朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接说明地点的变化，再用过去和现在作对比。注意语法：用“There is a big difference”；描述过去用过去时“made”，描述现在的习惯可用“usually meet”；“social occasions”需要用复数。

範例: Yes, there’s a big difference. I used to meet most of my friends at school, but nowadays I often meet new people at social events, such as department gatherings.

建議: 回答中要清楚比较适合与不适合的地点，并说明原因。用“some places”和“coffee shops”等正确复数形式；“noise”在这里应改为形容词“noisy”。请确认“BC 3 and loader load bar”具体指什么，避免地点名称含糊；也可用“loud bars”说明嘈杂场所。

範例: Quiet places like coffee shops are good for meeting because people can talk comfortably and hear each other. In contrast, loud bars are less suitable, as the noise makes conversation difficult.

建議: 观点和理由都比较清楚，也有补充细节。注意“prefer”后接“to spend”，以及“a one-on-one setting”；最后一句应表达完整，使用“have coffee”或“go for a walk”，不要同时使用错误的“we when”。

範例: I prefer spending time with one friend because I value meaningful conversations more than being in a large group. In a one-on-one setting, we can talk more deeply about personal topics. For example, we might have coffee or go for a walk together.

建議: 回答直接，但“家是私人空间”和“不想让任何人进屋”意思重复，可精简并解释你更喜欢在哪里见面。注意“friends”的复数、“go to their house”和“invite me over”；结尾可具体说明在朋友家会做什么。

範例: I don’t usually invite friends over because I like to keep my home private. Instead, I prefer meeting them at a café or visiting their homes. When I do visit, we usually have a meal and chat.

建議: 理由有潜力，但例子中“when I'm strong”和“a close man”与语境不符，且结尾“and such as”不完整。建议用一个具体、清晰的例子说明朋友如何支持你，例如在项目压力大时倾听或给建议；注意避免重复“with”。

範例: Friends are very important to me because they offer emotional support and honest advice. For example, when I was under pressure during a difficult project, a close friend listened to me and helped me stay calm.

建議: 回答有频率、活动和理由，结构完整。把“my friend”改为“my friends”，并列活动时使用“go shopping or watch movies”；删除重复的“hang out”，同时补上“I think hanging out”。

範例: Yes, I go out with my friends quite often, usually once a week. We might go shopping or watch a movie together. It’s a great way to unwind after a long week.

建議: 地点和共同爱好都回答到了，但句子过长，且“because”重复。可拆成两三句，并用“a café”或“cafés”；“come by shopping with having”表达不自然，直接说购物后去喝咖啡即可。

範例: We usually meet at a shopping mall because we both enjoy shopping. Afterwards, we often look for a new café and have a cup of coffee together.

建議: 内容相关，也解释了你们为什么喜欢聊天。注意“hang up”应为“hang out”，“stories”和“jokes”要用复数；“catch up”后可接“on what’s been happening”，而“each other’s lives”也需要复数。

範例: I usually hang out with my friends, share stories and tell jokes. We don’t see each other very often, so it’s a good way to catch up on what’s been happening in our lives.

建議: 回答包含朋友姓名、认识时间和目前关系，信息充分。将“whose name called Sarah”改为“whose name is Sarah”或“She’s called Sarah”；避免重复“when I was”，并用现在完成时表达认识了七年多：“we’ve known each other for over seven years”。

範例: Yes, I have a friend called Sarah, whom I’ve known for over seven years. We met when we were in senior high school, and we’re still very close.

× Yes, it has a big difference.

✓ Yes, there is a big difference.

表示“有一个很大的区别”时，应使用“There is/are...”句型，而不是用“it has”来表达存在。

× In the past I usually make new friends in school, but now it's more often happen in different social occasion like department events.

✓ In the past, I usually made new friends at school, but now it happens more often at different social occasions, such as department events.

“In the past”表示过去的时间，描述过去的习惯时，动词“make”应改为过去式“made”。

× In the past I usually make new friends in school, but now it's more often happen in different social occasion like department events.

✓ In the past, I usually made new friends at school, but now it happens more often at different social occasions, such as department events.

“Now”表示现在的情况，主语“it”是第三人称单数，因此应使用“happens”。原句中的“it's ... happen”结构不正确。

× In the past I usually make new friends in school, but now it's more often happen in different social occasion like department events.

✓ In the past, I usually made new friends at school, but now it happens more often at different social occasions, such as department events.

“Different”表示不止一个场合，因此可数名词“occasion”应使用复数“occasions”。

× Someplace are suitable for meetings like coffee shop and quiet lunch because they are calm and then people have a private conversation about important matters.

✓ Some places are suitable for meeting, such as coffee shops and quiet lunch spots, because they are calm and people can have private conversations about important matters.

“Some”后面应接可数名词复数，所以“Someplace”应改为“Some places”。泛指多家咖啡馆时，“coffee shop”也应使用复数“coffee shops”。

× By contrast, BC 3 and loader load bar are not suitable because they are noise and make it hard to hear issues.

✓ By contrast, BC 3 and loader load bar are not suitable because they are noisy and make it hard to hear issues.

“Are”后面需要用形容词描述地点的特征。这里应使用形容词“noisy”（嘈杂的），而不是名词“noise”（噪音）。

× I prefer spend time with one friend because I value more meaningful conversation rather than large group.

✓ I prefer spending time with one friend because I value more meaningful conversations rather than a large group.

“Prefer”后面可以接动词-ing形式，因此“prefer spend”应改为“prefer spending”。也可以说“prefer to spend”，但此处改用-ing形式。

× I prefer spend time with one friend because I value more meaningful conversation rather than large group.

✓ I prefer spending time with one friend because I value more meaningful conversations rather than a large group.

“Conversation”在这里表示一般意义上的多次或多段谈话，应使用复数“conversations”。

× I prefer spend time with one friend because I value more meaningful conversation rather than large group.

✓ I prefer spending time with one friend because I value more meaningful conversations rather than a large group.

“Group”是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。

× In one-on-one setting we can talk more deeply about personal topics.

✓ In a one-on-one setting, we can talk more deeply about personal topics.

“Setting”是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。

× For example we when we have a coffee or go for a work.

✓ For example, we can have coffee or go for a walk.

原句中“we”与“when we”重复，句子结构不完整。“For example”后可直接接完整句子；表达“散步”时应说“go for a walk”。

× No, I don't usually invite friend to my home because I think my home is a private space and I don't want to let anyone go into my house.

✓ No, I don't usually invite a friend to my home because I think my home is a private space and I don't want to let anyone go into my house.

“Friend”是可数名词单数，前面需要加冠词。这里可用“a friend”。

× But sometimes my friend will invite me to go their house for fun and I will go eat.

✓ But sometimes my friend will invite me to go to their house for fun, and I will go and eat.

表示“去某人的家”时，动词“go”后面需要介词“to”，所以应说“go to their house”。

× When I was struggling with my with a difficult project, a close man helped me stay calm and such as.

✓ When I was struggling with a difficult project, a close man helped me stay calm.

“with my with”出现重复，且句末“and such as”没有接完整的举例内容，造成结构不完整。删除这些多余部分后，句子结构完整。

× Yes, I hang out with my friend quite often, usually once a week.

✓ Yes, I hang out with my friends quite often, usually once a week.

结合“usually once a week”所描述的日常交往，泛指多个朋友时应使用复数“friends”。

× We usually go shopping or watching movies together and I think hang out hang out with them a great way to unwind after a long week.

✓ We usually go shopping or watch movies together, and I think hanging out with them is a great way to unwind after a long week.

“Go shopping or watching movies”结构不平行，改为“go shopping or watch movies”。后半句有重复的“hang out”，并且缺少连接主语和表语的“is”。

× We usually go shopping or watching movies together and I think hang out hang out with them a great way to unwind after a long week.

✓ We usually go shopping or watch movies together, and I think hanging out with them is a great way to unwind after a long week.

动词短语“hang out”在这里作主语，需要使用动名词形式“hanging out”。

× We usually meet at a department store or shopping mall because we both like shopping and after shopping we usually go to find a new cafe because we are a big fan of cafe so we often come by shopping with having a cup of coffee together.

✓ We usually meet at a department store or shopping mall because we both like shopping. After shopping, we usually go to find a new cafe because we are big fans of cafes, so we often go shopping and have a cup of coffee together.

主语“We”指两个人或多人，因此应说“big fans”，而不是“a big fan”。泛指咖啡馆时，“cafe”应使用复数“cafes”。

× We usually meet at a department store or shopping mall because we both like shopping and after shopping we usually go to find a new cafe because we are a big fan of cafe so we often come by shopping with having a cup of coffee together.

✓ We usually meet at a department store or shopping mall because we both like shopping. After shopping, we usually go to find a new cafe because we are big fans of cafes, so we often go shopping and have a cup of coffee together.

主语“We”是复数，不能在“fan”前使用表示单数的“a”。应改为“big fans”。

× We usually meet at a department store or shopping mall because we both like shopping and after shopping we usually go to find a new cafe because we are a big fan of cafe so we often come by shopping with having a cup of coffee together.

✓ We usually meet at a department store or shopping mall because we both like shopping. After shopping, we usually go to find a new cafe because we are big fans of cafes, so we often go shopping and have a cup of coffee together.

“come by shopping with having”结构不成立。表达一起购物并喝咖啡时，可用并列结构“go shopping and have a cup of coffee”。

× I usually hang up with my friend to share story and tell some funniest joke because we don't see each other very often.

✓ I usually hang up with my friend to share stories and tell some funny jokes because we don't see each other very often.

“Share”后面泛指分享的故事不止一个，因此用复数“stories”；“some”后面也应接复数名词，所以“joke”应改为“jokes”。

× I usually hang up with my friend to share story and tell some funniest joke because we don't see each other very often.

✓ I usually hang up with my friend to share stories and tell some funny jokes because we don't see each other very often.

“Some”表示一些，后面直接接“funniest”不合适。这里表达“讲一些有趣的笑话”应使用“some funny jokes”。如果想表达“最好笑的一些笑话”，可以说“some of the funniest jokes”。

× Hanging out is a good way to catch up what's been happening in each other's life.

✓ Hanging out is a good way to catch up on what's been happening in each other's lives.

“Catch up”表示了解近况时，通常接介词“on”，所以应说“catch up on what's been happening”。

× Hanging out is a good way to catch up what's been happening in each other's life.

✓ Hanging out is a good way to catch up on what's been happening in each other's lives.

“Each other’s”指朋友们各自的生活，这里通常使用复数“lives”。

× Yes, I have a friend whose name called Sarah.

✓ Yes, I have a friend whose name is Sarah.

“Whose name called Sarah”缺少正确的系动词结构。介绍某人的名字时，应说“whose name is Sarah”。

× I met her when I was high when I was in Senior High School and we know each other over 7 years and we still are close now.

✓ I met her when I was in senior high school, and we have known each other for over seven years. We are still close now.

“For over seven years”表示从过去持续到现在的时间，应使用现在完成时“have known”，而不是一般现在时“know”。

× I met her when I was high when I was in Senior High School and we know each other over 7 years and we still are close now.

✓ I met her when I was in senior high school, and we have known each other for over seven years. We are still close now.

频率或状态副词“still”通常放在系动词“be”之后，因此应说“We are still close”，而不是“We still are close”。