朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating the difference, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (e.g. "in the past... but now..."). Avoid repetition and keep to 3–4 short sentences. Improve grammar (use past/simple present, plural forms) and natural phrases ("meet up with friends at school" / "go to cafés").

範例: In the past I usually met my friends at school because we were classmates. However, now I rarely meet them and when I do we often get together at cafés. This change is because we have different schedules and responsibilities, such as work and studies.

建議: Answer directly with a clear reason, using linking words (e.g. "because", "so") and specific examples of suitable/unsuitable places. Use correct vocabulary ("places", "comfortable", "quiet"). Keep 2–3 concise sentences and avoid vague words like "folks" unless you mean people.

範例: Some places are suitable because they are comfortable and quiet, for example cafés or parks, which make it easy to talk. Busy places like markets are not suitable because it is noisy and people are distracted.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference. Then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words ("because", "so") and correct grammar ("honest", "private matters"). Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Keep it to 3–4 sentences maximum.

範例: I prefer spending time with one close friend rather than a large group because I can talk about private matters more easily. For example, I often share personal problems with my closest friend because he is honest and trustworthy.

建議: Answer directly then add specific details about how often and on what occasions you invite them. Use correct tense and natural expressions ("I invite friends to my home for birthdays and festivals" or "I usually invite them for special occasions"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I like to invite friends to my home. These days I usually invite them for birthdays and festivals, when we have meals and celebrate together.

建議: Begin with a clear statement of importance, then give 2 specific reasons or examples showing why they matter, using linking words ("because", "for example"). Use natural vocabulary ("play an important role", "support", "honest"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Friends play an important role in my life because they support and motivate me. For example, they give honest advice when I face problems and help me stay positive.

建議: Answer the question directly (yes/no and frequency), then explain with specific details. Avoid contradictory statements (parents vs friends). Use correct sentence structure and linking words. Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

範例: Not very often, because I am busy with studies, but I do go out with friends a few times a month. When we go out I feel relaxed and enjoy chatting and having fun together.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence stating the typical meeting place. Give 1–2 specific reasons why (e.g. convenient location, quiet) using linking words, and correct grammar. Avoid repetitions and fillers. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

範例: Nowadays we often meet at cafés because they are convenient and open late. We choose cafés since everyone is busy with work or studies and it is easy to find a quiet table to talk.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence describing usual activities, then add 1–2 specific examples (e.g. "study together", "go for coffee", "give advice") with linking words. Use natural phrases and correct grammar. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: When I meet my friends we usually talk about personal matters and ask for each other's opinions. Lately we often discuss our studies and help each other with homework, which makes me feel relaxed.

建議: Answer directly and give specific details: how long you've known them (years), where you met (class), and one memory or reason the friendship lasted. Use correct number forms and simple past/present perfect ("I have known them since fourth grade"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I have two friends whom I have known since fourth grade. We have stayed in touch for many years and still meet sometimes to remember our school days.

× When I would like to talk about my friends and then in my past I would like friends in school because they are my school friends.

✓ When I talk about my friends in the past, I had friends at school because they were my school friends.

The original uses 'would like' incorrectly (modal for desire) and mixes tenses. Use simple present to introduce the topic ('When I talk about') and simple past to describe past relationships ('I had friends','they were'). Also reorder for clarity.

× But nowadays I am not meeting my friends too much but sometime I meet my friend with cafes.

✓ But nowadays I do not meet my friends very often; sometimes I meet my friends at cafes.

Use simple present for habitual actions ('do not meet','meet'). 'Too much' is informal and ungrammatical here; use 'very often'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Use plural 'friends' and preposition 'at' for places ('at cafes').

× Yes, I think folks are very suitable to suitable place to meeting, but some people do not thinking like this.

✓ Yes, I think some places are very suitable for meeting, but some people do not think this way.

Original has many issues: incorrect noun 'folks' (people) and wrong word order. Use 'places are suitable for meeting' and correct verb form 'do not think' (base form after 'do not'). Avoid repeating 'suitable'.

× Yes, suspend. Uh yes, I prefer to spend more time with my girlfriend because I think part of not discussion the private things and I also spend my private talk on private things with my one friend because I think his honest person.

✓ Yes. I prefer to spend more time with my girlfriend because we discuss private matters. I also have one close male friend with whom I discuss personal things because I think he is honest.

Original is disfluent and ungrammatical. Use clear clauses: 'prefer to spend more time', 'we discuss private matters'. For the second clause, use 'one close friend' and correct pronoun and verb agreement 'he is honest'. Use 'with whom' for formal relative clause.

× Yes, I like to invite my friends to home, but nowadays I am invited my friend on birthdays and festivals.

✓ Yes, I like to invite my friends to my home, but nowadays I only invite friends on birthdays and festivals.

Use simple present for likes/habits ('I like to invite'). 'To home' should be 'to my home'. The second clause needs simple present 'I only invite' or present habit; original 'am invited' is passive and incorrect here.

× Important friends are very important role of my life because I think friends are very motivated and honest.

✓ Friends play a very important role in my life because I find them motivating and honest.

Avoid repetition 'important friends are very important'. Use verb 'play a role' and correct preposition 'in my life'. Use adjectives correctly: 'motivating' (causing motivation) or 'motivated' depending on meaning; here 'motivating' fits better.

× As I often go outside with my parents because I think I feel very relaxed and I am talking with my friends, so it is a very happy moment for me.

✓ I often go out with my friends because I feel relaxed when I talk with them; it is a very happy time for me.

Use simple present 'I often go out' and consistent subjects 'friends' (not parents). 'Go outside' is okay but 'go out' is more natural. Use 'feel' (state) and simple present 'talk' for habitual actions. Remove redundant conjunctions; 'time' is more natural than 'moment' here.

× And nowadays I am meeting on Sir only cafes because uh, they are busy on their work. So and nowadays I am on, I am busy for my studies. I have no too much time. So that's why I am just only meet meet the cafes each other.

✓ Nowadays I only meet at cafes because they are busy with work. I am busy with my studies and do not have much time, so I only meet them at cafes.

Use simple present for habits: 'I only meet at cafes'. 'Busy on their work' should be 'busy with work'. 'I have no too much time' should be 'I do not have much time'. Remove repeated words and reorder for clarity.

× Well I am meet with my friends, I usually talk my private things and get their opinions and now I am discuss my studies so I feel very relaxed.

✓ I meet with my friends; I usually talk about personal matters and get their opinions, and now I often discuss my studies, so I feel very relaxed.

Use simple present 'I meet', 'I usually talk about'. 'Private things' is better as 'personal matters'. Use 'discuss' in simple present for habitual action. Ensure parallel structure and proper prepositions ('talk about').

× Yes, I have a two friends. I know there are my 4th class friends.

✓ Yes, I have two friends whom I have known since fourth grade.

Do not use 'a' with 'two friends' (plural). '4th class' is awkward; use 'fourth grade' or 'fourth class' depending on variety, and express duration with 'since'. Use 'whom I have known since' for clarity.