礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也说明了原因和常送的礼物。注意用逗号连接完整句子会造成句子粘连，可以用“and”或句号；“a chocolate”可改为“a bar of chocolate”，“that person”前加“the”。

範例: No, I’m not very good at choosing gifts because I often struggle to think of something suitable. I usually buy a bar of chocolate or a gift card, but I always worry that the person might not like it.

建議: 回答直接，理由清楚，表达也比较自然。最后一句补出“give gifts”，避免省略得不够完整；还可以加一个具体例子，让内容更生动。

範例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays and weddings. It’s a lovely way to celebrate and show someone that I care. I also give gifts during festivals like Chinese New Year, when I often bring fruit or snacks to visit relatives.

建議: 回答思路合适，但有多处语法和用词错误：“the needs”应改为“their needs”；“hintings”不是这里合适的词，可用“hints”；“they’ve given”后需要明确宾语。最后一句应改为“that way, the gift feels more personal and shows that I care”。

範例: I usually think about the person’s interests and needs when choosing a gift. For example, I try to remember their hobbies or any hints they’ve dropped about what they would like. That way, the gift feels more personal and shows that I’ve put some thought into it.

建議: 回答完整，并用编织围巾提供了具体例子。注意“a scarf for my friends”单复数不一致：如果是一条围巾，应说“for a friend”；泛指手工礼物时，“handmade gifts”前通常不加“the”。

範例: Yes, I have. Last winter, I knitted a scarf for a friend. I think handmade gifts are special because they show that you care and have put time and effort into making something personal.

建議: 观点明确，但后两句有明显用词和语法问题。“always be better”应为“are always better”；“the sort behind the gift”可改为“the thought behind the gift”；“carrying more”应为“means more”，“closely”应为“costly”。

範例: No, I don’t think expensive gifts are always better. It’s more about the thought behind the gift than its price. A handmade present or a nice day out together can mean more than something costly.

× So I just give something simple like a chocolate or a gift card, I always worry that person may not like it.

✓ So I just give something simple like a chocolate or a gift card. I always worry that the person may not like it.

原句用逗号连接了两个可以独立成句的完整句子，构成逗号拼接错误。应使用句号分开，或添加适当的连词。

× So I just give something simple like a chocolate or a gift card, I always worry that person may not like it.

✓ So I just give something simple like a chocolate or a gift card. I always worry that the person may not like it.

这里指前文语境中收到礼物的那个人，通常需要在 person 前加定冠词 the。

× I also give during festivals like Chinese New Year.

✓ I also give gifts during festivals like Chinese New Year.

give 在这里需要说明给予什么；补上 gifts 后，句子结构完整，意思也更明确。

× Well, when I choose a gift, I think about what a person likes and the needs.

✓ Well, when I choose a gift, I think about what a person likes and needs.

原句中 what a person likes 与 the needs 的结构不平行。将 needs 改为与 likes 并列的动词 needs，表达“喜欢什么以及需要什么”。

× I try to remember their hobbies or any hintings They given this way the gift feels more personal and the shows I care.

✓ I try to remember their hobbies or any hints they have given me. This way, the gift feels more personal and shows that I care.

hintings 不是这里表示“线索、提示”时合适的复数形式，应使用 hints。可记住：hint 的复数形式是 hints。

× I try to remember their hobbies or any hintings They given this way the gift feels more personal and the shows I care.

✓ I try to remember their hobbies or any hints they have given me. This way, the gift feels more personal and shows that I care.

given 是过去分词，不能在这里单独作谓语。表达“他们给过我的提示”时，需要在过去分词前加 have，构成现在完成时：have given。

× I try to remember their hobbies or any hintings They given this way the gift feels more personal and the shows I care.

✓ I try to remember their hobbies or any hints they have given me. This way, the gift feels more personal and shows that I care.

原句把多个意思不同的部分直接连在一起，缺少恰当的句子边界和标点。应在完整句子后使用句号，并用 This way 引出结果。

× I try to remember their hobbies or any hintings They given this way the gift feels more personal and the shows I care.

✓ I try to remember their hobbies or any hints they have given me. This way, the gift feels more personal and shows that I care.

shows 在这里是动词，意思是“表明”，前面不能加定冠词 the。去掉 the 后，shows 才能与主语 the gift 搭配作谓语。

× I think the handmade gifts are special because they show you care and put in effort.

✓ I think handmade gifts are special because they show you care and put in effort.

这里是在泛指手工礼物，并非指特定的一批礼物，因此通常不需要在 handmade gifts 前使用 the。

× No, I don't think expensive gifts always be better.

✓ No, I don't think expensive gifts are always better.

主句使用一般现在时，后面的从句也需要有正确的谓语动词。主语 gifts 是复数，应使用 are，而不能直接使用 be。

× Sometimes a handmade gift or a nice day out carrying more than something closely.

✓ Sometimes a handmade gift or a nice day out carries more meaning than something costly.

句子需要一般现在时的谓语动词；carrying 是现在分词，不能在这里单独作谓语。由 or 连接的两个单数主语表示二选一时，谓语用单数 carries。

× Sometimes a handmade gift or a nice day out carrying more than something closely.

✓ Sometimes a handmade gift or a nice day out carries more meaning than something costly.

closely 是副词，不能用来描述名词 something。这里需要形容词修饰 something；结合前文谈论昂贵礼物，可用 costly。