7 分範例

問題: Did you like going to parks as a child?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child. I used to play on the swings and slides with my friends, and my parents often took me there for picnics on weekends. It was really fun and I could run around a lot.
是的,我小時候喜歡去公園。我常常和朋友們一起玩鞦韆和滑梯,父母也經常在週末帶我去那裡野餐。那真的很有趣,我可以跑來跑去。
Absolutely, I loved going to parks as a child. I remember spending hours on the swings and slides with my friends, and my parents would often take me for picnics on weekends. Parks were the perfect place to burn off energy and meet other kids, so I have a lot of great memories from those times.
當然,我小時候很喜歡去公園。我記得和朋友們在鞦韆和滑梯上玩了好幾個小時,父母週末常常帶我去野餐。公園是消耗精力和認識其他孩子的完美地方,所以我有很多美好的回憶。
語法分析
1. 過去式:答案持續使用過去簡單式(「loved」、「remember」、「would often take」)來描述兒時的經歷,這適合用來描述過去的習慣和回憶。 2. 使用描述性細節:答案使用描述性的短語和例子(「spending hours on the swings and slides」、「picnics on weekends」)來增加內容的深度,使答案更加生動且吸引人。
高分詞匯
  • spending hours
    花費數小時
  • swings and slides
    盪鞦韆和滑梯
  • picnics on weekends
    週末野餐
  • burn off energy
    燃燒能量
  • meet other kids
    認識其他孩子
  • great memories
    美好的回憶

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I didn't really like going to parks when I was young. I preferred staying at home playing video games or reading books. Also, there weren't many nice parks near my house.
不,我年輕的時候不太喜歡去公園。我更喜歡待在家裡玩電子遊戲或看書。而且,我家附近沒有很多漂亮的公園。
To be honest, I wasn't a big fan of going to parks as a child. I much preferred staying indoors, either playing video games or getting lost in a good book. Plus, there weren't many nice parks near my home, so I didn't really have the chance to enjoy them.
說實話,我小時候並不是很喜歡去公園。我更喜歡待在室內,要麼玩電子遊戲,要麼沉浸在一本好書中。此外,我家附近也沒有很多好的公園,所以我並沒有太多機會去享受它們。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態:答案持續使用過去簡單時態("wasn't," "preferred," "weren't," "didn't have")來談論童年的習慣和情況,這對描述過去的經驗是合適的。 2. 平行結構:使用平行動詞("playing video games or getting lost in a good book")使句子流暢且清晰地列出活動。
高分詞匯
  • wasn't a big fan of
    不是很喜歡
  • staying indoors
    待在室內
  • playing video games
    玩電子遊戲
  • getting lost in a good book
    沉浸在一本好書中
  • didn't really have the chance
    並沒有真正的機會