广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce hesitations and repetition, correct grammar (advertisements, scrolling my smartphone), and keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I see advertisements very often on my phone and computer. For example, they appear as banners between articles and as pre-roll ads before YouTube videos, and sometimes they interrupt mobile games. Because I use social media a lot, it is hard to avoid them.

建議: Avoid filler words and correct verbs/tenses (advertisement, caught my eye, wanted). Give slightly more specific detail and use linking words to explain why it impressed you.

範例: Yes, I remember a chocolate-bar advertisement from my childhood. The package featured my favorite cartoon character and very bright, attractive colors, which made the chocolate look irresistible. As a result, I begged my parents to buy it.

建議: Remove hesitations and unclear words, use correct vocabulary (advertisements, digital screens, subway cars) and be specific about examples. Structure answer with a topic sentence then 1–2 clear supporting details.

範例: Yes, I see many advertisements on public transport. For instance, trains and buses often have poster ads and digital screens inside carriages, and sometimes entire subway cars are wrapped with promotional graphics.

建議: Use accurate words and phrases (advertisements, pop-ups, exaggerated), avoid double negatives and awkward constructions. Offer a clear opinion and one reason with a linking word.

範例: Honestly, I find most advertisements annoying, especially pop-ups and unskippable radio ads. Moreover, many ads exaggerate a product’s benefits, which makes me less likely to trust those brands.

建議: Be concise and correct collocations (prefer creative ads, pay attention during TV breaks). Avoid fillers and unclear pronouns; explain briefly why you like them with linking words.

範例: I prefer creative, humorous advertisements because they are entertaining and memorable. For example, a funny TV commercial will catch my attention during breaks and make me remember the brand.

建議: Fix pronunciation/word choice errors (discovered through an Instagram ad, eco-friendly, message about sustainability, regular customer) and remove repetitions. Give a clear sequence: how you found it, why you bought, and the result.

範例: Yes, I discovered a small eco-friendly skincare brand through an Instagram ad. Their message about sustainability matched my values, so I tried a product and now I buy from them regularly.

× I I see advertise all the time, especially when I'm when I'm scrolling my smartphone through social media or watching video online.

✓ I see advertisements all the time, especially when I'm scrolling on my smartphone through social media or watching videos online.

Errors: plural noun and wrong verb/object forms. 'advertise' is a verb; the noun is 'advertisement' and plural 'advertisements' fits context (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'scrolling my smartphone' is unnatural; use 'scrolling on my smartphone'. 'video' should be plural 'videos' to match 'watching' general habit. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and prepositions: 'see advertisements', 'scrolling on my smartphone', 'watching videos'. (IDs: 1 Singular and plural issue, 11 Incorrect use of prepositions, 26 Sentence structure errors.)

× Yes, there was I I still remember a chocolate bar advertise that really catch my eyes when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I still remember a chocolate bar advertisement that really caught my eye when I was a child.

Errors: 'advertise' used as a noun; correct noun is 'advertisement' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'catch' should be past tense 'caught' to match 'when I was a child' (ID 5 Past tense issue). 'eyes' should be singular 'eye' in the set phrase 'catch my eye' (ID 12 Incorrect use of pronouns/expressions). Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and past tense: 'advertisement', 'caught my eye'. (IDs: 1, 5, 12.)

× The the package had my favorite cotton cha character on it and the colors were so bright and fun.

✓ The package had my favorite cartoon character on it, and the colors were so bright and fun.

Errors: duplicated 'The the' (ID 26 Sentence structure errors). 'cotton cha' is likely mispronounced; correct word 'cartoon' (ID 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or words). Suggestion: Remove duplication and use the correct noun: 'The package had my favorite cartoon character...'. (IDs: 26, 13.)

× It made the chocolate look super tasty and I really want to buy it.

✓ It made the chocolate look super tasty and I really wanted to buy it.

Error: tense inconsistency. First clause is past 'made', so the second clause should use past 'wanted' to match (ID 5 Past tense issue). Suggestion: Keep tenses consistent when describing past impressions: '...and I really wanted to buy it.' (IDs: 5, 6.)

× I definitely notice a lot of advertise on trains and buses, especially digital cigarettes and posters inside the carriages.

✓ I definitely notice a lot of advertising on trains and buses, especially digital screens and posters inside the carriages.

Errors: 'advertise' is wrong form; use noun 'advertising' or 'advertisements' (ID 1). 'digital cigarettes' is incorrect word choice; likely 'digital screens' (ID 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or words). Suggestion: Use correct noun form and intended word: 'a lot of advertising', 'digital screens'. (IDs: 1, 13.)

× Sometimes they're even on the outside of the bus, like uh, uh, like uh, sub or subway cars covered in color for promotions.

✓ Sometimes they're even on the outside of the bus, like subway cars covered in color for promotions.

Errors: disfluent filler words removed for clarity (ID 26 Sentence structure errors). 'sub or subway cars' is redundant; use 'subway cars'. Suggestion: Remove fillers and redundant fragments to make a clear sentence: 'like subway cars covered in color for promotions.' (IDs: 26.)

× Honestly I find most advertise pretty annoying, especially pop ups or radio advertise that you can't skip.

✓ Honestly, I find most advertisements pretty annoying, especially pop-ups or radio advertisements that you can't skip.

Errors: 'advertise' should be noun 'advertisements' (ID 1 Singular and plural issue). 'pop ups' should be hyphenated 'pop-ups' (style) and 'radio advertise' should be 'radio advertisements'. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and plural where needed: 'most advertisements', 'pop-ups', 'radio advertisements'. (IDs: 1, 22 Article errors.)

× A lot of them excrete how good a product is, which feels misleading and makes me least likely to trust the brand.

✓ A lot of them exaggerate how good a product is, which feels misleading and makes me less likely to trust the brand.

Errors: 'excrete' is wrong word; intended 'exaggerate' (ID 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or words). 'least likely' is incorrect collocation; use 'less likely' (ID 25 Comparative and superlative errors). Suggestion: Choose the correct verb 'exaggerate' and correct comparative 'less likely'. (IDs: 13, 25.)

× Umm, while I prefer enjoy advertise that are creative and make me laugh, they are entertaining and memorable.

✓ Umm, I prefer advertisements that are creative and make me laugh; they are entertaining and memorable.

Errors: cannot use 'prefer enjoy' together; choose 'prefer' + noun or 'enjoy' + verb (ID 8 Verb + -ing form / ID 26 Sentence structure errors). 'advertise' should be 'advertisements' (ID 1). Suggestion: Use 'prefer advertisements' or 'enjoy adverts' and correct sentence structure: 'I prefer advertisements that are creative and make me laugh.' (IDs: 8, 1, 26.)

× Humorous commercials often stand out drawing TV breaks so I actually pay attention instead of keeping them.

✓ Humorous commercials often stand out during TV breaks, so I actually pay attention instead of skipping them.

Errors: missing preposition 'during' (ID 11 Incorrect use of prepositions). 'drawing' is wrong form; use 'during' (ID 10 Verb in the present participle form vs preposition). 'keeping them' should be 'skipping them' (wrong word) (ID 13). Suggestion: Use correct preposition 'during' and verb 'skipping' for intent: 'stand out during TV breaks... skipping them.' (IDs: 11, 10, 13.)

× So I love this advertise.

✓ So I love this advertisement.

Error: 'advertise' incorrect; use noun 'advertisement' (ID 1). Suggestion: Use correct noun form when referring to a single ad: 'this advertisement.' (IDs: 1.)

× Actually I discovered a small eco friendly skin care brand through an inscribed at.

✓ Actually, I discovered a small eco-friendly skin care brand through an Instagram ad.

Errors: 'inscribed at' is incorrect; likely 'Instagram ad' (ID 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or words). Add hyphen 'eco-friendly' (style) and 'skin care' can be 'skincare' (ID 22 Article errors/word form). Suggestion: Use correct platform name and 'ad': 'through an Instagram ad.' (IDs: 13, 22.)

× I was drawn to their message about about us absorb me which aligned with my personal values.

✓ I was drawn to their message about how they absorb waste, which aligned with my personal values.

Errors: duplicated 'about about' (ID 26). 'about us absorb me' is ungrammatical and unclear; replaced with plausible intended phrase 'how they absorb waste' (ID 13). Ensure past tense 'was drawn' matches 'which aligned' (correct). Suggestion: Clarify intended meaning and use correct clause structure: 'message about how they...' (IDs: 26, 13.)

× I gave it a try and now I'm a regular customers.

✓ I gave it a try and now I'm a regular customer.

Error: plural 'customers' conflicts with singular 'I'm a' (ID 1 Singular and plural issue / ID 27 Subject-verb agreement errors). Suggestion: Use singular 'customer' to match 'I'm a'. (IDs: 1, 27.)