朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and complete your comparison. Use the past tense for childhood and the present tense for now. Replace unclear phrases such as “study concert” and “we’re constantly” with specific activities and finish the sentence. Add one clear reason or example.

範例: Yes, there is a difference. When I was younger, I usually met my friends at school or in a park, and we mainly talked about our studies and daily lives. Nowadays, I prefer meeting them in cafés because we can have longer and more meaningful conversations.

建議: Give a clear general reason before providing an example. Explain that noise, crowds, or a lack of privacy can make a place unsuitable. Avoid unintelligible expressions such as “On Mickey” and “in culture lotting people surround.”

範例: Some places are suitable because they are quiet, comfortable, and offer enough privacy. For example, a small café would be ideal if I needed to discuss a serious problem with a friend. A crowded shopping centre would not be suitable because it would be too noisy and distracting.

建議: State your preference once and use correct comparison grammar: “I prefer spending time with one friend to spending time with a group.” Organize the reason into a separate sentence and explain that one-to-one conversations provide more privacy and comfort.

範例: I prefer spending time with one close friend rather than with a large group. I feel more comfortable having one-to-one conversations because we can discuss personal problems in greater detail. It is also easier for us to choose an activity that we both enjoy.

建議: Use “friends,” not “parents,” and answer in a natural, direct way. Explain why your home is comfortable and mention a simple activity you would do there. Avoid the incorrect phrase “Inviting my home I was.”

範例: Yes, I would definitely invite my friends to my home. It is more comfortable and less expensive than going to a restaurant. We could cook dinner together, watch a film, or simply chat in a relaxed atmosphere.

建議: Use a clear reason-and-result structure. Correct “meeting friends menu relaxed” to “meeting my friends makes me feel relaxed,” and say “relieve stress” rather than “can’t stress out.” Add a specific example of how friends support you.

範例: Friends are very important to me because they provide emotional support and help me relax. When I feel stressed after work, I usually talk to a close friend about my problems. After spending time with them, I feel more positive and less worried.

建議: Answer with a clear frequency, such as “once or twice a week.” Use “with my friends,” not “in my fence,” and avoid repeating the idea of feeling relieved. Mention one or two typical activities.

範例: Yes, I usually go out with my friends once or twice a week. I especially enjoy meeting them after work because it helps me relieve stress. We might have dinner, go for a walk, or visit a café and chat.

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes a reason, but “our concerts” is probably incorrect; use “our concerns” or “our daily lives.” Avoid repeating “so” and add the article in “a quiet place.”

範例: I usually meet my friends in a café or a restaurant. We often need plenty of time to talk about our daily lives and personal concerns. A café is especially suitable because it is usually quiet and comfortable.

建議: Avoid repeating “with my friends” and say “after a busy day at work.” Use the correct structure “talking to my friends helps me relieve stress.” Give one additional activity to make the answer more specific.

範例: I usually chat with my friends when we meet, especially after a busy day at work. Talking to them helps me relieve stress and feel relaxed. Sometimes we also have dinner together or watch a film.

建議: Use “one friend I have known” rather than “one place.” Clearly state how long you have known this person and explain where you met. Complete the answer by describing what you still do together or why the friendship has lasted.

範例: Yes, I have a close friend whom I have known for more than ten years. We met in the same class at elementary school, and we have stayed in touch ever since. Although we are both busy now, we still meet regularly and support each other.

× Yes, there is a difference between now and the past for example when I was young, we just talked each other about our daily routine and our study concert but now we're constantly

✓ Yes, there is a difference between now and the past. For example, when I was young, we just talked to each other about our daily routine and our studies, but now we are constantly in touch.

The verb talk requires the preposition to before each other. We say talk to someone, not talk someone.

× Yes, there is a difference between now and the past for example when I was young, we just talked each other about our daily routine and our study concert but now we're constantly

✓ Yes, there is a difference between now and the past. For example, when I was young, we just talked to each other about our daily routine and our studies, but now we are constantly in touch.

The sentence ends with the incomplete phrase we are constantly. A complete sentence needs a complement, such as in touch. Divide the long sentence into shorter sentences and check that every clause is complete.

× On Mickey, we had to find a quiet place because we talk about the serious problem in company so in culture lotting people surround is not so

✓ We have to find a quiet place because we talk about serious problems at the company, so being surrounded by a lot of people is not suitable.

The preposition at is more appropriate for a company or workplace. Use at the company rather than in company in this context.

× On Mickey, we had to find a quiet place because we talk about the serious problem in company so in culture lotting people surround is not so

✓ We have to find a quiet place because we talk about serious problems at the company, so being surrounded by a lot of people is not suitable.

The correct quantifier is a lot of before a plural countable noun such as people. Do not use lotting people.

× On Mickey, we had to find a quiet place because we talk about the serious problem in company so in culture lotting people surround is not so

✓ We have to find a quiet place because we talk about serious problems at the company, so being surrounded by a lot of people is not suitable.

The original sentence contains incomplete and incorrectly ordered clauses. Use a clear subject and verb structure, such as being surrounded by a lot of people is not suitable.

× I prefer to spend time with one friend or rather than a group of friend because it is more comfortable for me talking with one friend we are thinking of a more detailed private problem in my mind.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend rather than with a group of friends because it is more comfortable for me to talk with one friend. We can discuss more detailed private problems.

Use rather than, not or rather than, when comparing two choices. The structure is prefer A rather than B.

× I prefer to spend time with one friend or rather than a group of friend because it is more comfortable for me talking with one friend we are thinking of a more detailed private problem in my mind.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend rather than with a group of friends because it is more comfortable for me to talk with one friend. We can discuss more detailed private problems.

The noun group refers to more than one friend, so friend must be plural: a group of friends. Use plural problems when referring generally to several personal matters.

× I prefer to spend time with one friend or rather than a group of friend because it is more comfortable for me talking with one friend we are thinking of a more detailed private problem in my mind.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend rather than with a group of friends because it is more comfortable for me to talk with one friend. We can discuss more detailed private problems.

After the adjective comfortable, use the infinitive structure for me to talk, not for me talking. The pattern is it is comfortable for someone to do something.

× I prefer to spend time with one friend or rather than a group of friend because it is more comfortable for me talking with one friend we are thinking of a more detailed private problem in my mind.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend rather than with a group of friends because it is more comfortable for me to talk with one friend. We can discuss more detailed private problems.

The original sentence joins several ideas without a suitable break or conjunction. Separate the ideas into two complete sentences.

× Yeah, I do invite parents to my home. Yes, Inviting my home I was for comfortable mood and you can enjoy without money.

✓ Yes, I invite my friends to my home. I invite them because my home has a comfortable atmosphere, and we can enjoy ourselves without spending money.

Singular countable nouns need an article. Use a comfortable atmosphere, not comfortable mood. The phrase a comfortable atmosphere is also more natural for describing a home.

× Yeah, I do invite parents to my home. Yes, Inviting my home I was for comfortable mood and you can enjoy without money.

✓ Yes, I invite my friends to my home. I invite them because my home has a comfortable atmosphere, and we can enjoy ourselves without spending money.

Inviting my home is not a complete or correctly ordered clause. Use a subject and a finite verb, such as I invite them because my home has a comfortable atmosphere.

× Yeah, I do invite parents to my home. Yes, Inviting my home I was for comfortable mood and you can enjoy without money.

✓ Yes, I invite my friends to my home. I invite them because my home has a comfortable atmosphere, and we can enjoy ourselves without spending money.

The subject is we, so the reflexive pronoun must be ourselves. Use enjoy ourselves when we mean that we have a good time.

× Yeah, I do invite parents to my home. Yes, Inviting my home I was for comfortable mood and you can enjoy without money.

✓ Yes, I invite my friends to my home. I invite them because my home has a comfortable atmosphere, and we can enjoy ourselves without spending money.

After the preposition without, use a gerund. Therefore, without spending money is correct, not without money when describing the activity of using or paying money.

× Having friends is quite important to me because a meeting friends menu relaxed and comfortable in mind and I can't stress out

✓ Having friends is quite important to me because meeting friends makes me feel relaxed and comfortable, and I do not feel stressed.

The subject meeting friends is a singular gerund phrase, so the verb must be makes, not make. In the present tense, singular subjects take a verb ending in -s.

× Having friends is quite important to me because a meeting friends menu relaxed and comfortable in mind and I can't stress out

✓ Having friends is quite important to me because meeting friends makes me feel relaxed and comfortable, and I do not feel stressed.

Stress is usually expressed as an adjective after feel. Use feel stressed, not stress out in this sentence. Relaxed and comfortable correctly describe how you feel.

× Having friends is quite important to me because a meeting friends menu relaxed and comfortable in mind and I can't stress out

✓ Having friends is quite important to me because meeting friends makes me feel relaxed and comfortable, and I do not feel stressed.

The phrase a meeting friends menu does not form a grammatical clause. Use the gerund phrase meeting friends as the subject, followed by the verb makes.

× Yeah, I enjoy going out with my friends especially when I am tired after work I want to go out in my fence to relieve my stress and eternally relieved

✓ Yes, I enjoy going out with my friends, especially when I am tired after work. I want to go out with my friends to relieve my stress and feel relaxed.

Use with when describing going out together with people. The preposition in is not appropriate in this context.

× Yeah, I enjoy going out with my friends especially when I am tired after work I want to go out in my fence to relieve my stress and eternally relieved

✓ Yes, I enjoy going out with my friends, especially when I am tired after work. I want to go out with my friends to relieve my stress and feel relaxed.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined without punctuation or a conjunction. Divide it into two complete sentences. Also, use the parallel structure to relieve my stress and feel relaxed.

× Yeah, I enjoy going out with my friends especially when I am tired after work I want to go out in my fence to relieve my stress and eternally relieved

✓ Yes, I enjoy going out with my friends, especially when I am tired after work. I want to go out with my friends to relieve my stress and feel relaxed.

Eternally is an adverb meaning forever, so it does not fit this context. Use the adjective relaxed after feel. Remember that feel is a linking verb and is followed by an adjective.

× I usually meet my friends in a cafe or restaurant because we need a lot of time to talk about our routine or our concerts. So the cafe is quiet place so it's suitable for talking.

✓ I usually meet my friends in a cafe or a restaurant because we need a lot of time to talk about our routines or our conversations. The cafe is a quiet place, so it is suitable for talking.

A singular countable noun needs an article. Use a restaurant and a quiet place. When two singular alternatives are joined by or, repeat the article when needed for clarity.

× I usually meet my friends in a cafe or restaurant because we need a lot of time to talk about our routine or our concerts. So the cafe is quiet place so it's suitable for talking.

✓ I usually meet my friends in a cafe or a restaurant because we need a lot of time to talk about our routines or our conversations. The cafe is a quiet place, so it is suitable for talking.

Use an article before a singular countable noun. The correct phrase is a quiet place, not quiet place.

× I usually chat with my friends when I meet my friends. So especially after busy work, chatting my work with my friends family me, live stress and feel relaxed.

✓ I usually chat with my friends when I meet them. Especially after a busy day at work, chatting about my work with my friends helps me relieve stress and feel relaxed.

The second sentence lacks a clear subject and contains incorrectly ordered words. Chatting about my work with my friends is the subject, and helps me is the main verb.

× I usually chat with my friends when I meet my friends. So especially after busy work, chatting my work with my friends family me, live stress and feel relaxed.

✓ I usually chat with my friends when I meet them. Especially after a busy day at work, chatting about my work with my friends helps me relieve stress and feel relaxed.

The subject chatting about my work with my friends is a singular gerund phrase, so it takes helps, not help. Singular subjects require the third-person singular verb form in the present tense.

× I usually chat with my friends when I meet my friends. So especially after busy work, chatting my work with my friends family me, live stress and feel relaxed.

✓ I usually chat with my friends when I meet them. Especially after a busy day at work, chatting about my work with my friends helps me relieve stress and feel relaxed.

Use the preposition about before the topic of a conversation: chatting about my work. After helps me, use the base form relieve, not an -ing form.

× Yes, one place I have known is for over ten years when I was student in elementary school we met in a St. Class and after meeting

✓ Yes, I have known one friend for over ten years. We met in the same class when I was a student in elementary school, and we have stayed friends ever since.

Use a before the singular countable noun student: a student. The original phrase was also incomplete, so the sentence has been reorganized into complete clauses.

× Yes, one place I have known is for over ten years when I was student in elementary school we met in a St. Class and after meeting

✓ Yes, I have known one friend for over ten years. We met in the same class when I was a student in elementary school, and we have stayed friends ever since.

Use in elementary school and in the same class to describe the school and class where the meeting occurred. These prepositions correctly indicate location or setting.

× Yes, one place I have known is for over ten years when I was student in elementary school we met in a St. Class and after meeting

✓ Yes, I have known one friend for over ten years. We met in the same class when I was a student in elementary school, and we have stayed friends ever since.

The original response is incomplete and has several clauses joined without clear subjects or verbs. Use complete sentences and connect related ideas with a suitable conjunction such as and.