this works for them. Others do a yoga class online or follow some breathing exercises and this is also a good way to relax. These kinds of activities on digital devices are relaxing and are a form of escapism. We don’t have to switch off mentally everytime we sit in front of a screen.
這取決於他們觀看的內容。有些人觀看寧靜場景的自然節目來幫助他們放鬆,並且對他們有效果。其他人在線上上瑜伽課或跟隨一些呼吸運動,這也是一種放鬆的方式。在數位設備上進行這類活動是一種放鬆並且是一種逃避的形式。我們不必每次坐在屏幕前都要在心理上關掉。
語法分析
條件句:“看他們的內容會由看到的東西而定” 使用條件句,表達不同的觀看內容可能帶來不同的效果,增加了句子的邏輯性和情境模擬。 現在分詞作狀語:“看大自然節目” 和 “在線上做瑜伽課程” 使用現在分詞片語作狀語,描述具體的放鬆活動,使句子更加具體和生動。 動名詞作主語:“在心理上放鬆” 作為句子主語,強調在螢幕前並不總是需要停止思考,增加了句子的描述性和深度。
高分詞匯
  • nature programs
    自然節目
  • tranquil scenes
    寧靜的景色
  • breathing exercises
    呼吸練習
  • escapism
    逃避现实
  • switch off mentally
    心靈關閉