广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 内容直接回答了问题，但表达不够自然，存在语法和词汇错误，且句子冗长且重复。建议：1) 开头用一句简洁的主题句直接回答（Yes, I often do）。2) 用一到两句具体说明在哪些情境看到（e.g. browsing, social media, streaming videos）。3) 使用连接词减少重复并改进语法（e.g. before videos start, while browsing）。练习时注意动词形式和介词。

範例: Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer. For example, I encounter banners and pop-ups while browsing websites or using social media, and I usually have to watch short ads before streaming videos.

建議: 回答包含信息但表达笨拙且有语法错误，细节不够具体。建议：1) 先一句明确表示有印象的广告。2) 接着说明是哪类广告或哪个具体广告，并给出具体细节（例如角色、音乐或台词）。3) 使用连接词（because, so, and）使句子更连贯。避免重复词组。

範例: Yes, I remember some ads from CCTV when I was a child. One commercial had a catchy song and a cartoon character selling a snack, and the melody stuck in my head for years, which is why I can still recall it.

建議: 回答清晰但有语法错误与表达不自然之处。建议：1) 开头直接回答并简要说明原因。2) 给出对比并用具体例子（trains vs taxis）说明看到的位置（e.g. on seat backs, windows）。3) 注意时态和否定形式（I usually don't see...）。

範例: Not really, I usually don't see many ads on trains. However, in taxis it's common to find small posters or flyers attached to the back of the seats or on the windows.

建議: 内容想表达对有用广告的喜好，但表达混乱且语法错误多。建议：1) 用一句话明确表态（Yes/No/It depends）。2) 说明原因并举实例（useful product info, discounts）。3) 使用连词（because, for example）组织句子，避免重复。

範例: It depends — I like useful ads that provide product information or discounts. For example, when I'm looking to buy a kitchen appliance, an ad with clear specs and a special offer helps me decide.

建議: 回答有意思但未完成，语法与表达问题明显且缺乏完整结论。建议：1) 用一句完整的主题句说明偏好（I prefer food advertising）。2) 解释原因并给出具体细节（vivid images, appetizing descriptions）。3) 完成句子并控制长度不超过5句，使用连接词如 because, so, for example。

範例: I prefer food advertisements because vivid pictures and descriptions can make the food look appetizing. For example, a commercial showing fresh fruit being sliced and served often makes me want to buy it.

× Yes, I often see the advertisements where I use phone or computer to search information by the chop or watching television video or movies.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer to search for information, or when I watch videos or movies on television.

句中多处介词和介词短语使用不当："where I use phone or computer" 应表达时间或情境用 when；"by the chop" 似为拼写/词语错误且不合上下文，改为 "when I watch videos"；缺少介词短语连贯性，且需加所有格 "my phone"。建议：使用 when 引导时间状语，使用固定搭配 "search for information"，注意所有格和正确名词形式。

× There are always advertisements before I watched.

✓ There are always advertisements before I watch.

句子时态不一致：主句用一般现在时表示通常情况，应与时间状语从句保持现在时，因此不应使用过去式 "watched"。建议：描述经常发生的事用一般现在时，如 "before I watch"。

× Yes when I was a child I always watch channel CCTV too and at this channel it always displays advertisements which are very impressed for people.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I always watched CCTV channel, and that channel always showed advertisements which left a strong impression on people.

时态混用和词汇搭配错误：描述过去习惯应使用过去时 "watched"、"showed"；"very impressed for people" 用法错误，应为 "left a strong impression on people"。建议：过去习惯用过去时，短语 "leave an impression on" 用于表达给人留下印象。

× And until now I still remember some advertisements details from this from this channel.

✓ And even now I still remember some details of the advertisements from that channel.

主谓和名词短语结构问题："advertisements details" 词序错误，应为 "details of the advertisements"；重复短语 "from this from this" 必须删除。建议：注意名词短语的正确顺序及删除重复内容。

× No, when I was in the trains I always do not see any kinds of advertisements.

✓ No, when I was on trains I usually didn't see any kind of advertisements.

时态和介词使用错误：描述过去情况用过去时 "didn't see"；介词应为 "on trains"；"any kinds of advertisements" 不自然，改为 "any kind of advertisements" 或 "any advertisements"。建议：过去习惯用过去时，注意介词和名词单复数搭配。

× But if you say other transports like taxi sometimes I will see some advertisements on their chairs.

✓ But in other types of transport, like taxis, I sometimes see advertisements on the seatbacks.

介词和词语搭配问题："if you say" 不自然，改为更清晰的 "in other types of transport"；"taxi" 应复数 "taxis"；"on their chairs" 用词不当，指代座位后背应为 "on the seatbacks"。建议：使用更精确的名词词组并调整介词。

× Some kinds of advertisements I would like for example if I need something thing I always need know more details about this thing at at that time, if there are advertisements about which things I need, they can really help me to make a chance.

✓ I like some kinds of advertisements. For example, if I need something, I want to know more details about it at that time; if there are advertisements about the things I need, they can really help me make a choice.

形容词/副词和句子结构混乱："I would like" 在此处应分句表达为 "I like"；重复和词形错误（"something thing"、"at at"）；"make a chance" 用词错误，应为 "make a choice" 或 "take a chance" 根据语境选择。建议：简化句子，避免重复，使用正确搭配如 "make a choice" 和代词 "it" 指代前文名词。

× I think the advertising I like maybe is food because I like eating so if you display some kinds of fruit for me and they will make me so hungry and feel

✓ I think the advertising I like is probably about food because I like eating. If you show me pictures of fruits, they make me very hungry and feel tempted.

介词和句子结尾不完整："the advertising I like maybe is food" 语序和情态词位置不当，改为 "is probably about food"；"display some kinds of fruit for me" 更自然为 "show me pictures of fruits"；句子结尾不完整，需补充 "feel tempted" 或类似表达。建议：调整情态词位置，使用完整句子并补足省略的信息，选择更自然的动词搭配如 "show"。