广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本直接，但有明显的词汇和语法问题。将“skip out”改为“pop up”，“arrive right on the table”改为“appear on the screen”；“table table”是重复错误。可以补充广告出现的频率以及对你的影响，并使用“especially”或“as a result”等连接词。注意说“advertisements”时使用复数，且避免只用“I hate it”这样过于简单的表达。

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer, especially on social media and video websites. They usually pop up on the screen while I am browsing. I find them annoying because they interrupt what I am doing.

建議: 回答没有完整结束，内容也不够清楚。应直接说明广告是什么、在哪里看到、广告介绍了谁，以及为什么给你留下印象。“In the Breek times”应改为“during the commercial break”，“an advertisement introduced the scientist”应改为“an advertisement about a scientist”。建议使用过去时，并补充一个具体贡献或个人感受。

範例: Yes, I remember an advertisement I saw during a cartoon show when I was a child. It introduced a famous scientist from my country and explained his contribution to medicine. I was impressed because the advertisement made science seem interesting and inspiring.

建議: 回答了问题，但时态、单复数和句子结构需要改进。“I saw”应根据一般情况改为“I see”，“a lot of advertisement”应改为“a lot of advertisements”，“the advertisement was introduced”应改为“the advertisements promote”。“songs company products”和“water pool”意思不清，建议使用准确的产品词，如“soft drinks, coffee and electronic products”。可以用“for example”引出具体例子。

範例: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on buses and trains. They usually promote products such as coffee, soft drinks and mobile phones. For example, some posters encourage passengers to try a new brand while they are commuting.

建議: 观点比较明确，但开头应改为“It depends”或“It depends on the advertisement”。“advertisements introduced”应改为“advertisements that promote”，“the company's products is”应改为“a company’s products are”。回答中“好或坏”的标准不够具体，可以说明你喜欢有名人参与的广告，因为它们更有吸引力或更容易记住，并使用“however”连接转折。

範例: It depends on the advertisement. I dislike advertisements that exaggerate a product or make unrealistic promises. However, I enjoy well-made advertisements featuring famous actors or scientists because they are more attractive and memorable.

建議: 回答方向正确，但缺少完整的主题句，且“some people”重复。可以先明确说“I like advertisements that feature...”，然后列举演员、科学家或对城市有贡献的人。还应解释喜欢这类广告的原因，例如内容鼓舞人心、比单纯推销产品更有意义。

範例: I like advertisements that feature famous and inspiring people, such as actors, scientists and community leaders. In particular, I enjoy ads about people who have made an important contribution to my city. They are meaningful because they promote positive role models rather than simply selling products.

建議: 回答了问题，但原因表达混乱，存在明显重复和用词错误。“because of advertisement”应改为“because of an advertisement”，“the advertisement introduced the products”应改为“the advertisements promote products”，“board something”应改为“buy something”。“so bad so good”意思矛盾，应该明确表达为“many advertisements are misleading”或“the claims seem exaggerated”。可以补充你通常如何判断产品质量。

範例: No, I have never bought anything because of an advertisement. I tend to be cautious because many advertisements exaggerate the benefits of their products, and some claims seem misleading. Instead, I usually read customer reviews and compare prices before I buy something.

× Yes when I open my phone or my computer, the advertisement will skip out and arrive right on the table table. I hate it.

✓ Yes, when I open my phone or computer, advertisements appear on the screen. I hate them.

这里是泛指广告，应该使用复数 advertisements，而不是单数 advertisement。因为代词指代复数 advertisements，后面应使用 them，而不是 it。

× Yes when I open my phone or my computer, the advertisement will skip out and arrive right on the table table. I hate it.

✓ Yes, when I open my phone or computer, advertisements appear on the screen. I hate them.

问题询问的是经常发生的情况，所以应使用一般现在时 appear，而不是表示将来的 will appear。

× Yes when I open my phone or my computer, the advertisement will skip out and arrive right on the table table. I hate it.

✓ Yes, when I open my phone or computer, advertisements appear on the screen. I hate them.

them 指代前面的复数名词 advertisements。it 只能指代单数名词或不可数名词。

× Yes, when I was a child, I watched one day I watched the cartoons on the TV.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, one day I watched cartoons on TV.

原句重复使用了 I watched，造成句子结构混乱。删除重复部分后，句子结构更加清晰。泛指看电视节目时，通常说 watch cartoons on TV，不需要 the。

× In the Breek times I saw an in advertisement introduced the scientist in our country and their contributions to our

✓ During the break, I saw an advertisement introducing the scientists in our country and their contributions.

an 后面不能再加 in，因此应改为 an advertisement。advertisement 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词 an。

× In the Breek times I saw an in advertisement introduced the scientist in our country and their contributions to our

✓ During the break, I saw an advertisement introducing the scientists in our country and their contributions.

introducing 作后置修饰语，说明 advertisement 的内容，应使用现在分词 introducing，而不是过去式 introduced。

× In the Breek times I saw an in advertisement introduced the scientist in our country and their contributions to our

✓ During the break, I saw an advertisement introducing the scientists in our country and their contributions.

这里谈论的是多个科学家以及他们的贡献，所以 scientist 应改为复数 scientists，contribution 应使用复数 contributions。

× Yes, I saw a lot of advertisement on trains or other transport like the bus and the bike the advertisement was introduced the songs company products such as the water pool and the coffee and others.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on trains and other forms of transport, such as buses and bikes. The advertisements introduce company products, such as water and coffee.

问题使用一般现在时 Do you see，回答经常性的情况时也应使用一般现在时 see，而不是过去式 saw。

× Yes, I saw a lot of advertisement on trains or other transport like the bus and the bike the advertisement was introduced the songs company products such as the water pool and the coffee and others.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on trains and other forms of transport, such as buses and bikes. The advertisements introduce company products, such as water and coffee.

a lot of 后面接可数名词复数，因此 advertisement 应改为 advertisements。泛指交通工具时，bus 和 bike 也应使用复数 buses 和 bikes。

× Yes, I saw a lot of advertisement on trains or other transport like the bus and the bike the advertisement was introduced the songs company products such as the water pool and the coffee and others.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on trains and other forms of transport, such as buses and bikes. The advertisements introduce company products, such as water and coffee.

原句中的 advertisements 是介绍产品的主体，因此应使用主动语态 introduce，而不是错误的被动结构 was introduced。

× Yes, I saw a lot of advertisement on trains or other transport like the bus and the bike the advertisement was introduced the songs company products such as the water pool and the coffee and others.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on trains and other forms of transport, such as buses and bikes. The advertisements introduce company products, such as water and coffee.

原句把多个独立分句直接连接在一起，缺少标点和清晰的句子结构。应拆分为两个句子，并使用 such as 引出例子。

× And it depends myself.

✓ It depends.

myself 是反身代词，不能在这里直接作 depend 的宾语。表达“视情况而定”时，英语中直接说 It depends。

× I think some advertisements introduced their company's products is so bad but if the advertisement introduced the famous people in our country, it is good.

✓ I think some advertisements that introduce their companies' products are very bad, but advertisements that introduce famous people in our country are good.

这里是在表达一般看法，应使用一般现在时 introduce，而不是过去式 introduced。

× I think some advertisements introduced their company's products is so bad but if the advertisement introduced the famous people in our country, it is good.

✓ I think some advertisements that introduce their companies' products are very bad, but advertisements that introduce famous people in our country are good.

主语 advertisements 是复数，所以系动词应使用 are，不能使用 is。第二部分也使用复数 advertisements，因此应使用 are good。

× some advertisements about the famous people like the actors or scientists or some people Some people make a big contribution to our city.

✓ I like some advertisements about famous people, such as actors, scientists, or other people who make big contributions to our city.

原句缺少主句的谓语，且句子重复。改写后，people who make big contributions 是定语从句，用来修饰 people，结构更清楚。

× some advertisements about the famous people like the actors or scientists or some people Some people make a big contribution to our city.

✓ I like some advertisements about famous people, such as actors, scientists, or other people who make big contributions to our city.

原句开头的 Some advertisements about famous people 只是名词短语，没有完整谓语。加入 I like 后，句子成为完整句。

× some advertisements about the famous people like the actors or scientists or some people Some people make a big contribution to our city.

✓ I like some advertisements about famous people, such as actors, scientists, or other people who make big contributions to our city.

这里表示多人对城市作出的贡献，因此 contribution 应改为复数 contributions。

× No, I have not bought something because of advertisement because I think the advertisement introduced the products is so bad so good but I think it is it is fake.

✓ No, I have not bought anything because of an advertisement because I think advertisements that introduce products are not very good. I think the products are fake.

单数可数名词 advertisement 前需要冠词，应使用 an advertisement。表示泛指广告时也可以使用复数 advertisements。否定句中通常使用 anything，而不是 something。

× No, I have not bought something because of advertisement because I think the advertisement introduced the products is so bad so good but I think it is it is fake.

✓ No, I have not bought anything because of an advertisement because I think advertisements that introduce products are not very good. I think the products are fake.

这里表达的是对广告的一般看法，所以 introduce 应使用一般现在时，而不是过去式 introduced。

× No, I have not bought something because of advertisement because I think the advertisement introduced the products is so bad so good but I think it is it is fake.

✓ No, I have not bought anything because of an advertisement because I think advertisements that introduce products are not very good. I think the products are fake.

原句中的 it 指代不清，而且 products 是复数，不能用 it 指代。改为 the products are fake 后，代词和主语数量保持一致。

× No, I have not bought something because of advertisement because I think the advertisement introduced the products is so bad so good but I think it is it is fake. So I don't like to board something because of the advertisement.

✓ No, I have not bought anything because of an advertisement because I think advertisements that introduce products are not very good. I think the products are fake. Therefore, I do not like to buy things because of advertisements.

原句重复使用 because、it is 和 so，导致句子过长且结构混乱。应拆分为几个完整句子，并使用定语从句 that introduce products 连接相关信息。