7 分範例

問題: Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I think it’s a good idea. If I forget my keys or lose them, my neighbour can help me. Also, they can water my plants or feed my pets when I’m not at home. I did this before and it worked well for me.
是的,我認為這是個好主意。如果我忘記帶鑰匙或弄丟了,鄰居可以幫助我。此外,當我不在家時,他們也可以幫我澆花或餵寵物。我以前這樣做過,效果很好。
Yes, I believe it’s a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour. It’s really convenient in case you forget or lose your keys, and it also helps build trust and good relationships in the community. For example, I’ve done this before, and my neighbour was able to help me when I accidentally locked myself out of my apartment.
是的,我相信把鑰匙留給鄰居是一個好主意。這樣做非常方便,以防你忘記或丟失鑰匙,並且有助於建立社區中的信任和良好關係。例如,我以前也這麼做過,當我不小心把自己鎖在公寓外時,我的鄰居能夠幫助我。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單式和現在完成式的使用:答案使用現在簡單式(「I believe」、「it’s convenient」、「it helps」)來表達一般意見和事實,並使用現在完成式(「I’ve done this before」)來談論與現在相關的過去經驗。 2. 條件子句的使用:「in case you forget or lose your keys」是一個條件子句,說明了一種可能的情況,展示了使用複雜句型的能力。 3. 過去簡單式的使用:「my neighbour was able to help me」和「I accidentally locked myself out」正確地使用過去簡單式來描述過去的特定事件。
高分詞匯
  • convenient
    方便
  • build trust
    建立信任
  • good relationships
    良好的人際關係
  • accidentally locked myself out
    不小心把自己鎖在外面了

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I don’t think it’s a good idea because it might not be safe. If you don’t know your neighbour well, they could lose your keys or even use them without asking. I think it’s better to leave keys with family.
不,我認為這不是一個好主意,因為這可能不安全。如果你不太了解你的鄰居,他們可能會弄丟你的鑰匙,甚至在未經允許的情況下使用。我覺得把鑰匙留給家人比較好。
No, I don’t think it’s a good idea, especially if you don’t know your neighbour very well. There’s always a risk of losing privacy or even having your belongings stolen. Personally, I would rather leave my keys with a family member, as I’ve heard stories where neighbours lost the keys or used them without permission.
不,我不認為這是個好主意,尤其是當你不太認識你的鄰居時。總是有失去隱私甚至被偷東西的風險。就我個人而言,我寧願把鑰匙交給家人,因為我聽過鄰居丟失鑰匙或未經允許使用鑰匙的故事。
語法分析
1. 條件句結構:「especially if you don’t know your neighbour very well」使用第一條件句來談論一個可能的情況及其後果。 2. 被動語態:「having your belongings stolen」和「used them without permission」皆使用被動語態,為答案增添多樣性和深度。 3. 現在完成式:「I’ve heard stories」使用現在完成式來指涉至今的經驗,這在此情境中是合適的。
高分詞匯
  • risk of losing privacy
    隱私流失的風險
  • having your belongings stolen
    被偷竊財物
  • heard stories
    聽過故事
  • lost the keys
    丟失了鑰匙
  • used them without permission
    未經許可使用他們

思路 3

It Depends
視情況而定
考官答案
It depends. If you know your neighbour for a long time and trust them, it’s okay. But in big cities, people are more careful. I would only do it if I really trusted my neighbour.
這取決於情況。如果你認識你的鄰居很長時間並且信任他們,那沒問題。但在大城市,人們會更加謹慎。只有當我真正信任我的鄰居時,我才會這麼做。
I think it really depends on the situation. If you’ve known your neighbour for a long time and trust them, it can be a good idea, especially in small towns where people are closer. However, in big cities, people tend to be more cautious, and if you have a security system, you might not need to leave a key with anyone at all. I would only consider it if I felt completely comfortable with my neighbour.
我認為這真的取決於情況。如果你認識你的鄰居很久並且信任他們,這可能是一個好主意,尤其是在小城鎮,人們彼此較親近。然而,在大城市,人們往往比較謹慎,如果你有安全系統,可能根本不需要把鑰匙交給任何人。只有當我對鄰居感到完全放心時,我才會考慮這樣做。
語法分析
1. 條件句:答案使用了第一條件句("If you’ve known your neighbour for a long time and trust them, it can be a good idea")和假設條件句("I would only consider it if I felt completely comfortable with my neighbour"),展示了表達不同可能性的靈活性。 2. 對比結構:"However" 的使用引入了對比的觀點,有助於邏輯且清晰地組織答案。 3. 情態動詞的使用:"can be a good idea," "might not need," 和 "would only consider" 展示了情態動詞在表達可能性、必要性和假設情況方面的良好運用。
高分詞匯
  • depends on the situation
    視情況而定
  • trust them
    相信他們
  • closer
    更近
  • cautious
    謹慎
  • security system
    安全系統
  • consider it if I felt completely comfortable
    如果我感覺完全舒適,我會考慮它