广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接表达了“经常看到广告”，但语法问题较多，例如“search internet”应改为“search the Internet”，“such amount of advertisements appears”应改为“a large number of advertisements appear”。“obtain the information”不够自然，可以说“look for information”。建议使用“通常情况+具体位置+个人感受”的结构，并避免不自然的表达。

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer, especially while browsing websites or watching videos. They usually appear as pop-ups or banners, and they can be quite distracting when I am trying to find information.

建議: 回答有相关内容，但“in my child”应改为“when I was a child”，“gamble advertisement”应为“gambling advertisement”，而“solimito advertisement”含义不清，影响表达准确性。“That is a great effect of attracting people”也不自然。建议具体说明广告的产品、画面或为什么令人印象深刻，并使用过去时。

範例: Yes, I remember a gambling advertisement I saw when I was a child. It used bright colors, catchy music, and exciting images, so it immediately caught my attention. Although I did not understand the message fully at the time, I could still remember it clearly.

建議: 主要问题是指代和搭配不准确。“a range of advertisements”应使用复数谓语“there are a range of advertisements”或更自然地说“there are many advertisements”；“Both of them”没有明确指代对象；“subliminal message”通常指潜意识信息，并不适合描述普通的图像广告。建议使用“on trains and buses”，并具体描述广告的位置和形式。

範例: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertisements on trains and buses. They are usually placed above the seats, on the walls, or on digital screens. Many of them use large pictures and bright colors to attract passengers’ attention.

建議: 观点表达清楚，但“subliminal messaging crossing in my mind”和“I hate it with uncontrollable”都不符合自然英语。“uncontrollable”不能这样作副词使用。建议说明广告令人不喜欢的具体原因，例如打断视频、占用时间或过于频繁；同时用“because”连接理由即可，不必使用“subliminal”。

範例: No, I do not really like advertisements because they often interrupt videos or appear when I am trying to read something. Some of them are also repeated too frequently, which I find annoying and distracting.

建議: 回答表达了偏好，但“peaceful information”和“harmonious pictures”搭配不自然。“such that”在这里使用不当，建议改为“because they create a relaxing atmosphere”。可以具体说明喜欢的广告类型，例如公益广告、旅游广告或简洁的产品广告，并解释其特点。

範例: I like advertisements that are simple, informative, and visually appealing. For example, I enjoy travel advertisements with beautiful natural scenery and gentle music because they create a relaxing atmosphere without being too aggressive.

建議: 回答立场明确，但时态和语法需要改进。“I don't buy things affected by advertisements”不够自然，可以说“I do not usually buy things just because of advertisements”；“the good”应改为“products”，“depends”应与主语“my choice”搭配。建议补充一个具体购买标准，例如价格、质量和功能。

範例: I do not usually buy things just because of advertisements. Instead, I compare the price, quality, and functions before making a decision. I might notice a product through an advertisement, but I only buy it if it meets my needs.

× Yes, when I search internet by using mobile phones or computers, there are such amount of advertisements appears when I obtain the information.

✓ Yes, when I search the Internet on my mobile phone or computer, I see so many advertisements while looking for information.

“such amount of advertisements”不能修饰可数名词“advertisements”。应使用“so many advertisements”。另外，“mobile phone or computer”用单数更自然，因为这里是在泛指使用其中一种设备。

× Yes, when I search internet by using mobile phones or computers, there are such amount of advertisements appears when I obtain the information.

✓ Yes, when I search the Internet on my mobile phone or computer, there are so many advertisements when I look for information.

“there are ... appears”结构错误。“there are”后面不能直接接第三人称单数形式“appears”。可以改为“there are so many advertisements”或使用“advertisements appear”。

× Yes, when I search internet by using mobile phones or computers, there are such amount of advertisements appears when I obtain the information.

✓ Yes, when I search the Internet on my mobile phone or computer, I see so many advertisements while looking for information.

“Internet”通常作为专有名词使用，前面要加定冠词“the”，所以应说“the Internet”。“obtain the information”在这里表达一般信息，不需要使用“the”，用“look for information”更自然。

× Yes, I have seen a gamble advertisement in my child which impressed me by using solimito advertisement.

✓ Yes, I saw a gambling advertisement when I was a child. It impressed me because it used a subliminal message.

问题询问童年时的经历，发生在过去，所以使用一般过去时“saw”和“was”，而不是现在完成时“have seen”。

× Yes, I have seen a gamble advertisement in my child which impressed me by using solimito advertisement.

✓ Yes, I saw a gambling advertisement when I was a child. It impressed me because it used a subliminal message.

“gamble”是动词或名词，不能直接作“advertisement”的前置修饰语。表示“赌博的广告”时，应使用形容词形式“gambling”。

× Yes, I have seen a gamble advertisement in my child which impressed me by using solimito advertisement.

✓ Yes, I saw a gambling advertisement when I was a child. It impressed me because it used a subliminal message.

“in my child”介词使用错误。表示“在我小时候”应说“when I was a child”，而不是“in my child”。

× Yes, I have seen a gamble advertisement in my child which impressed me by using solimito advertisement.

✓ Yes, I saw a gambling advertisement when I was a child. It impressed me because it used a subliminal message.

单数可数名词“advertisement”和“message”前需要冠词，因此应使用“a gambling advertisement”和“a subliminal message”。

× Yes, there are a range of advertisements in trains or public transport.

✓ Yes, there is a range of advertisements on trains and other forms of public transport.

真正的主语是单数名词“a range”，所以谓语应使用“is”，不能使用“are”。此外，交通工具上通常使用介词“on”。

× Yes, there are a range of advertisements in trains or public transport.

✓ Yes, there is a range of advertisements on trains and other forms of public transport.

表示“在火车上”通常使用“on trains”，而不是“in trains”。“on public transport”也比“in public transport”更自然。

× Both of them are using subliminal message to promote their products by lots of figures and colorful image.

✓ These advertisements use subliminal messages to promote their products with lots of images and colorful designs.

“Both of them”指代的是“trains”和“public transport”，但真正使用潜意识信息的是“advertisements”，因此应直接使用“These advertisements”。

× Both of them are using subliminal message to promote their products by lots of figures and colorful image.

✓ These advertisements use subliminal messages to promote their products with lots of images and colorful designs.

“message”和“image”前面分别有复数意义的“their products”和“lots of”，所以应使用复数形式“messages”和“images”。

× Both of them are using subliminal message to promote their products by lots of figures and colorful image.

✓ These advertisements use subliminal messages to promote their products with lots of images and colorful designs.

这里是在描述广告的一般功能和特点，不是在描述此刻正在发生的动作，因此使用一般现在时“use”比现在进行时“are using”更合适。

× No, I don't like advertisements actually because there are such subliminal messaging crossing in my mind.

✓ No, I don't really like advertisements because subliminal messages keep crossing my mind.

“there are”后面不能接不可数名词“messaging”。这里直接用“subliminal messages”作主语更自然；“keep crossing my mind”表示“不断在我的脑海中闪过”。

× No, I don't like advertisements actually because there are such subliminal messaging crossing in my mind.

✓ No, I don't really like advertisements because subliminal messages keep crossing my mind.

“such”不能这样直接修饰不可数的“messaging”，而且这里要表达具体的多个信息，使用可数复数名词“subliminal messages”更准确。

× I hate it with uncontrollable.

✓ I find it uncontrollable.

“uncontrollable”是形容词，不能放在“with”后面表达“无法控制地”。这里可以使用“It is uncontrollable”或“I find it uncontrollable”。

× I like advertisements containing the peaceful information without any subliminal messaging, such that it provides harmonious pictures to me.

✓ I like advertisements that contain peaceful information without any subliminal messages and provide me with harmonious images.

“such that”表示“以至于”，不适合连接这里的两个并列特点。应使用“and”连接“contain”和“provide”。

× I like advertisements containing the peaceful information without any subliminal messaging, such that it provides harmonious pictures to me.

✓ I like advertisements that contain peaceful information without any subliminal messages and provide me with harmonious images.

先行词“advertisements”是复数，所以不能使用单数代词“it”。改写为定语从句后，使用“that”指代广告，并用复数谓语“provide”。

× I like advertisements containing the peaceful information without any subliminal messaging, such that it provides harmonious pictures to me.

✓ I like advertisements that contain peaceful information without any subliminal messages and provide me with harmonious images.

这里的“information”表示一般信息，不是特定的信息，因此不需要定冠词“the”。应说“peaceful information”。

× I don't buy things affected by advertisements because I would choose the good depends on my own needs and the functions.

✓ I haven't bought anything because of an advertisement because I choose products based on my own needs and their functions.

问题询问“是否曾经买过”，回答个人经历时使用现在完成时“I haven't bought”更合适。后半句描述一般选择习惯，因此使用一般现在时“choose”。

× I don't buy things affected by advertisements because I would choose the good depends on my own needs and the functions.

✓ I haven't bought anything because of an advertisement because I choose products based on my own needs and their functions.

表达“根据需求”应使用固定搭配“based on”，而不是“depends on”。“based on my own needs”表示选择产品的依据。

× I don't buy things affected by advertisements because I would choose the good depends on my own needs and the functions.

✓ I haven't bought anything because of an advertisement because I choose products based on my own needs and their functions.

“products”是复数名词，后面表示“它们的功能”时应使用复数物主代词“their”，不能使用含义不清的“the functions”。