广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答案能表达意思但有语法、词汇和表达不自然的问题。改进点：1) 句子要更自然并注意单复数（advertisements, TikTok）。2) 使用连接词使句子更流畅，例如 “especially on social media such as TikTok and Facebook.” 3) 可以增加具体细节说明为什么恼人（例如频率或影响）。4) 控制长度不超过5句，避免重复。

範例: Yes, I see lots of advertisements when I scroll on my phone, especially on social media like TikTok and Facebook. They often appear between short videos or as pop-ups, which can be annoying because they interrupt the flow and waste time.

建議: 回答缺乏清晰结构并有多处语法和表达错误。改进点：1) 先用主题句直接回应，再补充细节。2) 明确描述广告内容（what happened）、为什么印象深刻（reason）以及具体细节（characters, music）。3) 使用连接词（for example, because, so）让叙述连贯。4) 注意代词和单复数，句子要简洁。

範例: Yes. When I was a child, a TV commercial for a candy left a strong impression on me. It showed a cheerful character tasting the candy with bright music and colourful animation, and I remember watching that scene many times because it looked so fun and tasty.

建議: 回答能传达大意但有语法和用词错误，且细节不够准确。改进点：1) 先给出直接回答，然后解释常见类型（movies, apps, local services）。2) 说明广告的具体位置和原因（above seats, near doors）及其影响。3) 注意拼写（ads, apps）和代词使用，保持句子连贯。

範例: Yes, I often notice many advertisements on the subway. Most of them promote movies, mobile apps or local services, and they are usually placed above the seats or near the doors, so passengers see them easily during the journey.

建議: 回答观点明确但表达不够自然且有词汇错误。改进点：1) 直接陈述喜欢的类型（public service ads）并给出原因。2) 用更准确的词汇（campaigns, raise awareness, environmentally friendly）。3) 可以举例说明具体效果或感受以增加细节。

範例: I usually prefer public service advertisements, such as environmental campaigns or animal welfare ads, because they help raise people's awareness about being more environmentally friendly and can inspire real behaviour change.

建議: 回答内容与前一题重复，且语法不完整。改进点：1) 开头用完整句子并直接回答。2) 避免重复，提供补充细节或例子，例如哪种活动或广告形式最有效。3) 注意语法和短语搭配（environmentally friendly practices）。

範例: I prefer public service advertisements, especially those that focus on environmental protection or animal welfare. For example, campaigns showing the impact of plastic waste often encourage people to reduce single‑use plastics and adopt greener habits.

× I often see advertisement when I am scrolling my phone, especially on social media, such as TikToker and Facebook card.

✓ I often see advertisements when I am scrolling on my phone, especially on social media, such as TikTok and Facebook.

名词单复数错误：名词 advertisement 应为复数 advertisements，因为句中表示经常看到多条广告；另外对平台名称和搭配做了自然化处理（scrolling on my phone；TikTok；Facebook）。建议遇到“经常看到/很多”的情形用复数或不定代词（some/many）。

× Sometimes I get annoyed because they interrupt videos.

✓ Sometimes I get annoyed because they interrupt videos.

此句语法正确，无需修改。保留原句。

× Yes there is when I was a kid I saw a TV advertisement for candy.

✓ Yes. When I was a kid, I saw a TV advertisement for candy.

句子结构与时态混用问题（There be 使用不当）：原句开头的 Yes there is 与后面的过去时冲突，导致语义和时态错误。把“Yes”作为简短应答并移除多余的 there is，整体使用过去时 saw。建议简短肯定回答后用逗号或句号衔接过去时描述。

× The advertisement was cut for an phone and the characters in each other were lovely.

✓ The advertisement was cut like a short phone clip, and the characters were lovely with each other.

代词与表达不准确：原句中的 for an phone 不符合英语搭配，且 in each other 用法错误。把表达改为 like a short phone clip（像手机短片），并调整修饰语顺序。建议注意介词短语与代词的自然搭配。

× I watched her eat her many times.

✓ I watched her eat it many times.

代词使用错误：原句中 her 用于指代物品不当，第二个 her 也错误。应使用 it 指代 candy 或 the candy；若指人物用 her。建议理清先行词并用正确的人称代词或物代词。

× Yes, I see a lot of advertisement on the subway.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on the subway.

名词单复数错误：a lot of 后面的名词应为复数 advertisements，表示许多广告。建议记住 a lot of 后接可数名词要用复数形式。

× Most of advertisement for movies, apes or local services.

✓ Most of the advertisements are for movies, apps, or local services.

名词复数及冠词和拼写错误：advertisement 应为复数 advertisements，且需要定冠词 the 来指代前文提到的广告；apes 应为 apps。并补全系动词 are。建议注意可数名词复数形式、冠词使用与单词拼写。

× and they usually place her above the seats or near the door so they are hard to meet.

✓ They are usually placed above the seats or near the doors, so they are hard to miss.

代词和被动语态及词汇错误：原句中 place her 不合适，应使用被动语态 be placed 指广告被放置；doors 复数更合理；hard to meet 意思错误，应为 hard to miss（很难被忽视）。建议使用被动结构描述物品的放置位置并使用正确固定搭配。

× I usually prefer public service advertisements for example environmental protection compares or animal welfare because they improve people's awareness about ecofriendly.

✓ I usually prefer public service advertisements, for example environmental protection campaigns or animal welfare, because they improve people's awareness about eco-friendly practices.

量词与词汇选择错误：compares 应为 campaigns；eco friendly 应连字符 eco-friendly 并与 practices 搭配更自然；句子需要逗号分隔插入语且保持复数形式。建议学习常用搭配（environmental protection campaigns、eco-friendly practices）。

× like public service advertisement such as environmental protection campaigns or animal welfare as because they improve people's awareness about eco friendly practice.

✓ I like public service advertisements, such as environmental protection campaigns or animal welfare, because they improve people's awareness about eco-friendly practices.

句子结构混乱：开头缺少主语 I，重复使用连词 as because 不正确，应使用 because 引出原因；advertisement 应为复数 advertisements，eco friendly practice 改为 eco-friendly practices。建议确保主语出现、避免重复连词并使用正确的名词形式与搭配。