7 分範例

問題: Would you like to see more parks in your city?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. Parks are good places to relax and get away from the busy city life. They also help make the air cleaner and give people a place to exercise or take their kids to play.
是的，我希望在我的城市看到更多的公園。公園是放鬆和遠離繁忙城市生活的好地方。它們也有助於淨化空氣，並為人們提供運動或帶孩子去玩的場所。
Yes, I’d definitely like to see more parks in my city. Parks provide a great escape from the hustle and bustle of city life, and having more green spaces would mean cleaner air and a more beautiful environment. Plus, they’re perfect for exercising or spending time with family and friends.
是的，我非常希望在我的城市看到更多的公園。公園提供了一個遠離城市喧囂的絕佳去處，擁有更多的綠地意味著空氣更清新，環境更美麗。此外，公園也是運動或與家人朋友共度時光的理想場所。
語法分析
1. 情態動詞：「I’d definitely like to see」使用了情態動詞「would」（縮寫為「I’d」），這種用法在表達願望或偏好時顯得自然且禮貌。 2. 假設句結構：「having more green spaces would mean cleaner air and a more beautiful environment」使用了第二條件句結構來談論假設性的好處，顯示出對複雜語法的良好掌握。 3. 平行結構：「exercising or spending time with family and friends」使用了平行結構來列舉活動，使句子清晰流暢。
高分詞匯
  • escape from the hustle and bustle
    逃離喧囂繁忙
  • green spaces
    綠地
  • cleaner air
    更清潔的空氣
  • beautiful environment
    美麗的環境
  • exercising
    運動
  • spending time with family and friends
    與家人和朋友共度時光

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I think there are already enough parks in my city. I don’t really go to parks much, so having more wouldn’t really affect me. I think the city should focus on other things, like better public transport.
不，我認為我的城市已經有足夠的公園了。我不太常去公園，所以多建一些對我影響不大。我覺得城市應該專注於其他事情，比如改善公共交通。
No, I don’t think we need more parks in my city. To be honest, I rarely visit parks myself, so it wouldn’t make much difference to me. I feel the city should prioritize other improvements, such as upgrading public transport or building more schools.
不，我不認為我們的城市需要更多公園。說實話，我自己很少去公園，所以對我來說影響不大。我覺得城市應該優先考慮其他改善，比如升級公共交通或建更多學校。
語法分析
1. 模態動詞的使用：「should」用來表達意見和建議，這對於雅思口語第一部分是適當的。 2. 條件句的使用：「so it wouldn’t make much difference to me」使用條件句來表達假設情況，顯示了在表達個人影響方面的良好語法掌握。
高分詞匯
  • rarely visit parks
    很少去公園
  • prioritize other improvements
    優先考慮其他改進事項
  • upgrading public transport
    升級公共交通
  • building more schools
    建造更多學校
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